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**Kali** · 03-29-2002, 12:39 PM

Awww... I don't want you to go. You must promise to drop by ever now and then. Promise.

Or, in the very least, get a lot of writing done on break.

SeaThreePeeO · 03-29-2002, 01:43 PM

Noooooo Don't go Machias!

We will miss you! Be sure to pop back soon as you can!

*Updates Updates Updates*

I have placed the credits on Popcorn, in case anyone feels the need to be bored to death.

I have also updated Death by Boredom. First one to spot a typo wins a prize!

**Kali** · 03-29-2002, 04:32 PM

Ooh, I was thanked! *hugs Nun*

Is there really a prize? 'Cause if there isn't, I never saw that tense error.

Oh man, I can't believe you need me to tell you this. Or maybe you don't, maybe you planned for this already. "She pulled a piece of cord though the belt loops and knotted it as best she could."

You KNOW that rope's getting cut. Or maybe it'll just come undone, on purpose or accident, whatever. The pants have GOT to drop. Cat calls and whistles will follow.

Fortunately, I was rarely grounded, so I really have no idea what it's like. It would be funny to watch one of them go stir crazy, pretending to hallucinate and bugging the hell out of the others. I'm sure the guys know all the escape routes and nooks that April has no idea about. Or maybe Splinter told her about those.

**azure turtle** · 03-29-2002, 06:24 PM

Quote:

Just be glad she's drawing Las Vegas Azure and not Playturtle Pin-up Azure.

Ahhh!

I am not a Playturtle!!
*pouts*
And I haven't read all the fic updates yet. Cursed parents won't let me stay online for more than an hour at a time. Grrr... I shall get to it eventually. And Machias, you better return soon! I don't know how to control the gift of TK that you gave me...
*a nearby vase floats in the air before dropping on the ground, shattering into a million pieces*
See what I mean!
*quickly runs out of the thread*

**HorseTechie** · 03-29-2002, 07:43 PM

Hay... come back here! It's your turn to update!

*sends a Ninja Nazgul after Azure to retrieve him*

So when will your next chapter to Azure's Adventures be up, huh?

In the meanwhile, I posted a funny quickie in FF.net...
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=689018

**azure turtle** · 03-29-2002, 09:14 PM

*gets dragged back, kicking and screaming*
My turn to update? Aww man...well, I've still got chapter four in very rough form. Hopefully it'll be up sooner than later. And I read that LOTR/TMNT parody you posted. That was too funny! I loved Shredder's line about being different colors!
*laughs 'til he turns blu...err, pink*
Heh heh heh...it still makes me laugh just thinking about it.
*wipes away a tear*

**Kali** · 03-29-2002, 09:20 PM

Yeah, that was great. Weird, but funny. And I'm not even that familiar with the book.

**azure turtle** · 03-29-2002, 10:37 PM

Me too! I haven't read the book (yet), but I did see the movie. Most of those scenes were in the movie, which helped me understand the story a little better. I'm still snickering over some of the lines...heh heh.

Yes! I just spent a couple of hours in front of the comp catching up on fanfics. A wonderful two hours, it was! And I got mentioned in Nun's credits for Popcorn! Really, you flatter this humble turtle, Nun

Thanks.
*gives Nun a chocolate chip cookie*
_________________
"God, I love being a turtle!"
Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence?....come visit me at my Lair

<font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: azure turtle on 2002-03-30 03:21 ]</font>

SeaThreePeeO · 03-30-2002, 01:37 AM

Quote:

On 2002-03-29 18:32, Kali wrote:

I'm sure the guys know all the escape routes and nooks that April has no idea about. Or maybe Splinter told her about those.

Grrrrrr! What are you? A mind reader? Oh well, great minds think a like.

I was musing with the idea of April losing a bit of modesty. But I was wondering if that was a bit too silly.

Thank you Azure for the lovely Choc Chip cookie. I hate to tell you this, but I am not a normal woman in the fact that I can't stand chocolate! Maybe plain or rasin next time?

*Skeletoncrew* · 03-30-2002, 02:44 AM

Oooh...I'll take your chocolate chip cookie if you like! I'll give you all the oatmeal, peanut butter, sugar, hobnobs, or whatever cookies you want!

I'll letcha know if I have any ideas for you Nun. Unfortunately I was a goody-two shoes...so I was never grounded.

So no one has any suggestions for comments Raph might make about Mike?!

