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*Skeletoncrew* · 04-15-2002, 12:40 AM

BTW, I read whats up of the new fic on Fanfiction.net, "Fallen Angels". It seems like an interesting story...but wow all the mis-spellings drag it down!

I left a review saying, "good story, it will be better once you've gone over it with a spellchecker." I was tempted to offer to help edit it, but I don't have much time on my hands for stuff like that right now!

**Kali** · 04-15-2002, 10:53 AM

*sigh* It's sad how many good stories are ruined by people who don't use spelling and grammar checkers. If they don't have one, then they should get a beta reader. And all the people who don't format. One word: PARAGRAPHS!

So many good ideas... so many bad writers... it's sad, all that potential, gone...

**Machias Banshee** · 04-15-2002, 11:34 AM

Well, i just cqame from there, and read Toy soldiers, by Splinter. Its one heckuva good story! So funny, yet so sad...

*Skeletoncrew* · 04-18-2002, 01:33 AM

*Strolls up to the podium and taps the mic.*

Is this thing on?

*Straightens up and begins speaking*

I would like to announce the posting of Moonlight Chapter 9 on fanfiction.net. As the author, I can promise that although there are probably a few typos, I have at least spelled "Raphael" right. Thank you, and goodnight.

*Steps down and bows to the estatic audience.*

**azure turtle** · 04-18-2002, 01:38 AM

*applauds*
Yay! I shall go read that over as soon as I can...

**Machias Banshee** · 04-18-2002, 04:24 AM

woohoo! its 7am and i am stil awake, and i Did read it! Loved it, loved it, loved it! *thumbs up to SC*

*Skeletoncrew* · 04-18-2002, 11:50 AM

Thanks Machias! But I don't know if I should trust your judgement since you've been up all night!

**Kali** · 04-18-2002, 11:58 AM

Well, I've gotten a full night's sleep, and I loved it too. I especially like the conversation between Leo and Mike about whether she date any of them. Raph is so conceited.

**azure turtle** · 04-18-2002, 12:51 PM

My turn to throw some praise at SC!
*steals the mic from Kali*
SC, wonderful job on chapter 9! I liked your descriptions, and I enjoyed the dialogue between Donny and Janine.
*in a Mr. Burns voice*
Excellent.

**Kali** · 04-18-2002, 12:58 PM

Hey! *steals mic back from Azure* I'm working really hard in this other window on chapter thirteen. I might even have it up in as little as an hour. I just wanna get through a single proofread without changing something.

**Machias Banshee** · 04-18-2002, 01:18 PM

Good things take time, just remember that.

**Kali** · 04-18-2002, 01:20 PM

And time takes memory, which is why I wanted to get this out fast. I was inspired by little lines that kept popping into my head.

At least I didn't spend all night typing it out. I got a good night's sleep them got back to it when I was refreshed.

**Machias Banshee** · 04-18-2002, 01:22 PM

i havent slept since monday night.....
*falls onto floor, looking dazed and confused.*

**Kali** · 04-18-2002, 01:26 PM

That's... not good. Sleep is essential. See, I can be on all the time because I have no life. You need priorities girl.

**Machias Banshee** · 04-18-2002, 01:29 PM

I DO! I've been up working on a Speech for my Public Speaking class! last night was just a fluke!

**Kali** · 04-18-2002, 01:37 PM

*frowns* Hmm, I knew I should have offered to stop and let you work. You did get all your work done, right?

**Machias Banshee** · 04-18-2002, 02:09 PM

Well, it turns out that it wasnt due til monday, so i'm gonna do some fine tuning and junk. Let's just say i'm looking forward to getting some sleep later tonight....

**Kali** · 04-18-2002, 02:14 PM

Good. So you worried for nothing, huh? Well, it's good that you had more time.

Yay, I got chapter 13 up! *skips off*

**Machias Banshee** · 04-18-2002, 02:17 PM

*makes post-it note to go read AFTER she finishes reading the comic adaptation of the first movie....

*

**Kali** · 04-18-2002, 02:25 PM

Hmpf! Well, I guess I know where I stand... though, I admit, I'd rather read a TMNT comic than a fan fic. Unless it's a really good one, like Skybright's latest.

