| neatoman |
05-19-2020 06:48 PM |
While the first season is better than most of the subsequent episodes, I am not willing to call it "good" on closer inspection. All it really has that the other seasons don't are better fight scenes, less reliance on humor and some higher level of continuity. Arguably pacing too.
I can just go over some weirdness in terms of the writing. Not necessarily plotholes but certainly some strange parts that should have been handled better: - Characters tend to come to rather... Interesting conclusions. Such as assuming burglars were ninjas because they used... Japanese rope... Yeah, and I guess that if they used Swedish rope they had to be Vikings... I realise this particular instance might a joke but it sure as hell is not funny if that's the case.
- Hamato Yoshi flees to the US despite not having commited any real crime, just accused of planning a crime (in a rather clumsy and obvious set-up). There simply shouldn't be a need to flee to another country, he wouldn't be guilty in any proper court of law. Also there's the whole having money for a plane ticket but not getting a job to rent an aparment bit. A sewer should never be option 1.
- Having Splinter and Hamato Yoshi be the same character, even though it's incorrectly praised for "improving" the believability of Splinter knowing martial arts (even though there's well over a decade between his mutation in the comic and the start of story and he could have easily trained alongside the turtles in the gap), presents problems. The real big one is that it makes no sense for the Turtles to turn into humanoids because he touches them but for him to turn into a rat because of a previous interaction. While there are apologists for this, it still contradicts the rules established a few seconds earlier.
- Shredder has an army of robotic ninjas, so why send out common thugs for any purpose? He only does this once and a reason is never given. If the purpose was just to give Bebop and Rocksteady an origin, then the Zoo animals themselves would have worked out fine (more on that later). It could have been for the purpose of recreating the Turtles' introduction in the comics, but something tells me that wasn't much of a concern. The Robot Ninjas also replaced the human ninjas, clearly implying that Shredder values the robots more. Why he didn't just demote the former ninjas, who would be more skilled than random punks, is anyone's guess.
- On the subject of the robots, why dress them up as ninjas? Sure, disguising them as human might be a good idea but the point of that would be to have them blend in among crowds. If they're just wearing suspicious ninja outfits, what's the point of the disguise? At that point they might as well not even hide their appearence. Besides, it's the outfit that tips off Splinter as to where they come from. It really seems like the show clinged to the idea of the Foot Clan being ninjas even though it just ended up being a cosmetic aspect as a result of all this Technodrome/Dimension X nonsense, an aspect that just looks a bit confused.
- Shredder's method of attempting to kill Splinter with mutagen is bizarre. If he knew that it was mutagen, then the possibility of Hamato Yoshi turning into some dangerous monster is something he should have been aware of, at which point he would rule out the method and try something else. If he didn't know what the chemical was, then he was attempting to get rid of someone without knowing what he was doing, which is stupid. Even more importantly however, there wouldn't have been a need to kill him at all. He had a Technodrome which (despite seeming like a total piece of junk in the other seasons) is a powerful war machine, Hamato Yoshi was at that point a hobo with pet turtles and "has been with rats". He's hardly a threat in the first place.
- The Turtles are so worried that April will expose them to the outside world to the point of threatening to keep her prisoner at the start of the season. However, not only do they rather frequently walk around in broad daylight and ride around in a blimp, sometimes not even in disguise, but April does a newstory on them by the end. The mere fact that they're exposed to the world is treated like no big deal when it actually happens.
- The exact timeframe between Shredder meeting Krang, mutating the Turtles and the start of the series makes very little sense. Either the Turtles were trained in an extremely short timespan (like a week or so) or Shredder has been sitting on the Technodrome for way longer than we're meant to think (like 20 years). There's really no happy medium here either, as far as we can tell, the Technodrome offers the user the near instant ability to take over the world. And they say Splinter refining memories of martial arts in a decade is a stretch...
- On the topic of Shredder and Krang's relationship, there are a bunch of questions in regards to that. First off, how did they meet exactly? If Shredder just happened to stumble upon the Technodrome by accident, that would mean Krang just teamed up with the first human he came into contact with. If Krang sought out Shredder, why him? His intention is for a human to construct a body for him and his pick is a ninja? Wouldn't an engineer make more sense? He's clearly not interested in a long term alliance with a human (at least not in this season) as implied by his intention to let his army swarm the earth and crush it. Besides, the automated robot factory in the Technodrome would eliminate the need for an extra pair of hands, why take on an ally at all? There is also that point where he somehow managed to make it to the surface and rescues Mike without the help of a body... Also, you'd figure at least one episode out of the 180+ episodes that followed would do a flashback explaining any of this, which of course didn't happen. Don't know why Ninja Warlord meets Alien Brain would make for such a boring and unnecessary story in the minds of the writers, but I guess they felt that was a mundane and obvious scenario to them?
- Alright, now for Bebop and Rocksteady's origin. As said before, there really is no need for the human thugs to be mutated. The fact that the Turtles themselves started out as regular Turtles (that might not have been around for very long) makes it clear that the show has no problems with turning animals into humanoids. Which means that you might as well mutate the animals, no need for "volunteers". It's also pretty clear that they were tricked into mutating, so why aren't they resentful? There are also other mutants Shredder created but they never play any real part in the story. We see one of them get used for a demonstration of the anti-mutagen ray.
- Just adding another point here. All things considered, having the mutagen both turn animals into humanoids and humans into animal-men was a bit of a mistake. Partially for the reasons mentioned above but also because it breaks apart quite quickly, especially with the rules in place. The "last thing you touched" rule was already inconsistantly applied when the Turtles and Splinter mutated, but it really fails to take into account the abundance of lifeforms anything comes into contact with. Clothing is usully made of the tissue of other living things, you breathe in pollen all the time and let's not even get started on eating. If the idea is that the creature in question needs to be alive, then one might wonder about micro-organisms and parasites. And with the idea of the creatures still being alive, this also brings us to what happened to the Rhino and Warthog, what did Shredder do to them once he mutated Bebop and Rocksteady? This once again points to why the human thugs were just pointless middle-men because now we don't know where the animals went as they never went back to the zoo. Did Shredder kill them? Did he keep them around? Did he let them loose in the wild? Did they fuse to Bebop and Rocksteady? Were the humans just misdirection and the mutants were actually the animals all along? That last one might sound crazy but ignoring subsequent episodes were that clearly isn't the case, it could be the case for all we know in season 1, as I don't think they directly mention their origin for the rest of the season. Anyway, the point is that the changes to how the mutagen worked simply wasn't needed.
So the writing (and the show overall) was always bad. But it was more ambitious, so it at least gets props for trying a bit more early on.
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