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Lil G 05-03-2009 09:14 AM
My Raps
 
As some people here at the drome may know I rap. I started rapping about a year ago and started recording about half a year ago. When I record I use a free program called Audacity, and sometimes use Auto Tune and other plugins to make my voice sound a little more better. I do all my songs alone with no help from anybody, effects and all. Here are some of the songs I have made:

Understand

King Of Rap Music

Conglomerate Freestyle

Trix Are For Kids

Please take you time and listen to them.:D Also, here are the lyrics to the songs I have listed:

Understand-
Spoiler:
Its G and im back from my drought
I was born to rap but that wasn what I was taught
I just loved the music with rap i do survive
And the day I stop rappin is the day I lose my life
Im always making rhymes like mother goose and doctor seuss
And these other rappers my food and all i love to do is chew
I got my crew I move in the sqaudron
Make a couple bullet blasts and the jobs all done
So now me and my crews in this empty room all huddled
Makin plans to rise to the top like a space shuttle
They want me to rap I get a beatboxer
And make rhymes so ill i need ta see a doctor
I got girls on me they say Im fly flyer than a helicopter
If they say im icing to the cake then call me mr. betty crocker
The girls wanna kick it Ima kick it like soccor
Cuz im a beast like the loch ness monster
Im a kid makin raps just for the fun of it
Now im a kid makin jokes for the halibit
Makin cds and all im doin is sellin them
These other rapper glass and all im doin is breaking them

Boy im shinin like the sun
Karate kid wu tang im the chosen one
Started out so whack but look at what ive become
The boys hotter than a fresh honey bun
Call me g or call me kid
Im ill thats the truth never told a fib
Boy i got fizz like that soda
I aint wheezy no raspy voice like yoda
Im the bomb tick tick tock im bout to blow off
When i rap i mess around they say stop showin off
My flo is like water all it does is ripple
I hittin off these beats one two three and its a triple
Im ill isnt it official my rhymes strike like a punch and now you need a tissue
This songs ill put up the volume
At the highest at 102
Im a kid makin raps just for the fun of it
Now im a kid makin jokes for the halibit
Makin cds and all im doin is sellin them
These other rapper glass and all im doin is breaking them

Yeah kid im up in the game
Like MJ in the nba
Im the top rapper makin all the plays
Cuz the game went crazy so i went insane
The girl love me like a 30 cart ring
And im a 50 carat ring cuz im shinin like the rain
But like the sun i could turn so dark
Cuz i still keep it poppin like a pop tart
She holdin auditions she say i could play the part
So i play in the movie and movies called heart
She always sayin that i look so sharp
So that must mean im playin darts
She got buety so much art
She also got class so much smart
24 hours is the top we stay apart
She lookin like jessica simpson and i will be her bart




King Of Rap Music-
Spoiler:
I will never stop rappin i am the go boy
Makin money everyday im the pillsberry dough boy
These rappers make it rain but you know i make it snow boy
And if you dont believe me then why is it so cold boy
I rest my case so i step out of the court man
Stay in the game like Lebron so i am the sports man
Dunkin like donuts so go ahead and call me shaq
Got that nice apparel call me the men in black
DC mark eckos and you know i got them nikes
Steppin up on your block and i look o so mighty
Nice face nice size o yes shes a cutie
Shes your girlfriend so what she wants to be with me
And i know you jealous you is just a hater
But your girl love me so i tap that like a keyboard
You know she love my grind cuz i grind like a skateboard
She also love my raps cuz i spit like a retard

Im the king of rap music give me my crown
I own the rap city i own this town
Best around i know you love my sound
And i know you love me pound by pound
I aint talkin bout mula cuz ill talk by dollars
Cuz if money was my weight i would be over weight
But then the wait would be over
Becuz the weight is too much to wait for
I mean if you talkin bout minutes
Cuz ma mula to minutes leads to infinity
Hold on ima stop i bet your very confused
Im just sayin my money last forever like an indestructable tool
Dddddddddrrrrrrrr im makin holes in these other rappers carrers like a drill
And the pains so bad they fall like they sittin on the end of a window sill
So ill so sick so amazing its me
Call me mr crazy or call me lil g cuz im the

I am the king of rap music how you gon' beat me
Like i wave my hand in front of my face you can not see me
So that must mean im on that john cena crap
But yup i must be right cuz like him i do rap
But yea i also fight like im on the wwe
I punch in the eye and you wont be able to see
One punch and like camr'on you'll be down and out
But i sware ill do it like mama said knock you out
My flo is off the chain like a broken necklace
But my chains still shiny like the blad head of kevins ex
But when i rap i go crazy like if i was in a circus
Thats why everydays thanksgiving and these rappers just turkeys
Im not ill not sick there is no word to describe me
Magnificent amazing nope it still aint working
Crazy awesome the best
How could you describe me when i am


