Turtle Turncoat

[Tony Day]

Thanx Zarius for the comments about the pics. May I enquire to what you mean about the tone? Was it a certain part, or generally? Apart from the violence I never really thought that Turncoat was too dark. Compared to other things I've seen online anyway. Everythings still very colourful and their is a sense of hope. If I remember right I read a fanfic once that had raph as an alcoholic or something. Now that was dark. Alan (the writer) prefers the darker stuff to me, (along with the military stuff).

Originally Posted by ZariusTwo

as you get older you kind of outgrow the "every cartoon from your childhood has to be violent and dark in fanfiction" phase

I completely agree with this point. And I have since it became fashionable years back.
I wouldn't mind throwing the odd knucklehead in the mix now and then but I don't think he would appreciate it much. At the end of the day its a compromise. I need Al as he's a far superior writer to me. Otherwise it will go back to the days of part 1 where everyone was saying: "hey! lets go!" and "Hey, **** you Leo" etc. I used to draw the pictures before writing the story and then shove any old crap dialogue in

Laterz.

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p.s. That has to be one of the longest responses ever