| wyze2099 |
09-12-2006 12:33 AM |
Not a bad start. It doesn't seem to much like a movie trailer until near the end when "Sandstorm" was used and the cuts started coming faster.
Personally, I'd have used more of April's opening news monologue voiceover and intercut more clips of the crime wave from the beginning of the movie and various Foot scenes from later on, arranged to match what April is saying. Then the Shredder sequence would come next, with his speech about "...these CREATURES..." as a voiceover that leads to a bunch of shots with the Turtles. Then the action would have kicked in, pretty much the way it did toward the end of your trailer. That would've been my approach, for whatever that's worth (and if I had footage of the first movie, I'd definitely try to make a trailer or music video out of it).
But again, not a bad start. :)
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