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**Kali** · 03-31-2002, 09:45 PM

Yeah. I go into a chapter writing around a specific event. I may do two to three scenes, depending on what I want to get across. Most of the time my stories take place in more than one place, with several events happening in the same amount of time. That can get confusing.

*Skeletoncrew* · 03-31-2002, 11:45 PM

Yeah, I felt awkward doing that several scenes different places thing. Oh well, I'm working on it.

SeaThreePeeO · 04-01-2002, 07:57 AM

Hello there!

More UPDATES!

I have finally found Bundle of Trouble in the vast computer black hole. I have updated it, so tell me what you think. I have also uploaded the first part to a new story, Gas Stations. But wait, there's more! As soon as I have finished typing it up, the first part to Scariest place on earth? will be up.

Hmmmmm strange?! For weeks nothing, then BAM! Inspiration!

**azure turtle** · 04-01-2002, 09:51 AM

LOL! I know what you mean, Nun! Sometimes inspiration hits you like a train. I've been getting a lot of ideas for fics lately (TMNT and non-TMNT), but I don't know how I'm going to get to all of them.

I agree that describing changes in scenes is kinda awkward. So far, everything in my fic takes place in one location in each chapter. But that has to change for some of the upcoming stuff...

SeaThreePeeO · 04-01-2002, 01:40 PM

Oh yes, oh yes, oh yes!

I have now uploaded The Scariest Place On Earth!

So go give it a look see and tell me what you think!

*Skeletoncrew* · 04-01-2002, 03:14 PM

Oh you cruel woman! I want to hear Raph and Don explain "solicitation"!!!

I've gotta run now...I'll R and R everything later!

**azure turtle** · 04-01-2002, 04:59 PM

Woah, more stories from Nun! I shall read them when I get the chance!

SeaThreePeeO · 04-02-2002, 12:12 AM

Quote:

On 2002-04-01 17:14, Skeletoncrew wrote:
Oh you cruel woman! I want to hear Raph and Don explain "solicitation"!!!

Oh come on! Michaelangelo is a turtle of the world. He lives in New York. I am quite sure he knows what solicitation is!

He was just questioning its appearence on the list.

*Skeletoncrew* · 04-02-2002, 03:04 AM

Ahhh...okay. I thought of that possibility too. I just leaned towards maybe you were going the "dumb" angle with him. Personally I've always figured that he must have a rather good vocabulary, given that he's a writer.

SeaThreePeeO · 04-02-2002, 05:53 AM

I have never thought of Michaelangelo as 'dumb' and I can't understand why some people do. Just because someone acts the fool doesn't mean they are one banana shy of a bunch. From what I know about hyperactive and immature people, they tend to be very intelligent.

He is no more dumb than Raphael is a heartless, uncaring psyco.

*Climbs back into her box before she starts something off*

Ps. new chapters of gas staions and the scariest place on earth up already!

**HorseTechie** · 04-02-2002, 11:12 AM

Yeah.. it was the cartoon and the TNM that sort of dumped on Mike's intelligence factor. However, it does take smarts to be as creative and charismatic as he is.

Hrmm.. and it's also time for me to update the FicArchive again!
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**azure turtle** · 04-02-2002, 07:47 PM

Update already? Looks like HT's ready to do some spring cleaning.

Have fun!

*Skeletoncrew* · 04-03-2002, 01:05 AM

Hey all! Just wanted to let you know that I've added about a page more to Chapter 7. So if you're wondering whether or not Janine remembers the things that happened while she was a wolf...go read it!

SeaThreePeeO · 04-03-2002, 02:34 AM

*Rushes off to read it*

No one seems to be reviewing my new stories.

Oh well, I'm enjoying writing them.

*Skeletoncrew* · 04-03-2002, 01:16 PM

D'oh! I'm bad about reviewing. I usually read the stories when I don't have much time...so then I run off thinking "I'll do the review later." Then I forget.

*pauses*

What was I talking about?

**azure turtle** · 04-03-2002, 01:40 PM

Oops...sorry 'bout not reviewing lately. School started a lot faster than I anticipated. I already feel like I'm behind, and it's only the third day

I promise to read through everyone's fics and leave reviews when I get the time!

BTW, I did review Disconnection after I read it during spring break.

SeaThreePeeO · 04-03-2002, 01:58 PM

Thank you for the review Azure.

I didn't mean people from here, just people in general.

I don't like Disconnection too much, Bundle of Trouble is better. I am thinking about rewriting Disconnection.

**azure turtle** · 04-03-2002, 04:43 PM

Well, I liked Disconnection, but you're the author. Change it if you must

I'll just make sure to read it again!

**HorseTechie** · 04-03-2002, 05:38 PM

Aww... yeah.. it kinda sucks when ppl don't review stories on FF.net, Nikki. I had some fics up there for *years*... and they hardly get any comments! But I know they are being read, cause the ppl who realy like them email me instead.

But.. I'm also one of those lazy ppl who read something, but don't post reviews much. Or if I posted a review once I wait a few chapters more before I post another one so I can say something really good.

**Kali** · 04-04-2002, 09:28 AM

New chapter time again! A nice little flashback from Midori's point of view. It's what she's saying to Leo, but I didn't add in his questions and comments. I hope you can understand the effect I was going for. It's up on FF.net, or my site in just a few minutes.

