Turtle Turncoat - Page 40

**Jester** · 07-18-2012, 10:07 PM

Good luck finding a new probably better job, Tony.

Love the call back to Shredder is Splintered on the last page.

Tony Day · 07-21-2012, 12:47 PM

hi. page 56 is up.
laterz
tony

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*oldmanwinters* · 07-21-2012, 06:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

hi. page 56 is up.
laterz
tony

www.trydowave.com

Splaaaaaaaash Page!

Tony Day · 07-24-2012, 07:03 PM

Hi Jester. Hi Adam. Page 57 is up

Stay tuned... more on the way soon.

Tony

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*Redeemer* · 07-24-2012, 07:49 PM

Really great Tony!!! Loving the story

Spoiler:

Buffy · 07-25-2012, 02:29 AM

Awesome stuff, can't wait to read the rest!

Mona_Lisa · 07-25-2012, 02:13 PM

I hope Raph becomes "A good Guy" again!!! Love the story.

Tony Day · 07-25-2012, 07:09 PM

Thanx Buffy. Thanx Mona Lisa. Posted another page btw

Redeemer... needed a plot device to get the turtles into the technodrome, we thought about that for a long time and decided on Baxter and we tried to avoid them just strolling into the enemies stronghold like they used to in the old toon.

Tony

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Tony Day · 07-29-2012, 07:14 PM

Hi again dudes and dudettes. Page 59 of TTpt3 is up

Hope you like.
More coming soon.

Tony

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Tony Day · 07-31-2012, 09:10 PM

Page 60 of TTpt3 is up.

More soon

Tony

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*oldmanwinters* · 07-31-2012, 09:20 PM

Re: Page 57. I'm not sure how I'm supposed to interpret this one. Is Raphael angry that the Foot, Bebop, and Rocksteady have failed or is he angry at himself for aligning with them?

Oh, how the tension builds!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

Page 60 of TTpt3 is up.

More soon

Tony

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Tony, you're getting me so psyched for the conclusion!

A couple of grammatical corrections, though.

"Casey's team has performed"

"Saki is unlikely to be taken unaware."

Tony Day · 07-31-2012, 10:10 PM

Hi Adam mate. Page 57 had some very specific stuff in it...
the original layout went like this, as written by alan:

Scene: Raph passes through chamber from previous fight. Tunneler is still on floor though Beebop and Rocksteady are missing. Beebops glasses lay to the side. He kneels over the gruesome corpses of a couple of Ninja Foot. Horror then anger pass through his mind. It didnt have to come to this. Finally he resignedly leaves the chamber. Whilst there is no dialogue, leave it to the reader to decide what is going on in his head at the moment.

It;s really hard for me to get this ambiguity over to the reader (not to mention me not having the skill for that kind of subtlety no doubt

.

Cheers for the corrections... I’ll get on to them tomorrow.

nite nite

P.s. Spelling mistakes corrected today.

Tony Day · 08-01-2012, 05:24 PM

Page 61 of TTpt3 is up

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*oldmanwinters* · 08-01-2012, 07:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

Page 61 of TTpt3 is up

www.trydowave.com

Holy cow, Tony, you're on a roll all of a sudden!

I sense an issue ending cliffhanger coming up in the next page or so!

Spoiler:

*Master Splinter* · 08-01-2012, 08:15 PM

This thing is amazing so far. You have been on a roll for sure.

-ms

Tony Day · 08-01-2012, 08:51 PM

Hi guys. I know what you mean i'd normally be having a 3 month break right about now lol. But not this time

The last panel is really meant to be two. One with shredder and one with the flood lights switching on. I can see the problem, i use black borders and both panels are in total darkness. I'll fix it tommrow so its easier to follow.

Laterz

*oldmanwinters* · 08-01-2012, 08:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

The last panel is really meant to be two. One with shredder and one with the flood lights switching on. I can see the problem, i use black borders and both panels are in total darkness. I'll fix it tommrow so its easier to follow.

Laterz

Oh! I can see that now; thanks for clearing up the confusion!

Tony Day · 08-03-2012, 03:18 PM

Hi all... Page 62 is now up. Hope you like it.

This page finally closes this chapter of Turtle Turncoat. Phew... took long enough

I also corrected the borders on page 61 and added a goodbye/to be continued message on page 63.

After the weekend i'm going to get to work on the front cover of Pt4. Turtle Turncoat - The Final Battle.

More on its way soon

Tony

www.trydowave.com

*oldmanwinters* · 08-03-2012, 04:18 PM

I'll tell ya what like like most about the promise of a "Final Battle" issue...

Another awesome cover by Tony!

Also, the panel correction makes it look much clearer.

*ZariusTwo* · 08-11-2012, 02:11 PM

Yoo-hoo, I'm back. It's been a while since I looked at "Turncoat"...partially because I didnt agree with where the tone of the story was going, plus as you get older you kind of outgrow the "every cartoon from your childhood has to be violent and dark in fanfiction" phase.. I mainly look at it for the pictures now and they are very pretty indeed.