(BTW, I finally watched the last of American Pie 2. By interesting coincidence the name I had settled on for my werewolf is also Stifler's Mom's name!)

**HorseTechie** · 03-30-2002, 10:21 AM

...*lol*

SeaThreePeeO · 03-30-2002, 10:25 AM

*Gives choc chip cookie to SC*

For some reason I can't think of any good oneliners or phrases for Raphael to come out with. Oh well, wait until you have finished the chapter and then I will think of some good ones. Sod's law as always!

*Skeletoncrew* · 03-30-2002, 01:01 PM

Whoo-hoo! Thanks for the cookie!

Oh well, I can always change it later. You know, most of my reviews say "Poor Mikey". Personally I've been thinking "poor Splinter". He's got 4 young males and one hot chick (as Raph thinks of her) to deal with now!

**Kali** · 03-30-2002, 01:16 PM

Personally, I think Mike, Splinter, and the wolf-girl all deserve a little sympathy. Mike because of his embarrassment and the ribbing he's gonna get from his brothers, the girl because of her embarrassment and that she has to deal with four teenaged guys, and Splinter for having to deal with all of it.

As for suggestions, a simple "What's up?" from Raph as soon as Mike gets out of the shower.

*Skeletoncrew* · 03-30-2002, 01:33 PM

*ROTFL*

Thats great!!! I've made a note of that for when Mike finally shows his face.

**azure turtle** · 03-30-2002, 09:14 PM

Ooh, the possibilities! I can't wait to read your next chapter, SC!

Nun, I can't believe you don't like chocolate chip cookies! But it's okay; everyone's got their own likes and dislikes

Here, have a nice raisin oatmeal cookie instead.
*gives Nun a raisin oatmeal cookie*
Now...about April's situation. I say have Don accidentally do something to April! He's the pacifist of the group and would never do something terrible to her on purpose. I can't think of anything right now, but it would be funny to see Don's reaction to April's ranting and raving. Just a thought.

*Skeletoncrew* · 03-31-2002, 01:30 AM

I can't wait to read my next chapter too!

Kinda funny that I'm able to laugh at parts of my own story when I re-read it. I STILL love the bit about Raph not being totally housebroken.

Its in the works...maybe...maybe...I'll get it done tonight!

**azure turtle** · 03-31-2002, 02:11 AM

*gasps*
Tonight??
*drools in anticipation*
I can hardly wait!
*spins around on his shell*

*Skeletoncrew* · 03-31-2002, 02:42 AM

Its up! (The new chapter that is. This was not a cruel Mikey reference.

)
And no cliffhanger this time! I had intended to go farther in this chapter, but I'm trying to keep the size of each chapter about the same.

Anyone have any pointers on how to know what to consider a "chapter"?

**azure turtle** · 03-31-2002, 09:37 PM

Ooh, I've got to read that later!
*makes a mental note*
About chapters....I've always had at least one major event occur in each of my chapters before ending it. That's just my two cents

03-29-2002, 09:14 PM	#186
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	gets dragged back, kicking and screaming My turn to update? Aww man...well, I've still got chapter four in very rough form. Hopefully it'll be up sooner than later. And I read that LOTR/TMNT parody you posted. That was too funny! I loved Shredder's line about being different colors! laughs 'til he turns blu...err, pink Heh heh heh...it still makes me laugh just thinking about it. wipes away a tear __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

03-30-2002, 02:44 AM	#190
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Oooh...I'll take your chocolate chip cookie if you like! I'll give you all the oatmeal, peanut butter, sugar, hobnobs, or whatever cookies you want! I'll letcha know if I have any ideas for you Nun. Unfortunately I was a goody-two shoes...so I was never grounded. So no one has any suggestions for comments Raph might make about Mike?! (BTW, I finally watched the last of American Pie 2. By interesting coincidence the name I had settled on for my werewolf is also Stifler's Mom's name!) __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

03-30-2002, 01:01 PM	#193
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Whoo-hoo! Thanks for the cookie! Oh well, I can always change it later. You know, most of my reviews say "Poor Mikey". Personally I've been thinking "poor Splinter". He's got 4 young males and one hot chick (as Raph thinks of her) to deal with now! __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

03-30-2002, 01:33 PM	#195
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	ROTFL Thats great!!! I've made a note of that for when Mike finally shows his face. __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

03-30-2002, 09:14 PM	#196
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Ooh, the possibilities! I can't wait to read your next chapter, SC! Nun, I can't believe you don't like chocolate chip cookies! But it's okay; everyone's got their own likes and dislikes Here, have a nice raisin oatmeal cookie instead. gives Nun a raisin oatmeal cookie Now...about April's situation. I say have Don accidentally do something to April! He's the pacifist of the group and would never do something terrible to her on purpose. I can't think of anything right now, but it would be funny to see Don's reaction to April's ranting and raving. Just a thought. __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

03-29-2002, 12:39 PM	#181
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Awww... I don't want you to go. You must promise to drop by ever now and then. Promise. Or, in the very least, get a lot of writing done on break.

