The Technodrome Forums - My newest song!

Hello, everyone! Well... for some of my spare time i right music and lyrics with my band... and i wrote my newest song and i want to know your opinions, so here it tis...

From the distance I watch,
Thinking I'll never be seen,
Thinking I'll always be safe,
Not thinking of reality…

The days go on, I pass them by,
All I need to do is close my eyes,
Always staying in hiding,
Her beauty is very blinding,

I messed up big this time,
At first she won't notice me,
But when the bushes make a sound,
That's when I won't be around,

The days go on, I pass them by,
All I need to do is close my eyes,
Always staying in hiding,
Her beauty is very blinding,

Reality hitting on me,
I wanna run and hide and,
Never wanting this be,
I feel like I'm drowning in the quick sand…

The day is lost,
I am no longer watching her beauty,
I am sitting at home, writing a song about how she disappeared,
I am sitting at home, all alone without my heart…