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**azure turtle** · 04-18-2002, 02:26 PM

Poor Machias. At least the speech thingy won't be due 'til later. As for me, I've got midterms next week.
*groans*
Oooh, a new chapter! I'll make sure to give it a read after class today.

*Skeletoncrew* · 04-18-2002, 02:28 PM

Hey Kali! I enjoyed the new chapter. Nice to see Raph get knocked down every once in a while!

*pouts* No one has been leaving reviews on fanfiction.net!

**azure turtle** · 04-18-2002, 02:34 PM

LOL! Sorry SC, but I sorta left my review here at the threads. I'll leave you one at FF.net when I get the chance.

*Skeletoncrew* · 04-18-2002, 02:36 PM

Hee hee hee...I'm just being a baby! I like having my reviews there because I can easily look them up any time I need an ego boost.

**Kali** · 04-18-2002, 02:36 PM

Thanks SC! That hit is the first step to *gasp* Raph actually accepting her. I have a rather touching scene planned.

Ooh, and I'll leave a review too. Gotta let the people cruising through there how good it is.

*Skeletoncrew* · 04-18-2002, 02:40 PM

Touching, eh? *Nudge-nudge wink-wink*

*slaps self*

**Kali** · 04-18-2002, 02:44 PM

*giggles* You all know it won't be like that. Let's just say they reach some common ground.

**HorseTechie** · 04-18-2002, 07:07 PM

Quote:

Warning, don't even click on the latest NC-17 one, the Dark whatever one. It's stupid, three paragraphs of crap. I'm not even sending the address to HT. The five seconds it will take you to read it you will never get back.

*peeks in while waitng for a digital video take a reeeeally long time to render*

OH.. BTW>. not that anyone cares, but the Fic Fic Archive also has a messgae board too... (that sorely needs active members). Hmmm....

**azure turtle** · 04-18-2002, 09:53 PM

LOL! Y'know what? I actually read that fic out of curiousity. And I agree with whoever you quoted...it's not worth the time. I looked at the other stories that the author had written...they're all "lemons" that follow the same formula. Absolutely terrible. It's like half a page of words that don't flow together...

A message board, eh? Hmm...

**Kali** · 04-18-2002, 09:58 PM

Aye. The saddest part was that I was looking forward to it because he wrote such a nice summary. I don't usually look at the number of words. If they can write a summary like that, you think they could write a decent fic, but no... I ran a "good" version of it through my head before I had even clicked it. (I couldn't do it when I first saw it because kiddies were running around getting ready for school and stuff.)

**azure turtle** · 04-18-2002, 10:01 PM

Yup...same thing I thought. The summary grabbed my attention, but the fic was terrible. He/she is going to need some serious improvement...

**Machias Banshee** · 04-18-2002, 10:02 PM

*is unsure if she wants to know what theyre taking about...*

**azure turtle** · 04-18-2002, 10:05 PM

Trust me, you don't wanna know. The fic is that bad.

**Machias Banshee** · 04-18-2002, 10:18 PM

*grimace* why do people bother writing fics if they cant write to save their lives?

**Kali** · 04-18-2002, 10:20 PM

It wouldn't be that bad if they had TRIED. But they just slapped some random stuff together and posted it. 246 words, that was it.

**Machias Banshee** · 04-18-2002, 10:24 PM

jeezum! that's almost as long as one of my posts in the clone thread!

**Kali** · 04-18-2002, 10:25 PM

Yeah, I know. Totally sad.

**azure turtle** · 04-18-2002, 10:30 PM

Uh huh...and all his fics look like that, despite some people leaving reviews for him packed with advice on improving. If the author took that advice and tried, then I wouldn't frown upon it so much...but there is no evidence of an effort to improve.

**Machias Banshee** · 04-18-2002, 10:34 PM

Great....

**Kali** · 04-18-2002, 10:38 PM

Hey, you aren't forced to read it. Just pass it over. It'd not like this person has any credibility.

04-18-2002, 02:26 PM	#281
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Poor Machias. At least the speech thingy won't be due 'til later. As for me, I've got midterms next week. groans Oooh, a new chapter! I'll make sure to give it a read after class today. __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-18-2002, 02:28 PM	#282
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Hey Kali! I enjoyed the new chapter. Nice to see Raph get knocked down every once in a while! pouts No one has been leaving reviews on fanfiction.net! __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

04-18-2002, 02:34 PM	#283
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	LOL! Sorry SC, but I sorta left my review here at the threads. I'll leave you one at FF.net when I get the chance. __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-18-2002, 02:36 PM	#284
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Hee hee hee...I'm just being a baby! I like having my reviews there because I can easily look them up any time I need an ego boost. __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

04-18-2002, 02:40 PM	#286
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Touching, eh? Nudge-nudge wink-wink slaps self __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

04-18-2002, 02:36 PM	#285
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Thanks SC! That hit is the first step to gasp Raph actually accepting her. I have a rather touching scene planned. Ooh, and I'll leave a review too. Gotta let the people cruising through there how good it is.

04-18-2002, 02:44 PM	#287
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	giggles You all know it won't be like that. Let's just say they reach some common ground.

04-18-2002, 09:53 PM	#289
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	LOL! Y'know what? I actually read that fic out of curiousity. And I agree with whoever you quoted...it's not worth the time. I looked at the other stories that the author had written...they're all "lemons" that follow the same formula. Absolutely terrible. It's like half a page of words that don't flow together... A message board, eh? Hmm... __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-18-2002, 09:58 PM	#290
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Aye. The saddest part was that I was looking forward to it because he wrote such a nice summary. I don't usually look at the number of words. If they can write a summary like that, you think they could write a decent fic, but no... I ran a "good" version of it through my head before I had even clicked it. (I couldn't do it when I first saw it because kiddies were running around getting ready for school and stuff.)

04-18-2002, 10:01 PM	#291
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Yup...same thing I thought. The summary grabbed my attention, but the fic was terrible. He/she is going to need some serious improvement... __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-18-2002, 10:02 PM	#292
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	is unsure if she wants to know what theyre taking about...

04-18-2002, 10:05 PM	#293
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Trust me, you don't wanna know. The fic is that bad. __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-18-2002, 10:18 PM	#294
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	grimace why do people bother writing fics if they cant write to save their lives?

04-18-2002, 10:20 PM	#295
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	It wouldn't be that bad if they had TRIED. But they just slapped some random stuff together and posted it. 246 words, that was it.

04-18-2002, 10:24 PM	#296
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	jeezum! that's almost as long as one of my posts in the clone thread!

04-18-2002, 10:25 PM	#297
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Yeah, I know. Totally sad.

04-18-2002, 10:30 PM	#298
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Uh huh...and all his fics look like that, despite some people leaving reviews for him packed with advice on improving. If the author took that advice and tried, then I wouldn't frown upon it so much...but there is no evidence of an effort to improve. __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

04-18-2002, 10:34 PM	#299
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	Great....

04-18-2002, 10:38 PM	#300
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Hey, you aren't forced to read it. Just pass it over. It'd not like this person has any credibility.