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*Tetsu Deinonychus* · 09-16-2003, 11:57 PM

I wrote a Gundam Wing fan-fiction recently that absolutely BOMBED! Not a single reply!

Anyway, could any Gundam fans here tell me what might be wrong with it?
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*Kid Icarus* · 09-17-2003, 07:10 AM

wow.... thats was... um...

well, it fits duo's personality

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*Tetsu Deinonychus* · 09-17-2003, 09:47 AM

That's what I figured.

*Raven* · 09-17-2003, 10:20 AM

it was ok, I liked it.

09-16-2003, 11:57 PM	#1
Tetsu Deinonychus The Iron Dinosaur Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Studio Snowlion HQ Posts: 3,021	Desperately Seeking Feedback!!! I wrote a Gundam Wing fan-fiction recently that absolutely BOMBED! Not a single reply! Anyway, could any Gundam fans here tell me what might be wrong with it? Just click here __________________ (Image hosting by Postimage.org) And here's a list of all my old wacky threads!

09-17-2003, 09:47 AM	#3
Tetsu Deinonychus The Iron Dinosaur Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Studio Snowlion HQ Posts: 3,021	That's what I figured. __________________ (Image hosting by Postimage.org) And here's a list of all my old wacky threads!

09-17-2003, 10:20 AM	#4
Raven follower of Jesus Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 6,212	it was ok, I liked it. __________________ TMNT Future Despair Deviant Offical Ultimate Ninja Turtles Site!

09-17-2003, 07:10 AM	#2
Kid Icarus Foot Elite Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Angel Land Posts: 4,150	wow.... thats was... um... well, it fits duo's personality .