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**azure turtle** · 04-04-2002, 11:04 AM

Ooh...I might have some spare time later tonight. I'll try to catch up on all the updates I'm missing

Speaking of which, I need to post the second update for my little lair...

*Skeletoncrew* · 04-05-2002, 01:28 AM

Whoo-hoo! Updates rock!

Speaking of which, no one who read chapter 7 told me that I forgot to have Splinter tell Janine Leo's name! I just caught that mistake tonight!

*puts hands on hips and glares*

SeaThreePeeO · 04-05-2002, 03:47 AM

Oopps! I didn't notice, really.

Anyway I hate to nitpick, just in case the author comes after me.

**HorseTechie** · 04-05-2002, 09:01 AM

Sowwiiiiee! I would had noticed that, SC, if I read it.. but I haven't. Gnad work and school projects! *sai*

**Kali** · 04-05-2002, 10:02 AM

*snaps her fingers* I was going to mention it, but it slipped my mind. I did notice it, but it's not really obvious. I was on cold medicine, I couldn't feel my legs let alone remember that Splinter had forgotten to say Leo's name.

**azure turtle** · 04-05-2002, 04:47 PM

Y'know, I thought something was missing in that little scene, but I didn't realize it 'til you mentioned it. Oops, sorry SC

*Skeletoncrew* · 04-05-2002, 06:22 PM

Well, I'll let you guys off with a warning this time.

*shakes riding crop threateningly*

Don't be afraid to nitpick with my writing! I really do want to know when I've made mistakes...or if something could be improved.

**HorseTechie** · 04-05-2002, 06:38 PM

Hrm.. well, other than the fact I find your chapter kinda short, I think the way the story is going is good. It seems everything is all there now... and I like the way Splinter handles everything. (tries to stop thinking of the secretary in GhostBuster's when I see "Janine" *ducks baps*)

But what I'm wondering now, is when is Mike gonna come out to eat? He's been in there a bit long, no?

*Skeletoncrew* · 04-05-2002, 06:53 PM

Heh heh heh...I hadn't even thought of that Janine.

Yeah, I know my chapters are a bit short. I'm working on being a bit more descriptive. Chapter 8 should be longer.

Mike will be joining the family about 10 minutes into breakfast. I suppose I could do a cut scene to him...but I don't think we need to know what's taking him so long.

**azure turtle** · 04-05-2002, 07:24 PM

Uh...no, we don't need to know that bit of information.

Hey, I forgot about Janine from GB. I always liked her character because of her funny one-liners in the movies!! Too bad JFreak isn't at these forums, he'd like this discussion. *shrugs*

SeaThreePeeO · 04-06-2002, 02:47 PM

Hmmmmm. *Pushes nasty thoughts away*

Psst! Psst! I have updated The Scairest Place On Earth?

Later in the fic I am hoping to squeeze in a scene where they are all cowering in the same bed. *Evil oozes from my brain*

**Machias Banshee** · 04-07-2002, 03:24 PM

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On 2002-04-05 20:53, Skeletoncrew wrote:
Yeah, I know my chapters are a bit short. I'm working on being a bit more descriptive. Chapter 8 should be longer.

Mike will be joining the family about 10 minutes into breakfast. I suppose I could do a cut scene to him...but I don't think we need to know what's taking him so long.

Sorry, i havent done any reviews for a while, but i promise to get to it...

yOu night have mike rush through, grab his breakfast and flee to his room to avoid ribbings or any further embarrassment, and have Sensei talk to him...

I cant wait to see the next chapter!

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**Kali** · 04-08-2002, 04:18 PM

*looks around* Psst... chapter eleven of Midori is up.

Saisei · 04-08-2002, 04:42 PM

That was great, Kali! It's almost too cute imaging Midori and Leo that way!! Mind if I draw the scene?

I can't wait to see Taro's reaction when he finds out she's still alive. Keep on writing, and post more as soon as ya can!

