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The Angel Queen · 12-18-2002, 03:58 PM

i was going through some of my old note books and found a bunch of poems that i wrote a couple years ago !!! and i foun this a couple raely good ones (in my opion any way) all the good ones i looked at made a few changes to make them better and on a couple i made a hole new version!! the poem that im going to put up is called Hope ! im going to post the original version first and then put up the second version later on !

Hope

Dark and silent but still I sing,
I sing of joy and peace,
I sing of hope and freedom,
Yet there is none.
I wish and pray for the day,
I want the night to end,
I want to see the daylight again.

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12-18-2002, 03:58 PM	#1
The Angel Queen Hench Mutant Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: WEIRSDALE Posts: 451	read and tell me what you think. i was going through some of my old note books and found a bunch of poems that i wrote a couple years ago !!! and i foun this a couple raely good ones (in my opion any way) all the good ones i looked at made a few changes to make them better and on a couple i made a hole new version!! the poem that im going to put up is called Hope ! im going to post the original version first and then put up the second version later on ! Hope Dark and silent but still I sing, I sing of joy and peace, I sing of hope and freedom, Yet there is none. I wish and pray for the day, I want the night to end, I want to see the daylight again. __________________ Michael