Turtle Turncoat - Page 46

*oldmanwinters* · 12-10-2012, 08:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jester

The "SPLAT!" almost comes off as darkly comedic.

haha, I thought that too. "Splat goes the rat" just has a very familiar ring to it.

Ah... poor Splinter.

Tony Day · 12-10-2012, 08:44 PM

yeah... i was thinking that myself... dont know if i should change it... but i've got no idea to what? Any suggestions?

Can't think of any other sound effect that sounds like a thump ending with the wet sound of blood.

*Coola Yagami* · 12-10-2012, 08:57 PM

I'm surprised he did that to poor Mikey. Maybe to Leo... but to Mikey? And then April? C'mon Raph. Stop being a douche.

*oldmanwinters* · 12-10-2012, 09:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

yeah... i was thinking that myself... dont know if i should change it... but i've got no idea to what? Any suggestions?

Can't think of any other sound effect that sounds like a thump ending with the wet sound of blood.

Well... it's a metal floor, right? Maybe you could just go with "Clang!"

**Jester** · 12-10-2012, 09:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by oldmanwinters

Well... it's a metal floor, right? Maybe you could just go with "Clang!"

"Clang"? Did you say, "clang"?

I'm really not sure what to use....not good with onomatopoei....or is it onomatopoeias?

Tony Day · 12-10-2012, 09:17 PM

its ok... changed it to something close enuf

Cheers for the input.

**Jester** · 12-10-2012, 09:19 PM

I can get with "Clunk", it's almost an homage in itself.

*Refractive Reflections* · 12-10-2012, 09:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

yeah... i was thinking that myself... dont know if i should change it... but i've got no idea to what? Any suggestions?

Can't think of any other sound effect that sounds like a thump ending with the wet sound of blood.

Maybe you could use two words "Clunk" and "Gush"...? For the wet slap of blood on the floor?

I found a couple of websites that have a list of onomatopoeia words that could help you in finding that word:

http://kathytemean.wordpress.com/200...eia-word-list/
http://www.poetandknowit.com/english...-examples.aspx

Hope those websites help.

Tony Day · 12-11-2012, 05:21 AM

thanx for that JLS... i'll have a look at them

Tony Day · 12-23-2012, 03:51 PM

Hi all. Page 27 is up.

Have a Merry Christmas everyone!!!

Tony

www.trydowave.com

*MikeandRaph87* · 12-23-2012, 03:53 PM

Merry Christmas, this story years in the making is almost over!

Raphael is about to take out Shredder. I can feel it.

I'm still mad at you for having Raphael stab Michleangelo though.*folds arms*

Tony Day · 12-27-2012, 06:13 PM

You might be right

Page 28 of turncoat pt 4 is up.

Laterz
Tony

www.trydowave.com

Mona_Lisa · 01-03-2013, 03:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

You might be right

Page 28 of turncoat pt 4 is up.

Laterz
Tony

www.trydowave.com

I love it!!!! Cool flashbacks

Tony Day · 01-03-2013, 06:40 PM

Thanx Mona Lisa... and... Happy 2013 everyone.. Page 29 of Turncoat pt 4 is up for viewing.

More to follow soon and more frequently now that the excesses of Christmas and the new-year are over...

(writing this as I still recover from a week long hangover!!!)

See u all soon.
Tony

www.trydowave.com

*oldmanwinters* · 01-03-2013, 06:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

Thanx Mona Lisa... and... Happy 2013 everyone.. Page 29 of Turncoat pt 4 is up for viewing.

More to follow soon and more frequently now that the excesses of Christmas and the new-year are over...

(writing this as I still recover from a week long hangover!!!)

See u all soon.
Tony

www.trydowave.com

Ha, ha, the fateful blow has been struck! Well done, Raphael!

*MikeandRaph87* · 01-03-2013, 06:46 PM

I meant to ask,what is up with the eye page on Raphael on the cover to part two?

It was obivious Raphael was going to end it,but I doubt he ended Shredder.

Tony Day · 01-03-2013, 07:29 PM

Hi Adam and MikeandRaph87. If you mean the kinda glowing white shine on Raphs eye? Don't know if you're familiar with the Neo Geo game Fatal Fury. They made a movie of it called Garō Densetsu (the motion picture). Loved this movie and still do and watched it to death when I was younger and heavily into my anime. Lots of characters have this glowing eye thing going on, (some kinda highlight from a lightsource such as a moon or whatever). A bit of Masami Ōbari styling.
IF you go to 6:30 you'll see an example here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PU4B-6isCAM

*MikeandRaph87* · 01-03-2013, 07:36 PM

When I read the whole thing straight through about two months or so ago,I thought Raphael was going to get a makeover to look like Future Raph!

Thanks for setting me straight. As far as anime goes I went no further than Pok'emon and Digimon's first three seasons so I am only familar with the more common facial expressions.

A bit off topic,but isn't it funny how Japanese cartoon characters are portrayed as being white and the Chinese look like sterotypical Asians i.e. Brock. Also, the bizarre hair coloring like blue and pink being natural colors. I got such a kick out of that back when I was in middle school in the anime heyday.

Tony Day · 01-04-2013, 07:48 PM

Page 30 of turncoat pt 4 is up...

Quote:

Originally Posted by MikeandRaph87

When I read the whole thing straight through about two months or so ago, I thought Raphael was going to get a makeover to look like Future Raph!

Thanks for setting me straight. As far as anime goes I went no further than Pok'emon and Digimon's first three seasons so I am only familar with the more common facial expressions.