Trix Are For Kids-
Spoiler:
Yeah boy trix are for kids
And don't forget to close the cereal box lid
Yeah boy trix are for kids
So these silly rabbits need to stop hoppin
But im hoppin all up on these beats
Beats are my feast and i came to eat
Turkey chicken and kfc
Cuz beats are'nt boney and i just came for meat
How you gonna beat me if i am an assassain
I kill beats for plesure and this is my passion
The passion of the christ because i am the rap saviour
Rappin fast i got add watch my behaviour
But oh... I still go with the flo
Flames so hot red and yellow
Only two colors of the rainbow
But i aint eatin skittles
Boy im at the top and you just at the middle
Like frankie muniz you just malcom in the middle
But these other rappers at the bottom like your toenail
And me i got flo i make it float like a boat sail
Girls bid on me like an ebay sale
But they get parts no wholesale
But its like oh wow im so sick
Mr captain im just fighting off moby dick
Boy im just cannon so you like blast off
Thats a rocket take your mask off
Cuz we all know youre actin but the casts off
You say youre for real but turn the crap off
You aint ghetto neither or you ill
Now me im so ill you needa take a pill
Im a desiese like cancer
And you fallin like two broken legs and a dancer
It just dont add up
And if you do fall then chins up
Cuz you be depressed and you could stay sad
Or get up and stay glad just like those trashbags
But dont let that happen over and over
Just try to get lucky like a four leaf clover
But me yeah im a four ace player
And im stackin this solitaire layer by layer
Boy im so crazy you could call me magic
Cuz i got so much magic like daniel radcliffe
Im just the pheniox rising from ashes
Go head and add it up like logic
Or like money and you could deposit
Or withdrawl but i would diss ya'll
Or i would kil ya'll only if you was women
And if these girl could sing like john lennon
Then you know i'll collaborate
And we'll be bustin like respect my conglomerate
And i only got 4 minutes so im tockin it
I didnt blow yet and im still bombin it
Thats why you gotta respect my hustle
Im a sprout like a brussle growing mustle
But you know Lil g
13 a beast
If this was a compititon i would win
Because trix are for trix are for
Trix are for kids





I didn't post lyrics for the conglomerate freestyle because it was a freestyle and I didn't write it down. All the other ones I wrote down in about 45 minutes each. It take me about 1 hour to record and edit though, so in all i spend about 2 hours making a song. The lyrics are very sloppy written, but that's because when I write a song I rap fast and dont care about spelling because I'm trying to get it down before I lose the thought.:D

Peanut 05-03-2009 05:30 PM
I know adults should always encourage the youth to do better, but seriously, give it up. I don't think it would even be fair to LIE to you about this, or jokingly act like you've actually got talent. I feel it would actually hurt you, as a human being, in the future. These delusions cannot continue. Please stop.

Lil G 05-03-2009 05:43 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Peanut (Post 689462)
I know adults should always encourage the youth to do better, but seriously, give it up. I don't think it would even be fair to LIE to you about this, or jokingly act like you've actually got talent. I feel it would actually hurt you, as a human being, in the future. These delusions cannot continue. Please stop.
K look; I know where you're coming off of, but like I said I've only been rapping for a year. I'm going to get better than what I am now. And I'm not going to give it up. I have other things I'm good at such as art, computers, i could write stories (I dont do that a lot but a lot of teachers have told me im skilled at it:ohwell:), and sports. And a lot of people have told me im good at rap, but to me nobody else tells me how good i am. Im not aiming for a record deal. It dont matter what you think, i still feel proud of myself and will keep on going. I know im not great but in my mind im good.

jeff the cheff 05-03-2009 07:18 PM
Trix are for kids.....:lol:

Lil G 05-03-2009 07:28 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by jeff the cheff (Post 689488)
Trix are for kids.....:lol:
So what did you think of the songs....

Jester 05-03-2009 08:01 PM
I'd comment, but I'm already biased against rap music...

gobo 05-03-2009 08:04 PM
Rap is fa suckaz, yo. :evilgrin:

I plan to give 'em a listen eventually, but I'm not crazy about this genre either.

Mr. Snackpants 05-03-2009 10:06 PM
Where can I buy the CD yo?

Hannah 05-03-2009 11:16 PM
I challenge you to a RAP BATTLE.

thebrownranger 05-04-2009 09:52 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by jeff the cheff (Post 689488)
Trix are for kids.....:lol:
:lol::lol::lol::lol: Good one! And I'm not talking about the song!!

