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Old 11-27-2012, 07:10 PM   #881
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Page 21 of Turncoat pt 4 is up

Thank you very much Red-Eyed Jaguar. Glad you like the comic. Keep ya eyes peeled as I have regular updates... like this one...

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Old 11-27-2012, 07:13 PM   #882
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Intense!

10 more pages and one of them might end up no more...
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Old 11-27-2012, 07:16 PM   #883
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Woah, Shredder's "Shoowsh" attack is especially deadly!
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Old 11-29-2012, 08:04 PM   #884
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Page 22 of Turncoat pt 4 posted.

Yup.. and its gonna get more bloody... (but not too much)

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Old 11-29-2012, 08:13 PM   #885
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So...you're just gonna stand there Saki as Splinter knocks out your holo-emitters, removing your advantage?

Nice stuff, Tony. That's just always bugged me in any media: "Why is the villain giving the hero enough time to do that?"
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Old 11-30-2012, 09:34 AM   #886
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That's just always bugged me in any media: "Why is the villain giving the hero enough time to do that?"
It's usually the other way around. The hero often hesitates, thus giving the villian a chance to act.
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Old 11-30-2012, 06:07 PM   #887
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It's usually the other way around. The hero often hesitates, thus giving the villian a chance to act.
But, see, that makes sense. A hero would be hesitant to kill, but a villain would have less reason for second thoughts.
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Old 12-02-2012, 04:04 PM   #888
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Turncoat pt 4 page 23 is up

Hi guys.. page 23 of turncoat pt 4 has been posted.

The holo emitters.. yes.. needed to get around that some how... I could of had shredder running around trying to stop him... but that would of dragged the scene out and it would of had the same concolusion anyway...

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Old 12-03-2012, 01:22 PM   #889
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O wow Tony, loving the new page. Too bad your story is almost done, such an awesome comic!
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Old 12-03-2012, 07:28 PM   #890
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Page 24 of Turncoat pt 4 is up.

Glad you liked it Buffy... as for it ending... I think I might be a bit relieved

In the meantime here’s page 24.

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Old 12-03-2012, 09:23 PM   #891
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Glad you liked it Buffy... as for it ending... I think I might be a bit relieved

In the meantime here’s page 24.

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Ouch, poor Mikey!
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Old 12-04-2012, 09:43 AM   #892
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Great minds think alike, I just got done having Raph use that sai "that way" in my fanfilm script (although not on any of his brothers thankfully). At least it's getting USED in this universe.

Great work Tony. As much as I have a problem with the story, I've never had a problem with the visuals, and you bring this comic to life brilliantly.
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Old 12-04-2012, 10:38 AM   #893
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I'm not sure if this is correct but I read somewhere that the Sai is primarily a defensive weapon? I used to own one and it was as blunt as hell. You had more chance of sticking a spoon through someone than that thing

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Old 12-04-2012, 04:41 PM   #894
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I'm not sure if this is correct but I read somewhere that the Sai is primarily a defensive weapon? I used to own one and it was as blunt as hell. You had more chance of sticking a spoon through someone than that thing

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Yeah, that's my understanding as well, but Mirage (and every other incarnation) pretty much let Raph use it like Wolverine's claws!
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Old 12-05-2012, 08:57 PM   #895
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page 25 up

Page 25 of Turncoat pt 4 posted.

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Old 12-05-2012, 08:59 PM   #896
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Nice twist, Tony. It's a good parallel with the scene at the end of Part 1.
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Old 12-05-2012, 10:43 PM   #897
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I can't wait to see how this will end!!!! Love the story so far
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Old 12-06-2012, 04:55 AM   #898
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Great twist in Raphael mentioning Leonardo's "anger issues". Hmmm...after seeing Raphael's regret in hitting April in page 25, it makes me curious to think how Raphael is going to react seeing Splinter beaten up by Shredder and how Raphael's emotions will be further torn and divided.

I'm always happy to see a new page posted up! Can't stop mentioning how great your work and this comic is Tony Day!
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Old 12-10-2012, 08:29 PM   #899
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Page 26 of turncoat pt 4 has been posted. More soon...

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Old 12-10-2012, 08:40 PM   #900
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The "SPLAT!" almost comes off as darkly comedic.
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