Ooh, and while I'm here I'd like to announce an upcoming fic I've been working on. The title? Assassin. Find out how I first ran into the turtles through an intense story of fate, betrayal, love and revenge! Coming soon! (And by that I mean sometime before summer vacation...hopefully)

Well, enough with the advertising; I need to get to work!

**azure turtle** · 04-08-2002, 04:52 PM

*makes a mental note to check out updates at FF.net as soon as possible*
Sounds like a fun fic, Saisei! Too bad I've got a lot of reading to do tonight...*sigh* I've got chapter four of my own fic finished, but I'm waiting 'til sometime later this week to post it. I wanted to make an update to my site and include the new chapter with that update.

**Kali** · 04-08-2002, 05:38 PM

Quote:

On 2002-04-08 19:42, Saisei wrote:
That was great, Kali! It's almost too cute imaging Midori and Leo that way!! Mind if I draw the scene?

Not at all. Ooh, it'll be the first official fanart based on my fics. Cool.

And I'll be looking forward to your fic.

Hmm... I've written myself as knowing the Turtles, maybe I should write my own story about how I met them.

Saisei · 04-08-2002, 05:51 PM

Yay! I'll start on it as soon as I get this school work done...

*Skeletoncrew* · 04-10-2002, 02:07 AM

*cue drumroll*

Chapter 8 is now up!

*does happy dance*

Of course, as usual I'll probably revise it a bit in a day or two...Let me know if you see any glaring errors. I should go to bed now!

I notice Azure has a new chapter up too...

You should read it too!

**Machias Banshee** · 04-10-2002, 10:12 AM

I read them and was first to review!

You both did an awesome job!
*round of applause and mangoes to SC and Azure*

Descriptions, character interactions and humor was great!

In moonlight, I loved Raph's little wordplay, and I felt so bad for poor embarassed Mikey!

In Azure's story, I loved that breakfast scene as well. I was actually waiting for something about mangoes to come up, that's how nutty I am! Poor Splinter! I cant believe Azure thought he wanted to eat him!!!

yOu two are doing an awesome job, and i hope to see more soon.

**Kali** · 04-10-2002, 10:25 AM

LOL, I loved both those chapters.

I also think Azure REALLY needs to work on making first impressions. But I imagine that Splinter gets that a lot, so he'll be his usual patient self, although it won't help Azure's standing with Raph any.

Funny, you guys both wrote chapters where they're having breakfast. And that's what I'm going to do in my next chapter. Weird.

04-04-2002, 11:04 AM	#221
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Ooh...I might have some spare time later tonight. I'll try to catch up on all the updates I'm missing Speaking of which, I need to post the second update for my little lair... __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-05-2002, 01:28 AM	#222
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Whoo-hoo! Updates rock! Speaking of which, no one who read chapter 7 told me that I forgot to have Splinter tell Janine Leo's name! I just caught that mistake tonight! puts hands on hips and glares __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

04-05-2002, 04:47 PM	#226
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Y'know, I thought something was missing in that little scene, but I didn't realize it 'til you mentioned it. Oops, sorry SC __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-05-2002, 06:22 PM	#227
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Well, I'll let you guys off with a warning this time. shakes riding crop threateningly Don't be afraid to nitpick with my writing! I really do want to know when I've made mistakes...or if something could be improved. __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

04-05-2002, 06:53 PM	#229
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Heh heh heh...I hadn't even thought of that Janine. Yeah, I know my chapters are a bit short. I'm working on being a bit more descriptive. Chapter 8 should be longer. Mike will be joining the family about 10 minutes into breakfast. I suppose I could do a cut scene to him...but I don't think we need to know what's taking him so long. __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

04-05-2002, 03:47 AM	#223
SeaThreePeeO Mad Scientist Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: The Void Posts: 1,345	Oopps! I didn't notice, really. Anyway I hate to nitpick, just in case the author comes after me.