A bit off topic,but isn't it funny how Japanese cartoon characters are portrayed as being white and the Chinese look like sterotypical Asians i.e. Brock. Also, the bizarre hair coloring like blue and pink being natural colors. I got such a kick out of that back when I was in middle school in the anime heyday.

Future Raph.. never heard of that one.. I’ll look it up. Pokemon. You came to anime alot later than me. I was watching stuff from the early 70s until around the late 90s. Pokemon era, for me, was when anime started to die (or I got older, one of the two).
As for the Japanese characters looking like westerners... this has always confused me. But it might go all the way back to when they we're plagiarising western animation like Disney. Talking about Osamu Tezuka and Astroboy etc.

Laterz
Tony
www.trydowave.com

*MikeandRaph87* · 01-04-2013, 08:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

Page 30 of turncoat pt 4 is up...

Future Raph.. never heard of that one.. I’ll look it up. Pokemon. You came to anime alot later than me. I was watching stuff from the early 70s until around the late 90s. Pokemon era, for me, was when anime started to die (or I got older, one of the two).
As for the Japanese characters looking like westerners... this has always confused me. But it might go all the way back to when they we're plagiarising western animation likr Disney. Talking about Osamu Tezuka and Astroboy etc.

Laterz
Tony
www.trydowave.com

Future Raphael from Archie Comics,he had an eye patch from an encounter with Armaggon, the future shark and a plain blue ball cap.
http://www.comicvine.com/future-raph...el/105-316179/

I only ventured into anime dated between 1998-2003 and the once a blue moon Pokemon episode after that. I always thought it was at anime was at its peak at that point with Toonami and Pok'emon and its cousins having waves of success.

12-10-2012, 08:44 PM	#902
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	yeah... i was thinking that myself... dont know if i should change it... but i've got no idea to what? Any suggestions? Can't think of any other sound effect that sounds like a thump ending with the wet sound of blood. Last edited by Tony Day; 12-10-2012 at 08:49 PM.

12-10-2012, 08:57 PM	#903
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12-10-2012, 09:19 PM	#907
Jester Rat-faced Dude-guy Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Arkansas Posts: 26,301	I can get with "Clunk", it's almost an homage in itself. __________________ "Clearly, you're Ninja Turtling incorrectly." - Leo656

12-23-2012, 03:51 PM	#910
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Page 27 of Turncoat Pt 4 is up Hi all. Page 27 is up. Have a Merry Christmas everyone!!! Tony www.trydowave.com

12-23-2012, 03:53 PM	#911
MikeandRaph87 Jedi Master Join Date: Dec 2011 Location: JLA Satellite Headquarters Posts: 11,188	Merry Christmas, this story years in the making is almost over! Raphael is about to take out Shredder. I can feel it. I'm still mad at you for having Raphael stab Michleangelo though.folds arms __________________ Michelangelo: This looks like a job for the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles! Raphael: Sheesh, Mikey this ain't a cartoon!

12-10-2012, 09:17 PM	#906
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	its ok... changed it to something close enuf Cheers for the input.

12-11-2012, 05:21 AM	#909
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	thanx for that JLS... i'll have a look at them

12-27-2012, 06:13 PM	#912
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	page 28 up You might be right Page 28 of turncoat pt 4 is up. Laterz Tony www.trydowave.com

01-03-2013, 06:40 PM	#914
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	page 29 up Thanx Mona Lisa... and... Happy 2013 everyone.. Page 29 of Turncoat pt 4 is up for viewing. More to follow soon and more frequently now that the excesses of Christmas and the new-year are over... (writing this as I still recover from a week long hangover!!!) See u all soon. Tony www.trydowave.com

01-03-2013, 06:46 PM	#916
MikeandRaph87 Jedi Master Join Date: Dec 2011 Location: JLA Satellite Headquarters Posts: 11,188	I meant to ask,what is up with the eye page on Raphael on the cover to part two? It was obivious Raphael was going to end it,but I doubt he ended Shredder. __________________ Michelangelo: This looks like a job for the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles! Raphael: Sheesh, Mikey this ain't a cartoon!

01-03-2013, 07:29 PM	#917
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Hi Adam and MikeandRaph87. If you mean the kinda glowing white shine on Raphs eye? Don't know if you're familiar with the Neo Geo game Fatal Fury. They made a movie of it called Garō Densetsu (the motion picture). Loved this movie and still do and watched it to death when I was younger and heavily into my anime. Lots of characters have this glowing eye thing going on, (some kinda highlight from a lightsource such as a moon or whatever). A bit of Masami Ōbari styling. IF you go to 6:30 you'll see an example here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PU4B-6isCAM

01-03-2013, 07:36 PM	#918
MikeandRaph87 Jedi Master Join Date: Dec 2011 Location: JLA Satellite Headquarters Posts: 11,188	When I read the whole thing straight through about two months or so ago,I thought Raphael was going to get a makeover to look like Future Raph! Thanks for setting me straight. As far as anime goes I went no further than Pok'emon and Digimon's first three seasons so I am only familar with the more common facial expressions. A bit off topic,but isn't it funny how Japanese cartoon characters are portrayed as being white and the Chinese look like sterotypical Asians i.e. Brock. Also, the bizarre hair coloring like blue and pink being natural colors. I got such a kick out of that back when I was in middle school in the anime heyday. __________________ Michelangelo: This looks like a job for the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles! Raphael: Sheesh, Mikey this ain't a cartoon!