03-31-2002, 11:45 PM	#202
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Yeah, I felt awkward doing that several scenes different places thing. Oh well, I'm working on it. __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

04-01-2002, 09:51 AM	#204
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	LOL! I know what you mean, Nun! Sometimes inspiration hits you like a train. I've been getting a lot of ideas for fics lately (TMNT and non-TMNT), but I don't know how I'm going to get to all of them. I agree that describing changes in scenes is kinda awkward. So far, everything in my fic takes place in one location in each chapter. But that has to change for some of the upcoming stuff... __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-01-2002, 03:14 PM	#206
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Oh you cruel woman! I want to hear Raph and Don explain "solicitation"!!! I've gotta run now...I'll R and R everything later! __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

04-01-2002, 04:59 PM	#207
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Woah, more stories from Nun! I shall read them when I get the chance! __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-02-2002, 03:04 AM	#209
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Ahhh...okay. I thought of that possibility too. I just leaned towards maybe you were going the "dumb" angle with him. Personally I've always figured that he must have a rather good vocabulary, given that he's a writer. __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

03-31-2002, 09:45 PM	#201
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Yeah. I go into a chapter writing around a specific event. I may do two to three scenes, depending on what I want to get across. Most of the time my stories take place in more than one place, with several events happening in the same amount of time. That can get confusing.

04-01-2002, 07:57 AM	#203
SeaThreePeeO Mad Scientist Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: The Void Posts: 1,345	Hello there! More UPDATES! I have finally found Bundle of Trouble in the vast computer black hole. I have updated it, so tell me what you think. I have also uploaded the first part to a new story, Gas Stations. But wait, there's more! As soon as I have finished typing it up, the first part to Scariest place on earth? will be up. Hmmmmm strange?! For weeks nothing, then BAM! Inspiration!

04-01-2002, 01:40 PM	#205
SeaThreePeeO Mad Scientist Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: The Void Posts: 1,345	Oh yes, oh yes, oh yes! I have now uploaded The Scariest Place On Earth! So go give it a look see and tell me what you think!

04-02-2002, 05:53 AM	#210
SeaThreePeeO Mad Scientist Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: The Void Posts: 1,345	I have never thought of Michaelangelo as 'dumb' and I can't understand why some people do. Just because someone acts the fool doesn't mean they are one banana shy of a bunch. From what I know about hyperactive and immature people, they tend to be very intelligent. He is no more dumb than Raphael is a heartless, uncaring psyco. Climbs back into her box before she starts something off Ps. new chapters of gas staions and the scariest place on earth up already!

04-02-2002, 11:12 AM	#211
HorseTechie Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Midwest Posts: 5,677	Yeah.. it was the cartoon and the TNM that sort of dumped on Mike's intelligence factor. However, it does take smarts to be as creative and charismatic as he is. Hrmm.. and it's also time for me to update the FicArchive again! _________________ "I have a headache this big, and it has Donatello written all over it!" <font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: HorseTechie on 2002-04-02 13:13 ]</font>

04-02-2002, 07:47 PM	#212
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Update already? Looks like HT's ready to do some spring cleaning. Have fun! __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-03-2002, 01:05 AM	#213
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Hey all! Just wanted to let you know that I've added about a page more to Chapter 7. So if you're wondering whether or not Janine remembers the things that happened while she was a wolf...go read it! __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

04-03-2002, 02:34 AM	#214
SeaThreePeeO Mad Scientist Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: The Void Posts: 1,345	Rushes off to read it No one seems to be reviewing my new stories. Oh well, I'm enjoying writing them.

04-03-2002, 01:16 PM	#215
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	D'oh! I'm bad about reviewing. I usually read the stories when I don't have much time...so then I run off thinking "I'll do the review later." Then I forget. pauses What was I talking about? __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

04-03-2002, 01:40 PM	#216
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Oops...sorry 'bout not reviewing lately. School started a lot faster than I anticipated. I already feel like I'm behind, and it's only the third day I promise to read through everyone's fics and leave reviews when I get the time! BTW, I did review Disconnection after I read it during spring break. __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-03-2002, 01:58 PM	#217
SeaThreePeeO Mad Scientist Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: The Void Posts: 1,345	Thank you for the review Azure. I didn't mean people from here, just people in general. I don't like Disconnection too much, Bundle of Trouble is better. I am thinking about rewriting Disconnection.

04-03-2002, 04:43 PM	#218
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Well, I liked Disconnection, but you're the author. Change it if you must I'll just make sure to read it again! __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-03-2002, 05:38 PM	#219
HorseTechie Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Midwest Posts: 5,677	Aww... yeah.. it kinda sucks when ppl don't review stories on FF.net, Nikki. I had some fics up there for years... and they hardly get any comments! But I know they are being read, cause the ppl who realy like them email me instead. But.. I'm also one of those lazy ppl who read something, but don't post reviews much. Or if I posted a review once I wait a few chapters more before I post another one so I can say something really good.

04-04-2002, 09:28 AM	#220
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	New chapter time again! A nice little flashback from Midori's point of view. It's what she's saying to Leo, but I didn't add in his questions and comments. I hope you can understand the effect I was going for. It's up on FF.net, or my site in just a few minutes.