04-05-2002, 09:01 AM	#224
HorseTechie Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Midwest Posts: 5,677	Sowwiiiiee! I would had noticed that, SC, if I read it.. but I haven't. Gnad work and school projects! sai

04-05-2002, 10:02 AM	#225
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	snaps her fingers I was going to mention it, but it slipped my mind. I did notice it, but it's not really obvious. I was on cold medicine, I couldn't feel my legs let alone remember that Splinter had forgotten to say Leo's name.

04-05-2002, 06:38 PM	#228
HorseTechie Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Midwest Posts: 5,677	Hrm.. well, other than the fact I find your chapter kinda short, I think the way the story is going is good. It seems everything is all there now... and I like the way Splinter handles everything. (tries to stop thinking of the secretary in GhostBuster's when I see "Janine" ducks baps) But what I'm wondering now, is when is Mike gonna come out to eat? He's been in there a bit long, no?

04-05-2002, 07:24 PM	#230
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Uh...no, we don't need to know that bit of information. Hey, I forgot about Janine from GB. I always liked her character because of her funny one-liners in the movies!! Too bad JFreak isn't at these forums, he'd like this discussion. shrugs __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-06-2002, 02:47 PM	#231
SeaThreePeeO Mad Scientist Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: The Void Posts: 1,345	Hmmmmm. Pushes nasty thoughts away Psst! Psst! I have updated The Scairest Place On Earth? Later in the fic I am hoping to squeeze in a scene where they are all cowering in the same bed. Evil oozes from my brain

04-08-2002, 04:18 PM	#233
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	looks around Psst... chapter eleven of Midori is up.

04-08-2002, 04:42 PM	#234
Saisei Hench Mutant Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 282	That was great, Kali! It's almost too cute imaging Midori and Leo that way!! Mind if I draw the scene? I can't wait to see Taro's reaction when he finds out she's still alive. Keep on writing, and post more as soon as ya can! Ooh, and while I'm here I'd like to announce an upcoming fic I've been working on. The title? Assassin. Find out how I first ran into the turtles through an intense story of fate, betrayal, love and revenge! Coming soon! (And by that I mean sometime before summer vacation...hopefully) Well, enough with the advertising; I need to get to work! __________________ The truth is out there, but I forgot the URL...

04-08-2002, 04:52 PM	#235
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	makes a mental note to check out updates at FF.net as soon as possible Sounds like a fun fic, Saisei! Too bad I've got a lot of reading to do tonight...sigh I've got chapter four of my own fic finished, but I'm waiting 'til sometime later this week to post it. I wanted to make an update to my site and include the new chapter with that update. __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-08-2002, 05:51 PM	#237
Saisei Hench Mutant Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 282	Yay! I'll start on it as soon as I get this school work done... __________________ The truth is out there, but I forgot the URL...

04-10-2002, 02:07 AM	#238
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	cue drumroll Chapter 8 is now up! does happy dance Of course, as usual I'll probably revise it a bit in a day or two...Let me know if you see any glaring errors. I should go to bed now! I notice Azure has a new chapter up too... You should read it too! __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

04-10-2002, 10:12 AM	#239
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	I read them and was first to review! You both did an awesome job! round of applause and mangoes to SC and Azure Descriptions, character interactions and humor was great! In moonlight, I loved Raph's little wordplay, and I felt so bad for poor embarassed Mikey! In Azure's story, I loved that breakfast scene as well. I was actually waiting for something about mangoes to come up, that's how nutty I am! Poor Splinter! I cant believe Azure thought he wanted to eat him!!! yOu two are doing an awesome job, and i hope to see more soon.

04-10-2002, 10:25 AM	#240
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	LOL, I loved both those chapters. I also think Azure REALLY needs to work on making first impressions. But I imagine that Splinter gets that a lot, so he'll be his usual patient self, although it won't help Azure's standing with Raph any. Funny, you guys both wrote chapters where they're having breakfast. And that's what I'm going to do in my next chapter. Weird.