Why Not?
 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7ogprxLzLi4

recorded today, let me know what you all think.

Are the lyrics supposed to sound muddled compared to the guitar? All I hear is muffled mumbling. It almost sounds like the lyrics were played backward.

I see your flying colours
As they sail past my door
Flying colours
Just can’t take no more

You came to me
From a dream
I dreamt of you all my life
Can’t you see
What it seems
I want you for my wife

Just yesterday
You went away
And left me all alone
Please just stay
I need you for my own

thats if you need the lyrics to help understand it.

I think you need better recording equipment.

i agree with you on that one :) which im deff saving up for.

The guitar riff was fine...it was the vocals. Is there anyway to record them separately and mix them? Or is that what you did?

thats what i did, yea i need better mic, im getting some stuff soon, recording equipment is no penny though, but other then that i have to work with what i got for my passion.

well here is a new one, let me know if you think its better then the other one.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ie6UOk0AyWQ

also keep in mind these are just demo's and hopefully ill have the recording equipment i need soon.