Turtle Turncoat - Page 18

Tony Day · 04-01-2009, 01:53 PM

glad to hear its working Raphael

Thanx Adam for the info, ive corrected it now. It was really late last night when i was doing the text and i just copied it directly from Alans script. Didnt even bother to spell check it as hes an excellent speller. Now and then he gets some of the names wrong, for example it was channel 5 in the script not channel 6. He also got Aprils name wrong. The"'whos" thing was my fault

Actually its all my fault i should have spell checked it

... Ive just realised somthing... the whole first speech bubble is a typo, god I must of been tired. Im correcting it now. Have a look back soon to see the real thing...

*oldmanwinters* · 04-01-2009, 02:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

glad to hear its working Raphael

Thanx Adam for the info, ive corrected it now. It was really late last night when i was doing the text and i just copied it directly from Alans script. Didnt even bother to spell check it as hes an excellent speller. Now and then he gets some of the names wrong, for example it was channel 5 in the script not channel 6. He also got Aprils name wrong. The"'whos" thing was my fault

Actually its all my fault i should have spell checked it

... Ive just realised somthing... the whole first speech bubble is a typo, god I must of been tired. Im correcting it now. Have a look back soon to see the real thing...

Much better! But why is April thankful the police haven't released any information?

**Jester** · 04-01-2009, 02:11 PM

He said he's fixing that too...

Tony Day · 04-01-2009, 02:21 PM

Page 40 with proper script is now up.

Laterz all, and thanx for spotting that Adam.

*oldmanwinters* · 04-01-2009, 02:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jester

He said he's fixing that too...

Ah, it makes perfect sense now! No Bebop going postal this time around is a good thing!

EDIT: Oops, I spotted one more typo.... "armed raider" should be pluarl. :silly:

Tony Day · 04-01-2009, 03:19 PM

aHH crap!!!!! Its not my day is it... oh well, im taking a break and having a cuppa tea before i correct it again.
Cheers again Adam.

Tony Day · 04-01-2009, 05:06 PM

Right! done. Page 40 is corrected and up. Phew

Tony Day · 04-24-2009, 02:00 AM

Hi folks... Page 41 of Turncoat is up.

www.trydowave.com

Buffy · 04-24-2009, 07:50 AM

Hi Tony, loving the update as always!

*Whitewolf89* · 04-24-2009, 02:00 PM

Just read the new page, and it is cool!

But WOW! Splinter really came down on Leo in the next-to-the-last panel, didn't he?! I was just like...WHOA! Angry Sensei, much?!

Looks like out of the whole family, only Leo and Mikey don't seem to want Raph back, but at least Donnie does. *huggles Donnie sympathetically* Or at the very least, HE'S willing to take respionsiblity for what happened between the three of the and Raph a year ago. (And here I'VE always thought that, no matter the TMNT universe, LEO was the resonsible, level-headed one! How WRONG one can be, it seems..........)

Anyway, Tony, I'm still loving this, and PLEASE update soon, okay? I wanna see the family's reaction to what Splinter said in those last two panels! Methinks that I know a couple of Turtles who MIGHT just be in a WEE bit of shock right now over that..............

*oldmanwinters* · 04-26-2009, 12:24 AM

Another great scene, Tony. Like the others have said; I can't wait for the next part.

**Jester** · 04-26-2009, 09:10 AM

Great page...but there's an extra "e" in one of the "him"s...Mikey's balloon in the 3rd Panel. "I'm not really sure I want hime around..."

*oldmanwinters* · 04-27-2009, 07:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jester

Great page...but there's an extra "e" in one of the "him"s...Mikey's balloon in the 3rd Panel. "I'm not really sure I want hime around..."

Maybe Mikey is taking up a German accent?

*Sounds like "heim!"*

Just kidding.

Tony Day · 04-27-2009, 07:29 PM

Cheers...im correcting now. Update coming soon.

Tony Day · 04-27-2009, 09:02 PM

fixed it now, thanx for spotting the mistake

Tony Day · 05-04-2009, 04:08 AM

sorry bout the long wait guys, ive done the layout and the next page will be up soon.

*oldmanwinters* · 05-05-2009, 08:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

sorry bout the long wait guys, ive done the layout and the next page will be up soon.

Oh, happy day!

Buffy · 05-07-2009, 01:16 AM

Woohoo!

Tony Day · 05-11-2009, 06:36 AM

Page 42 is up on my site now...

