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**Kali** · 05-09-2002, 01:18 PM

*runs in* I got the fics up! Heh heh, two this time. Machias has InGen-uity (or WILL), Azure has One Fateful Day, Kameko has Reflections, and now I have my background/origin story: Crash and Burn. More chapters to come.

I also open my mature readers fic page. *blushes* There's one story, one I started working on as soon as I saw that really bad fic on FF.net awhile back. Please heed the warnings and don't feel that you have to read it.

**azure turtle** · 05-09-2002, 02:55 PM

Ooh, now Kali is revealing her origins! It's an exciting time for fanfic fans!

An adult section of your website?

Hmm...I might have to gather enough courage to enter there...
*runs off to gather*

**Kali** · 05-09-2002, 07:02 PM

Don't feel that you have to read it. I'll really understand if you don't want to read the adult stuff.

**azure turtle** · 05-09-2002, 08:43 PM

Hmm...okay.

Hey, I read the first chapter to your origin story, Kali! I like

Are you planning to post it on FF.net any time soon?

**Kali** · 05-09-2002, 08:52 PM

I don't know. I know I'd get more feedback (maybe) but... I don't know, I'll think about it.

**azure turtle** · 05-09-2002, 08:53 PM

Well, it's your choice. I think it's kawaii...you should definitely write more chapters

**Kali** · 05-09-2002, 08:57 PM

I'm going to, I'm working on chapter two now, but it gets kinda intense later on.

**azure turtle** · 05-09-2002, 08:59 PM

Uh oh...

**Kali** · 05-09-2002, 09:05 PM

Don't worry, I doubt the rating's going over PG-13, or maybe R. Just a lot of emotional stuff.

**azure turtle** · 05-09-2002, 09:08 PM

I see. I'm sure it'll be good

**Kali** · 05-09-2002, 09:11 PM

Hopefully it will be.

**Machias Banshee** · 05-09-2002, 10:44 PM

*snicker* Im back, and i just read your first chapter. heehee, i love where mike gets 'chewed out'at the supper table...

*Skeletoncrew* · 05-10-2002, 12:57 AM

Hey Kali! Your re-work of the bad NC-17 story was quite good! Even better than the re-work of it thats at fanfiction.net. Interesting how that terrible story inspired at least 3 other pieces of better fiction.

You know, I'm still somewhat surprised that no one seemed offended by my treatment of Splinter. I guess I must have done it fairly tastfully.

**Kali** · 05-10-2002, 09:39 AM

I'm glad everyone's liking my story. *smirk* Be warned, however, in a few chapters, your view of me will be forever changed.

*blush* Thanks SC. I'm glad to get some feedback on it, because it's my first real attempt at an NC-17 story. (Aside from what's under my bed, but let's not get into that.) I'm not sure I have the nerve to put it up on FF.net to get more feedback.

*Kameko* · 05-10-2002, 10:41 AM

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*Skeletoncrew* · 05-10-2002, 10:54 AM

That re-work on fanfiction.net had at least one big glaring error. "Turtles don't normally have penises." I also personally appreciate it any time an author doesn't use the phrase, "love juices." *snicker* Of course, it was still better than the original.

*sigh* Its looking like I'm not going to get chapter 10 of Moonlight done before I leave...I'm contemplating putting up what I do have done with a note letting everyone know that I will be gone, but that I will finish the story

**Kali** · 05-10-2002, 10:58 AM

I know, most people think April would pair well with Raph or Donnie. There was something between April and Raph in the movies, especially the first one.

Oh, and thanks for the feedback.

**Kali** · 05-10-2002, 01:51 PM

*takes a deep breath* Okay, I've got chapter two of Crash and Burn up (after dealing with link troubles. If you run across a broken link, tell me.) It's on my site, and FF.net. I still don't have the nerve to post Wanted up on FF.net.

*Skeletoncrew* · 05-11-2002, 03:03 AM

I don't see why you don't have the nerve to post it Kali. Its well written. But if you don't want to, don't.

Speaking of posting, I've posted chapter 10 of Moonlight. I feel that its still a bit rough, but I don't have time to smooth it all out before my trip...and I didn't want to make everyone wait another 4 weeks to read it!

*collapses in a heap.*

I've got to go to bed...

**Kali** · 05-11-2002, 09:57 AM

Wow, it's great to finally hear Janine's story. Glad you didn't make us wait four weeks before we could read it. *sniff* That was so sad, what happened to her family.

