Ninjara redesign

persephohi · 03-21-2003, 04:17 PM

Okay, so it's not a HUGE redesign, I just changed a few things and streamlined her a bit. I always thought she was rather cool, and when my Turtles obsession reared up again I just started redesigning old characters for the sake of fun. Her origin got a little makover as well, but that's neither here nor there in regards to the picture.

Feedback is appreciated as I'm pathetic and need love. Vindicate meeee!

http://www.geocities.com/deadpool69612/ninjaraclr.jpg

--Bevin[/url]

CookSux · 03-21-2003, 04:19 PM

BTW the BBCode is [URL] instead of [LINK].. and I can't see it yet... stupid geocities.

persephohi · 03-21-2003, 04:21 PM

Yeah, I just got the code thing. Sheesh, too many codes to remember. *brain fries* Yeah, I hate Geocities, but I'm poor and can't afford to buy my own server yet. Blah. What helps, though, is copying and pasting the URL, for some reason. Dont' ask me why.

--Bevin

**Kali** · 03-21-2003, 04:29 PM

Geocities doesn't allow direct linking of images. Many free sites don't. I know, I've got a couple sites on Geocities myself, you always have to copy and paste images.

Of course, now I'm getting a transfer overload error, so I'll check back later.

Donatello02 · 03-21-2003, 04:50 PM

WHOA That's a cool Ninjara!

*kyabetsu* · 03-21-2003, 04:53 PM

damn. that's hot stuff. i'm MOST impressed.

oooo... funky....

CookSux · 03-21-2003, 04:59 PM

Hey, that's pretty good. Her face is a little too wolf like tho, but not bad not bad. Bigger boobies would look nice too

The brown however does look a little too saturated for the picture, but then again it could just be me.

Dontebell · 03-21-2003, 05:22 PM

nice pic.
hey can you draw her with raphael?

*cqb101* · 03-21-2003, 06:24 PM

Cool pic........

*Jephael* · 03-21-2003, 06:35 PM

That is very nice artwork. Kinda looks like one of the egyptian characters in #32 of the original Mirage series

persephohi · 03-21-2003, 09:55 PM

Donatello02, Kyabetsu, cqb101-- Thanks!

CookSux-- Thanks, and yeah she looks a little wolfish but I really don't draw animals so I just kinda fake it instead of looking at references like I should. I'm lazy.

dontelbell-- I'm actually just finishing one that I rather like. I'll post it when I get to my scanner.

Jephael-- Sadly, I don't have that issue. I need more of the old Mirage stuff, I only have the four compilations of the first issues and then another compilation of some later issues that involved the leech guy.

Thanks for the responses, everyone!

--Bevin

Shadow · 03-21-2003, 10:07 PM

she reminds me of the egyptian dog images you see in artifacts from old.

**HorseTechie** · 03-21-2003, 10:18 PM

Oh, I like this style of Ninjara too. Dos have that egyptian styling, come to think of it.

And... I think her boobs are fine. If they were any bigger, she would have to worry about nicking one (considering the pose she's in). j/k!

~~Leo656~~ · 03-21-2003, 11:19 PM

Y'know HT, sometimes I wonder just which of us is more screwed up.

Not that that's a BAD thing, mind you.

CookSux · 03-22-2003, 02:17 AM

I think the reason it looks so "Egyptian" to you guys is because the head looks like the Jackel's head... and she needs some boobs, to look somewhat more asthetically pleasing. Regardless, it's the head that throws everyone off. It's a perfectly good head, but I can't see it being a female's...

**Kali** · 03-22-2003, 05:52 PM

Wow, I like the style. The head does look a bit jackal/Egyptian-ish to me, and it does throw the aesthetics off a bit. But other than that, the composition and coloring is great.

*Nickokapo* · 03-22-2003, 06:50 PM

I agree, she needs boobs!

or you could leave them out too, that way people would actually check the whole drawing and not just that

Well as i said in the other drawing i like how ninjara looks

she seems a bit skinny but that's just me.
Good job

persephohi · 03-24-2003, 02:48 AM

You men and your boobies.

She does actually have some, it's just difficult to tell with her arm placement and the coloring job I did. I'll make sure you see them in the next picture.

Getting a lot of Egyptian comments so I think it's time for me to hit the drawing board and modify her a bit. Been doing WAY too much kitsune research for people to be thinking she's some kind of Japanese jackal or something.

Thanks for all the feedback, guys, it's a big help.

--Bevin

*Duke* · 03-25-2003, 02:03 AM

Nice drawing but i'm with the others who thinks she looks alot like an egyptian jackel and she does need some boobs. But other than that its a very well drawn pic.

persephohi · 03-25-2003, 03:18 AM

I'm so tempted to draw her with shockingly disproportioned boobs now it's not even funny.

But I will work on the things people have mentioned.

--Bevin

03-21-2003, 04:17 PM	#1
persephohi Thug Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 73	Ninjara redesign Okay, so it's not a HUGE redesign, I just changed a few things and streamlined her a bit. I always thought she was rather cool, and when my Turtles obsession reared up again I just started redesigning old characters for the sake of fun. Her origin got a little makover as well, but that's neither here nor there in regards to the picture. Feedback is appreciated as I'm pathetic and need love. Vindicate meeee! http://www.geocities.com/deadpool69612/ninjaraclr.jpg --Bevin[/url] __________________ “Well we know what to get you for Christmas: a double lobotomy and ten rolls of rubber wallpaper." --Red Dwarf

03-21-2003, 04:19 PM	#2
CookSux Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Sparta Posts: 928	BTW the BBCode is [URL] instead of [LINK].. and I can't see it yet... stupid geocities. __________________ http://http://cooksux.deviantart.com/ http://www.xanga.com/cooksux http://www.myspace.com/cooksux

03-21-2003, 04:50 PM	#5
Donatello02 Stone Warrior Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 503	WHOA That's a cool Ninjara! __________________ 'What ninja weapon did Don get? A stickball bat. Hey, you can call it a 'bo'. But you can call it a Ford Tempo too...it's still just a stick.'