Talk soon.
Tony
www.trydowave.com

Tony Day · 05-12-2009, 07:31 AM

Hi all, heres another update... next page is up.

Laterz
Tony
www.trydowave.com

04-01-2009, 01:53 PM	#341
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	glad to hear its working Raphael Thanx Adam for the info, ive corrected it now. It was really late last night when i was doing the text and i just copied it directly from Alans script. Didnt even bother to spell check it as hes an excellent speller. Now and then he gets some of the names wrong, for example it was channel 5 in the script not channel 6. He also got Aprils name wrong. The"'whos" thing was my fault Actually its all my fault i should have spell checked it ... Ive just realised somthing... the whole first speech bubble is a typo, god I must of been tired. Im correcting it now. Have a look back soon to see the real thing... Last edited by Tony Day; 04-01-2009 at 02:00 PM.

04-01-2009, 02:11 PM	#343
Jester Rat-faced Dude-guy Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Arkansas Posts: 26,301	He said he's fixing that too... __________________ "Clearly, you're Ninja Turtling incorrectly." - Leo656

04-01-2009, 02:21 PM	#344
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Update. Page 40 with proper script is now up. Laterz all, and thanx for spotting that Adam.

04-24-2009, 02:00 AM	#348
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Page 41 up Hi folks... Page 41 of Turncoat is up. www.trydowave.com

04-24-2009, 07:50 AM	#349
Buffy Mad Scientist Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: where am I? Posts: 1,472	Hi Tony, loving the update as always! __________________ Forgiveness is divine, but never pay full price for late pizza.

04-01-2009, 03:19 PM	#346
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	aHH crap!!!!! Its not my day is it... oh well, im taking a break and having a cuppa tea before i correct it again. Cheers again Adam.

04-01-2009, 05:06 PM	#347
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Right! done. Page 40 is corrected and up. Phew

04-24-2009, 02:00 PM	#350
Whitewolf89 Freedom Fighter and Ninja Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Currently residing in the Turtles' Lair, NYC sewer system, NYC, NY Posts: 2,927	Just read the new page, and it is cool! But WOW! Splinter really came down on Leo in the next-to-the-last panel, didn't he?! I was just like...WHOA! Angry Sensei, much?! Looks like out of the whole family, only Leo and Mikey don't seem to want Raph back, but at least Donnie does. huggles Donnie sympathetically Or at the very least, HE'S willing to take respionsiblity for what happened between the three of the and Raph a year ago. (And here I'VE always thought that, no matter the TMNT universe, LEO was the resonsible, level-headed one! How WRONG one can be, it seems..........) Anyway, Tony, I'm still loving this, and PLEASE update soon, okay? I wanna see the family's reaction to what Splinter said in those last two panels! Methinks that I know a couple of Turtles who MIGHT just be in a WEE bit of shock right now over that.............. __________________ Brother against brother........... Last edited by Whitewolf89; 04-26-2009 at 01:53 PM.

04-26-2009, 12:24 AM	#351
oldmanwinters Overlord Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Between yesterday and tomorrow! Posts: 15,511	Another great scene, Tony. Like the others have said; I can't wait for the next part. __________________ Experience the TMNT Fan Commentaries! Check out my TMNT fan comic, "Nothing to Fear"! View my sketch work! I'm selling some of my hard-to-find TMNT items!

04-26-2009, 09:10 AM	#352
Jester Rat-faced Dude-guy Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Arkansas Posts: 26,301	Great page...but there's an extra "e" in one of the "him"s...Mikey's balloon in the 3rd Panel. "I'm not really sure I want hime around..." __________________ "Clearly, you're Ninja Turtling incorrectly." - Leo656

04-27-2009, 07:29 PM	#354
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Cheers...im correcting now. Update coming soon.

04-27-2009, 09:02 PM	#355
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	fixed it now, thanx for spotting the mistake

05-04-2009, 04:08 AM	#356
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	sorry bout the long wait guys, ive done the layout and the next page will be up soon.

05-07-2009, 01:16 AM	#358
Buffy Mad Scientist Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: where am I? Posts: 1,472	Woohoo! __________________ Forgiveness is divine, but never pay full price for late pizza.

05-11-2009, 06:36 AM	#359
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	turncoat page 42 Page 42 is up on my site now... Talk soon. Tony www.trydowave.com Last edited by Tony Day; 05-11-2009 at 09:33 AM.

05-12-2009, 07:31 AM	#360
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	page 43 is up Hi all, heres another update... next page is up. Laterz Tony www.trydowave.com

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