To avoid double-posting, I'll just leave this note here. Chapter three of Crash and Burn is up, and it's intense. Shot the rating right up to R.
_________________
Lead me not into temptation - I can find the way myself.
Kali Gargoyle's Asylum

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05-09-2002, 02:55 PM	#562
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Ooh, now Kali is revealing her origins! It's an exciting time for fanfic fans! An adult section of your website? Hmm...I might have to gather enough courage to enter there... runs off to gather __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

05-09-2002, 08:43 PM	#564
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Hmm...okay. Hey, I read the first chapter to your origin story, Kali! I like Are you planning to post it on FF.net any time soon? __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

05-09-2002, 08:53 PM	#566
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Well, it's your choice. I think it's kawaii...you should definitely write more chapters __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

05-09-2002, 08:59 PM	#568
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Uh oh... __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

05-09-2002, 09:08 PM	#570
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	I see. I'm sure it'll be good __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

05-09-2002, 01:18 PM	#561
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	runs in I got the fics up! Heh heh, two this time. Machias has InGen-uity (or WILL), Azure has One Fateful Day, Kameko has Reflections, and now I have my background/origin story: Crash and Burn. More chapters to come. I also open my mature readers fic page. blushes There's one story, one I started working on as soon as I saw that really bad fic on FF.net awhile back. Please heed the warnings and don't feel that you have to read it.

05-09-2002, 07:02 PM	#563
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Don't feel that you have to read it. I'll really understand if you don't want to read the adult stuff.

05-09-2002, 08:52 PM	#565
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	I don't know. I know I'd get more feedback (maybe) but... I don't know, I'll think about it.

05-09-2002, 08:57 PM	#567
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	I'm going to, I'm working on chapter two now, but it gets kinda intense later on.

05-09-2002, 09:05 PM	#569
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Don't worry, I doubt the rating's going over PG-13, or maybe R. Just a lot of emotional stuff.

05-09-2002, 09:11 PM	#571
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Hopefully it will be.

05-09-2002, 10:44 PM	#572
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	snicker Im back, and i just read your first chapter. heehee, i love where mike gets 'chewed out'at the supper table...

05-10-2002, 12:57 AM	#573
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Hey Kali! Your re-work of the bad NC-17 story was quite good! Even better than the re-work of it thats at fanfiction.net. Interesting how that terrible story inspired at least 3 other pieces of better fiction. You know, I'm still somewhat surprised that no one seemed offended by my treatment of Splinter. I guess I must have done it fairly tastfully. __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

05-10-2002, 09:39 AM	#574
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	I'm glad everyone's liking my story. smirk Be warned, however, in a few chapters, your view of me will be forever changed. blush Thanks SC. I'm glad to get some feedback on it, because it's my first real attempt at an NC-17 story. (Aside from what's under my bed, but let's not get into that.) I'm not sure I have the nerve to put it up on FF.net to get more feedback.

05-10-2002, 10:41 AM	#575
Kameko Sister to the TMNT Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Los Angeles, California, USA Posts: 2,756	)

05-10-2002, 10:54 AM	#576
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	That re-work on fanfiction.net had at least one big glaring error. "Turtles don't normally have penises." I also personally appreciate it any time an author doesn't use the phrase, "love juices." snicker Of course, it was still better than the original. sigh Its looking like I'm not going to get chapter 10 of Moonlight done before I leave...I'm contemplating putting up what I do have done with a note letting everyone know that I will be gone, but that I will finish the story __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

05-10-2002, 10:58 AM	#577
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	I know, most people think April would pair well with Raph or Donnie. There was something between April and Raph in the movies, especially the first one. Oh, and thanks for the feedback.

05-10-2002, 01:51 PM	#578
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	takes a deep breath Okay, I've got chapter two of Crash and Burn up (after dealing with link troubles. If you run across a broken link, tell me.) It's on my site, and FF.net. I still don't have the nerve to post Wanted up on FF.net.

05-11-2002, 03:03 AM	#579
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	I don't see why you don't have the nerve to post it Kali. Its well written. But if you don't want to, don't. Speaking of posting, I've posted chapter 10 of Moonlight. I feel that its still a bit rough, but I don't have time to smooth it all out before my trip...and I didn't want to make everyone wait another 4 weeks to read it! collapses in a heap. I've got to go to bed... __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

05-11-2002, 09:57 AM	#580
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	Wow, it's great to finally hear Janine's story. Glad you didn't make us wait four weeks before we could read it. sniff That was so sad, what happened to her family. To avoid double-posting, I'll just leave this note here. Chapter three of Crash and Burn is up, and it's intense. Shot the rating right up to R. _________________ Lead me not into temptation - I can find the way myself. Kali Gargoyle's Asylum <font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: Kali on 2002-05-11 16:27 ]</font>