03-21-2003, 04:59 PM	#7
CookSux Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Sparta Posts: 928	Hey, that's pretty good. Her face is a little too wolf like tho, but not bad not bad. Bigger boobies would look nice too The brown however does look a little too saturated for the picture, but then again it could just be me. __________________ http://http://cooksux.deviantart.com/ http://www.xanga.com/cooksux http://www.myspace.com/cooksux

03-21-2003, 06:24 PM	#9
cqb101 Cinephile Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Salem, MA Posts: 8,489	Cool pic........ __________________ Facebook

03-21-2003, 04:21 PM	#3
persephohi Thug Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 73	Yeah, I just got the code thing. Sheesh, too many codes to remember. brain fries Yeah, I hate Geocities, but I'm poor and can't afford to buy my own server yet. Blah. What helps, though, is copying and pasting the URL, for some reason. Dont' ask me why. --Bevin __________________ “Well we know what to get you for Christmas: a double lobotomy and ten rolls of rubber wallpaper." --Red Dwarf

03-21-2003, 04:29 PM	#4
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Geocities doesn't allow direct linking of images. Many free sites don't. I know, I've got a couple sites on Geocities myself, you always have to copy and paste images. Of course, now I'm getting a transfer overload error, so I'll check back later.

03-21-2003, 04:53 PM	#6
kyabetsu Foot Elite Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: under my hat Posts: 4,393	damn. that's hot stuff. i'm MOST impressed. oooo... funky....

03-21-2003, 05:22 PM	#8
Dontebell Stone Warrior Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Flint,Mi Posts: 819	nice pic. hey can you draw her with raphael?

03-21-2003, 06:35 PM	#10
Jephael That whack job behind you Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Carlisle, Pennsylvania Posts: 8,143	That is very nice artwork. Kinda looks like one of the egyptian characters in #32 of the original Mirage series __________________ "I like it. Simple, but effective!" Raphael; The Mean Machines - 1988

03-21-2003, 09:55 PM	#11
persephohi Thug Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 73	Donatello02, Kyabetsu, cqb101-- Thanks! CookSux-- Thanks, and yeah she looks a little wolfish but I really don't draw animals so I just kinda fake it instead of looking at references like I should. I'm lazy. dontelbell-- I'm actually just finishing one that I rather like. I'll post it when I get to my scanner. Jephael-- Sadly, I don't have that issue. I need more of the old Mirage stuff, I only have the four compilations of the first issues and then another compilation of some later issues that involved the leech guy. Thanks for the responses, everyone! --Bevin __________________ “Well we know what to get you for Christmas: a double lobotomy and ten rolls of rubber wallpaper." --Red Dwarf

03-21-2003, 10:07 PM	#12
Shadow Hench Mutant Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 489	she reminds me of the egyptian dog images you see in artifacts from old.

03-21-2003, 10:18 PM	#13
HorseTechie Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Midwest Posts: 5,677	Oh, I like this style of Ninjara too. Dos have that egyptian styling, come to think of it. And... I think her boobs are fine. If they were any bigger, she would have to worry about nicking one (considering the pose she's in). j/k!

03-21-2003, 11:19 PM	#14
~~Leo656~~ Banned Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: nWo Country Posts: 27,703	Y'know HT, sometimes I wonder just which of us is more screwed up. Not that that's a BAD thing, mind you.

03-22-2003, 02:17 AM	#15
CookSux Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Sparta Posts: 928	I think the reason it looks so "Egyptian" to you guys is because the head looks like the Jackel's head... and she needs some boobs, to look somewhat more asthetically pleasing. Regardless, it's the head that throws everyone off. It's a perfectly good head, but I can't see it being a female's... __________________ http://http://cooksux.deviantart.com/ http://www.xanga.com/cooksux http://www.myspace.com/cooksux

03-22-2003, 05:52 PM	#16
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Wow, I like the style. The head does look a bit jackal/Egyptian-ish to me, and it does throw the aesthetics off a bit. But other than that, the composition and coloring is great.

03-22-2003, 06:50 PM	#17
Nickokapo Emperor Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Argentina Posts: 5,802	I agree, she needs boobs! or you could leave them out too, that way people would actually check the whole drawing and not just that Well as i said in the other drawing i like how ninjara looks she seems a bit skinny but that's just me. Good job __________________

03-24-2003, 02:48 AM	#18
persephohi Thug Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 73	You men and your boobies. She does actually have some, it's just difficult to tell with her arm placement and the coloring job I did. I'll make sure you see them in the next picture. Getting a lot of Egyptian comments so I think it's time for me to hit the drawing board and modify her a bit. Been doing WAY too much kitsune research for people to be thinking she's some kind of Japanese jackal or something. Thanks for all the feedback, guys, it's a big help. --Bevin __________________ “Well we know what to get you for Christmas: a double lobotomy and ten rolls of rubber wallpaper." --Red Dwarf

03-25-2003, 02:03 AM	#19
Duke Mad Scientist Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 1,913	Nice drawing but i'm with the others who thinks she looks alot like an egyptian jackel and she does need some boobs. But other than that its a very well drawn pic.

03-25-2003, 03:18 AM	#20
persephohi Thug Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 73	I'm so tempted to draw her with shockingly disproportioned boobs now it's not even funny. But I will work on the things people have mentioned. --Bevin __________________ “Well we know what to get you for Christmas: a double lobotomy and ten rolls of rubber wallpaper." --Red Dwarf