03-29-2002, 01:43 PM	#182
SeaThreePeeO Mad Scientist Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: The Void Posts: 1,345	Noooooo Don't go Machias! We will miss you! Be sure to pop back soon as you can! Updates Updates Updates I have placed the credits on Popcorn, in case anyone feels the need to be bored to death. I have also updated Death by Boredom. First one to spot a typo wins a prize!

03-29-2002, 04:32 PM	#183
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Ooh, I was thanked! hugs Nun Is there really a prize? 'Cause if there isn't, I never saw that tense error. Oh man, I can't believe you need me to tell you this. Or maybe you don't, maybe you planned for this already. "She pulled a piece of cord though the belt loops and knotted it as best she could." You KNOW that rope's getting cut. Or maybe it'll just come undone, on purpose or accident, whatever. The pants have GOT to drop. Cat calls and whistles will follow. Fortunately, I was rarely grounded, so I really have no idea what it's like. It would be funny to watch one of them go stir crazy, pretending to hallucinate and bugging the hell out of the others. I'm sure the guys know all the escape routes and nooks that April has no idea about. Or maybe Splinter told her about those.

03-29-2002, 07:43 PM	#185
HorseTechie Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Midwest Posts: 5,677	Hay... come back here! It's your turn to update! sends a Ninja Nazgul after Azure to retrieve him So when will your next chapter to Azure's Adventures be up, huh? In the meanwhile, I posted a funny quickie in FF.net... http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=689018

03-29-2002, 09:20 PM	#187
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Yeah, that was great. Weird, but funny. And I'm not even that familiar with the book.

03-29-2002, 10:37 PM	#188
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Me too! I haven't read the book (yet), but I did see the movie. Most of those scenes were in the movie, which helped me understand the story a little better. I'm still snickering over some of the lines...heh heh. Yes! I just spent a couple of hours in front of the comp catching up on fanfics. A wonderful two hours, it was! And I got mentioned in Nun's credits for Popcorn! Really, you flatter this humble turtle, Nun Thanks. gives Nun a chocolate chip cookie _________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence?....come visit me at my Lair <font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: azure turtle on 2002-03-30 03:21 ]</font>

03-30-2002, 10:21 AM	#191
HorseTechie Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Midwest Posts: 5,677	...lol

03-30-2002, 10:25 AM	#192
SeaThreePeeO Mad Scientist Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: The Void Posts: 1,345	Gives choc chip cookie to SC For some reason I can't think of any good oneliners or phrases for Raphael to come out with. Oh well, wait until you have finished the chapter and then I will think of some good ones. Sod's law as always!

03-30-2002, 01:16 PM	#194
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Personally, I think Mike, Splinter, and the wolf-girl all deserve a little sympathy. Mike because of his embarrassment and the ribbing he's gonna get from his brothers, the girl because of her embarrassment and that she has to deal with four teenaged guys, and Splinter for having to deal with all of it. As for suggestions, a simple "What's up?" from Raph as soon as Mike gets out of the shower.

03-31-2002, 01:30 AM	#197
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	I can't wait to read my next chapter too! Kinda funny that I'm able to laugh at parts of my own story when I re-read it. I STILL love the bit about Raph not being totally housebroken. Its in the works...maybe...maybe...I'll get it done tonight! __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

03-31-2002, 02:11 AM	#198
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	gasps Tonight?? drools in anticipation I can hardly wait! spins around on his shell __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

03-31-2002, 02:42 AM	#199
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Its up! (The new chapter that is. This was not a cruel Mikey reference. ) And no cliffhanger this time! I had intended to go farther in this chapter, but I'm trying to keep the size of each chapter about the same. Anyone have any pointers on how to know what to consider a "chapter"? __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

03-31-2002, 09:37 PM	#200
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Ooh, I've got to read that later! makes a mental note About chapters....I've always had at least one major event occur in each of my chapters before ending it. That's just my two cents __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!