07-18-2012, 10:07 PM	#781
Jester Rat-faced Dude-guy Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Arkansas Posts: 26,301	Good luck finding a new probably better job, Tony. Love the call back to Shredder is Splintered on the last page. __________________ "Clearly, you're Ninja Turtling incorrectly." - Leo656

07-21-2012, 12:47 PM	#782
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	page 56 of ttpt3 up hi. page 56 is up. laterz tony www.trydowave.com

07-24-2012, 07:03 PM	#784
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Page 57 of TTPt3 is up Hi Jester. Hi Adam. Page 57 is up Stay tuned... more on the way soon. Tony www.trydowave.com

07-24-2012, 07:49 PM	#785
Redeemer Technodrome Technician Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: third earth Posts: 4,737	Really great Tony!!! Loving the story Spoiler: I swore it was Raph leaking the intel, I didn't think Baxter would play such a major roll __________________ GT:Reedeamer *THE TECHNODROME REDESIGN 2015* http://forums.thetechnodrome.com/showthread.php?t=51594

07-25-2012, 02:29 AM	#786
Buffy Mad Scientist Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: where am I? Posts: 1,472	Awesome stuff, can't wait to read the rest! __________________ Forgiveness is divine, but never pay full price for late pizza.

07-25-2012, 02:13 PM	#787
Mona_Lisa Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: North Carolina Posts: 516	I hope Raph becomes "A good Guy" again!!! Love the story. __________________

07-25-2012, 07:09 PM	#788
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Page 58 of TTPt3 is up Thanx Buffy. Thanx Mona Lisa. Posted another page btw Redeemer... needed a plot device to get the turtles into the technodrome, we thought about that for a long time and decided on Baxter and we tried to avoid them just strolling into the enemies stronghold like they used to in the old toon. Tony www.trydowave.com Last edited by Tony Day; 07-25-2012 at 07:21 PM.

07-29-2012, 07:14 PM	#789
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Page 59 of TTpt3 is up Hi again dudes and dudettes. Page 59 of TTpt3 is up Hope you like. More coming soon. Tony www.trydowave.com

07-31-2012, 09:10 PM	#790
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Page 60 of TTpt3 is up Page 60 of TTpt3 is up. More soon Tony www.trydowave.com

07-31-2012, 10:10 PM	#792
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Hi Adam mate. Page 57 had some very specific stuff in it... the original layout went like this, as written by alan: Scene: Raph passes through chamber from previous fight. Tunneler is still on floor though Beebop and Rocksteady are missing. Beebops glasses lay to the side. He kneels over the gruesome corpses of a couple of Ninja Foot. Horror then anger pass through his mind. It didnt have to come to this. Finally he resignedly leaves the chamber. Whilst there is no dialogue, leave it to the reader to decide what is going on in his head at the moment. It;s really hard for me to get this ambiguity over to the reader (not to mention me not having the skill for that kind of subtlety no doubt . Cheers for the corrections... I’ll get on to them tomorrow. nite nite P.s. Spelling mistakes corrected today. Last edited by Tony Day; 08-01-2012 at 05:36 AM.

08-01-2012, 05:24 PM	#793
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Page 61 of TTpt3 is up Page 61 of TTpt3 is up www.trydowave.com

08-01-2012, 08:15 PM	#795
Master Splinter 幸 - 愛 - 思う Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: St. Louis Posts: 2,824	This thing is amazing so far. You have been on a roll for sure. -ms __________________

08-01-2012, 08:51 PM	#796
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Hi guys. I know what you mean i'd normally be having a 3 month break right about now lol. But not this time The last panel is really meant to be two. One with shredder and one with the flood lights switching on. I can see the problem, i use black borders and both panels are in total darkness. I'll fix it tommrow so its easier to follow. Laterz

08-03-2012, 03:18 PM	#798
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Hi all... Page 62 is now up. Hope you like it. This page finally closes this chapter of Turtle Turncoat. Phew... took long enough I also corrected the borders on page 61 and added a goodbye/to be continued message on page 63. After the weekend i'm going to get to work on the front cover of Pt4. Turtle Turncoat - The Final Battle. More on its way soon Tony www.trydowave.com

08-03-2012, 04:18 PM	#799
oldmanwinters Overlord Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Between yesterday and tomorrow! Posts: 15,510	Re: page 62 I'll tell ya what like like most about the promise of a "Final Battle" issue... Another awesome cover by Tony! Also, the panel correction makes it look much clearer. __________________ Experience the TMNT Fan Commentaries! Check out my TMNT fan comic, "Nothing to Fear"! View my sketch work! I'm selling some of my hard-to-find TMNT items!

08-11-2012, 02:11 PM	#800
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 22,508	Yoo-hoo, I'm back. It's been a while since I looked at "Turncoat"...partially because I didnt agree with where the tone of the story was going, plus as you get older you kind of outgrow the "every cartoon from your childhood has to be violent and dark in fanfiction" phase.. I mainly look at it for the pictures now and they are very pretty indeed. __________________ Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks

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