Turtle Turncoat

[Tony Day]

Just planning the layout for the ending (7 pages in all) and I have come to this conclusion. It isn't enough. I fitted the story in there OK but not in a satisfying way. Key, important plot points and scenes are explained in one pages each. It has the rushed ending feel of most animes!!! If I end it like that it will cheapen the whole project. Put too many hours in to let that happen and i've done it before with previous comics.

So... me and Alan are creating Part 4. Just did it now in fact on the phone (the idea anyway). It will be called Turncoat the Final Battle (ala 'V ) Not part 4. And it will be much shorter. Comprising of the fight, and the endings. Part 3 will now have lots of build up and a cliffhanger ending. Looks like I'll be doing this for a little longer than planned. Just wish there were more hours in the day

Laterz
Tony

www.trydowave.com

P.s. Off to draw Final battle cover as I have no script yet....