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Originally Posted by oldmanwinters
Art on the last two pages looks great, Tony!
Dialogue seems to work well enough. Just try to remember that whenever a character's name is used in a direct address that it needs to be either followed, preceded, or enclosed by commas.
http://www.cliffsnotes.com/study_gui...Id-251323.html
That practice improves the clarity and readability of a sentence.
Dasha is female.  |
I know,dude,but there was not neuter term like "soul siblings". 
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Michelangelo: This looks like a job for the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles!
Raphael: Sheesh, Mikey this ain't a cartoon!
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