Warning, don't even click on the latest NC-17 one, the Dark whatever one. It's stupid, three paragraphs of crap. I'm not even sending the address to HT. The five seconds it will take you to read it you will never get back.

04-15-2002, 12:40 AM	#261
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	BTW, I read whats up of the new fic on Fanfiction.net, "Fallen Angels". It seems like an interesting story...but wow all the mis-spellings drag it down! I left a review saying, "good story, it will be better once you've gone over it with a spellchecker." I was tempted to offer to help edit it, but I don't have much time on my hands for stuff like that right now! __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

04-18-2002, 01:33 AM	#264
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Strolls up to the podium and taps the mic. Is this thing on? Straightens up and begins speaking I would like to announce the posting of Moonlight Chapter 9 on fanfiction.net. As the author, I can promise that although there are probably a few typos, I have at least spelled "Raphael" right. Thank you, and goodnight. Steps down and bows to the estatic audience. __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

04-18-2002, 01:38 AM	#265
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	applauds Yay! I shall go read that over as soon as I can... __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-18-2002, 11:50 AM	#267
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Thanks Machias! But I don't know if I should trust your judgement since you've been up all night! __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

04-18-2002, 12:51 PM	#269
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	My turn to throw some praise at SC! steals the mic from Kali SC, wonderful job on chapter 9! I liked your descriptions, and I enjoyed the dialogue between Donny and Janine. in a Mr. Burns voice Excellent. __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-15-2002, 10:53 AM	#262
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	sigh It's sad how many good stories are ruined by people who don't use spelling and grammar checkers. If they don't have one, then they should get a beta reader. And all the people who don't format. One word: PARAGRAPHS! So many good ideas... so many bad writers... it's sad, all that potential, gone...

04-15-2002, 11:34 AM	#263
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	Well, i just cqame from there, and read Toy soldiers, by Splinter. Its one heckuva good story! So funny, yet so sad...

04-18-2002, 04:24 AM	#266
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	woohoo! its 7am and i am stil awake, and i Did read it! Loved it, loved it, loved it! thumbs up to SC

04-18-2002, 11:58 AM	#268
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Well, I've gotten a full night's sleep, and I loved it too. I especially like the conversation between Leo and Mike about whether she date any of them. Raph is so conceited.

04-18-2002, 12:58 PM	#270
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Hey! steals mic back from Azure I'm working really hard in this other window on chapter thirteen. I might even have it up in as little as an hour. I just wanna get through a single proofread without changing something.

04-18-2002, 01:18 PM	#271
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	Good things take time, just remember that.

04-18-2002, 01:20 PM	#272
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	And time takes memory, which is why I wanted to get this out fast. I was inspired by little lines that kept popping into my head. At least I didn't spend all night typing it out. I got a good night's sleep them got back to it when I was refreshed.

04-18-2002, 01:22 PM	#273
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	i havent slept since monday night..... falls onto floor, looking dazed and confused.

04-18-2002, 01:26 PM	#274
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	That's... not good. Sleep is essential. See, I can be on all the time because I have no life. You need priorities girl.

04-18-2002, 01:29 PM	#275
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	I DO! I've been up working on a Speech for my Public Speaking class! last night was just a fluke!

04-18-2002, 01:37 PM	#276
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	frowns Hmm, I knew I should have offered to stop and let you work. You did get all your work done, right?

04-18-2002, 02:09 PM	#277
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	Well, it turns out that it wasnt due til monday, so i'm gonna do some fine tuning and junk. Let's just say i'm looking forward to getting some sleep later tonight....

04-18-2002, 02:14 PM	#278
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Good. So you worried for nothing, huh? Well, it's good that you had more time. Yay, I got chapter 13 up! skips off

04-18-2002, 02:17 PM	#279
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	makes post-it note to go read AFTER she finishes reading the comic adaptation of the first movie....

04-18-2002, 02:25 PM	#280
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Hmpf! Well, I guess I know where I stand... though, I admit, I'd rather read a TMNT comic than a fan fic. Unless it's a really good one, like Skybright's latest. Warning, don't even click on the latest NC-17 one, the Dark whatever one. It's stupid, three paragraphs of crap. I'm not even sending the address to HT. The five seconds it will take you to read it you will never get back.