You sound like you're speaking so softly b/c you don't want your parents hearing you in your room:lol:

I really don't understand how rap could be considered music...:sick: Music sure has gone through a downward spiral of crap these days. ROCK N' ROLL!!!!!!

Peanut 05-04-2009 10:15 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by thebrownranger (Post 689637)
You sound like you're speaking so softly b/c you don't want your parents hearing you in your room:lol:

I really don't understand how rap could be considered music...:sick: Music sure has gone through a downward spiral of crap these days. ROCK N' ROLL!!!!!!
The last part about rap not being considered music is ignorant bullsh*t, but the part about him speaking softly is exactly what I thought.

Voltron 05-04-2009 11:59 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Peanut (Post 689462)
I know adults should always encourage the youth to do better, but seriously, give it up. I don't think it would even be fair to LIE to you about this, or jokingly act like you've actually got talent. I feel it would actually hurt you, as a human being, in the future. These delusions cannot continue. Please stop.
Frankly, I think you've over stepped your boundaries here, my friend. This young man may be pioneering a new frontier in rap. Personally, I would love to get more from you, Lil G. I'm with you: I have no idea how you do it.

Lil G 05-04-2009 01:33 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Voltron (Post 689658)
Frankly, I think you've over stepped your boundaries here, my friend. This young man may be pioneering a new frontier in rap. Personally, I would love to get more from you, Lil G. I'm with you: I have no idea how you do it.
Well, yeah I dont think Im the next big thing just yet. I have a couple more songs and freestyles to upload today, which I will do in about an hour. And the way I see it, I dont need to impress anyone. i need to impress myself. All my raps need to do is get by me. I dont give a horses ass about what anybody thinks of my raps. Im like an artist. First time artists start drawing to entertain theirselves. Then when somebody starts seeing their art, then people start liking it. Then they might make comic books, and they become famous. After they start regaining fans, they start making songs for the fans. And to me, Im an artist because of that. It goes by me and only me.

Quote:
Originally Posted by thebrownranger (Post 689637)
:lol::lol::lol::lol: Good one! And I'm not talking about the song!!

You sound like you're speaking so softly b/c you don't want your parents hearing you in your room:lol:

I really don't understand how rap could be considered music...:sick: Music sure has gone through a downward spiral of crap these days. ROCK N' ROLL!!!!!!
I didn't want them to hear me when I recorded these songs, I was in my room and I get embarassed when they hear me rap. But I record more when Im either home alone, or when everybodys sleeping. And Hannah, you serious????

Anarky 05-04-2009 01:59 PM
Hannah's our queen of rap. You should hear her "4:20 after school" and "Down with the OGs" freestyles. They're awesome. You'll have trouble against her since she'll slam you back to the stone age.

In any case, you should maybe focus on another genre to make your art in. You're not as awful as CWC is, but you're pretty hopeless, I'm afraid.

Hannah 05-04-2009 02:20 PM
No, I am not serious. You stutter and mumble. You messed up half of your own lyrics and didn't bother to go back and fix it.

TAKE ADVICE FROM THE TRUE RAP MASTER. You need to speak with emphasis.

Lil G 05-04-2009 02:22 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Hannah (Post 689694)
No, I am not serious. You stutter and mumble. You messed up half of your own lyrics and didn't bother to go back and fix it.

TAKE ADVICE FROM THE TRUE RAP MASTER. You need to speak with emphasis.
Aight aight, but my lyrics? How were they?Im going to change my lyrics as I realized i act like im to full of myself.... but i got it.

jeff the cheff 05-04-2009 02:40 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lil G (Post 689695)
Aight aight, but my lyrics? How were they? Im going to change my lyrics as I realized i act like im to full of myself.... but i got it
You sound like your so full of yourself because the music you listen to probably does the same thing and your trying to emulate it.

Wasn't impressed by the lyrics, but hearing a 12 year old in autotune rapping quietly so his parents don't hear him is hilarious, I'm sorry.

The Stryker 05-04-2009 02:51 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Jester (Post 689499)
I'd comment, but I'm already biased against rap music...
Big surprise.

I agree with Voltron's comments.

gobo 05-04-2009 03:05 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lil G (Post 689695)
i act like im to full of myself....
At least you had that going for you. I mean, that's the essence of rap. You just need a lotta work on your diction, sucka.

Peanut 05-04-2009 07:55 PM
F*CK ALL YA'LL TALKIN' SMACK ABOUT RAP! YOU AIN'T DOWN WITH THE OG'S *****'S!

MOTHA F*CKA'S! BITCH AIN'T KNOW WHAT HIT EM' WHEN IT DROPS IN! FOR REAL THOUGH! F*CKIN' C*CK SUCKAAAA! SHEEEEEEIT!

I've been playing 50 Cent: Blood on the Sand. :)


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