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Old 05-31-2012, 10:34 PM   #41
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"Well, who didn't see this happening?", said Donnie as the Foot soliders started to close in on them.

Shredder jumped down from the platform and pointed towards the turtles. "Stop them! They must not ruin the ritual!" The Foot obeys and rush towards the turtles.

Mikey brings out his nunchakus, and begins to whirl them as the Foot come towards him. "Man, 4 turtles against more that 1,000 ninjas? Seems alittle unfair...for them anyway." With a big grin, Mikey jumps towards them, yelling out his latest catchphrase: "Booyakasha!" He hits a Foot solider right in the face, using a kick to send him into an oncoming group of Foot soliders.

"Booyakasha? You're still using that?" yelled Donnie while he was fighting. Spining his Bo, he quickly takes out two ninjas, then pole vaults over one, and when landing, does a sweep kick.

"What can I say? It's catchy, not to mention original." Mikey quickly uses his nunchakes to take away a ninja's weapons. "Nighty, night, ugly!", says the small turtle as he punches the ninjas light's out.
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Old 06-01-2012, 03:57 PM   #42
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Nice incorporation of the new catchphrase! Keep up the radical story Turtle Titan!
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Old 06-01-2012, 04:09 PM   #43
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Wow. I really like where this is going. I think some posts are a bit short and could be elaborated on, but other than that, this is a nice story. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.
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Old 11-26-2012, 09:16 AM   #44
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(Hey everyone, sorry it's been awhile since I posted another part of the story. Been really busy lately.)

The ninjas soon started to close in on Donnie and Mikey. "We could sure use Raph and Leo right now! Where are they?!" "Probably beating the stuffing out of each other more like it!", said Donnie.

Meanwhile, Raph and Leo rushed towards the platform Shredder was on while fighting off against the Foot. When suddenly, out of no where, Fishface and Dogpound appeared. "Going somewhere, freaks?", said Dogpound. Raph rushed towards him, sais drawn. Leo, on the other hand, was locked in combat with Fishface."Nothing to wash us away this time, turtle. Surrender now, and I promise you a quick and painless demise", Fishface said as he kicked Leo away. "We don't need that to stop you. I'll do it myself if I have too", said Leo. Fishface chuckled. "Ah, famous last words. I'll be sure to remember to carve them into your shell before I deliver you to the Shredder." Suddenly Fishface was knocked to the side before he could harm Leo, and in his place stood Donatello. "We'll take care of these two. Get to that platform! Whatever Shredder is doing can't be good." Mikey appeared behind Dogpound as he was holding Raph. "Yo, Dogpound! If there was award for ugliest mutant mutt, you'd beat everyone by a landslide!" Dogpound drops Raph and runs towards Mikey. "My name is Chris Bradford, not Dogpound, you little…!" "Naah,naah! You can't catch me!", said Mikey as he ran away. Leo quickly ran towards the platform. Raph quickly got up. "No way is he stealling the glory", he thought.
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Old 11-26-2012, 06:10 PM   #45
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The Kraang watched the battle as it ensued. "Kraang, we must no let the ones called the Turtles reach this place so that the ones called the Foot can bring this tengu into this place." "Of course Kraang. I shall tell Kraang to not let the ones called the Turtles reach this place so that..." Suddenly, two sais are sent straight into the two Kraang's faces. Raph pulls them out. "Sheesh, you guys are so annoying!" Raph made quick work of the other Kraangs, sending them over the platform. "Alright. Time to end this." As he walks over the platform, it begins to glow as he grabs the one of the swords, so does Leo. "What are you doing?! I had this first!", said Raph. "No, I did. Just go grab the other swords so we can leave", said Leo. "Fine", said Raph. He tried to move, but he couldn't. "Hey, I can't move!" "Oh c'mon, Raph! Just let go!" Raph tried again. "Leo, I'm serious! I'm stuck!" Leo tried to pull away too. "What the...?! I can't move either! What's happening?!" Suddenly light fell on them. "What's going on?!" He looked back at Leo. "Dude, you're diappearing!" Leo looked back at Raph. "So are you!"

Meanwhile, Donnie stood before Fishface. As he ran towards him, Donnie popped out the blade from his bo staff, and sliced off one of his robotic legs. "Oooh, just wait until I get my hands on you!", said Fishface as he hopped over to Donnie. "Yeah,yeah, whatever", said Donnie as sliced off his other robotic leg, causing Fishface to fall. He walked over to him, bent over, and smiled. "Face it, Xever. With your new mutated form, you're as pathetic as Baxter Stockman." "Baxter who?" Donnie rolled his eyes. "Nevermind." He turned around to see Leo and Raph disappearing. "Aw nuts. Mikey, help me out here!" "I'm on it!", said Mikey as he ducked between Dogpound''s legs. He joins up with Donnie, and they run towards the platform. Shredder stood watching from the side. "Those accursed turtles are ruining everything! I must stop them!" He jumps out of the shadows and runs after Mikey and Donnie. Mikey turns around to see him. "Dude! Shred-head at ten o'clock!" "Just keep running!",said Donnie the jump on the platform. "What are you two doing?! We've got to get out of here before...! Hey, I can't move!" "Me either! Dudes, did Shredder, like, put super glue on here or something?!" Shredder jumps towards them. "I've got you now!" Suddenly, there's a flash of light! When it was gone, there was no sign of the turtles or Shredder. The Kraang got on the platform. "The ones that were in this place are no longer in this place, Kraang." "Yes, I see that Kraang. But if the ones who were in this place are no longer in this place, than in what place are the ones called the Turtles and Shredder?"

"...And that's how we ended up here", thought Mikey. "Whereever here is anyway. How are we going to get back home? Maybe Leo knows." He turned around, and saw that Leo and Raph were fighting in the dirt. "Or maybe not." Donnie got up. "I've had enough of this." He pushed Leo and Raph apart. "ENOUGH! In case you two didn't notice, we're in the middle of no where in broad daylight, completely exposed! So how about instead of fighting, we figure out what to do next?!" Leo and Raph looked at each other and muttered, "Fine." "Hey guys, check this out!", said Mikey as he pointed to the distance. The others followed where Mikey was pointing, and where shocked. Across where they were, they saw animal farmers! The looked across, but saw no humans. "What is going on? Humanoid animals farming in daylight? No sign of humans aywhere? What is going on?", said Donnie. Leo looked across and pointed at mountains. "I recognize that mountain range from one of sensei's books." "So? What so special about some dumb old mountains?", said Raph. Leo turned to him. "What's special about these mountains is that they are only found in one place in the world: China." "Hold up", said Raph. "How can we be in China when there's all these animals that walk and talk like us, yet no people?" Donnie walked up. "Maybe it's because this isn't our China." "What are you saying, Donnie?" "I'm saying that whatever Shredder was doing not only teleported us away from New York, but from our universe all together." The other turtles stared at him in confusion. "Don't you guys get it? We're in an alternate dimension!"
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Old 11-26-2012, 08:23 PM   #46
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Love what you got here so far, dude. Keep it coming.
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Old 11-26-2012, 09:52 PM   #47
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"Alright, so how do we get back?",asked Raph. Donnie scratched his head. "The thing is...I don't really know." "WHAT?! How can you not know?! You're the genuis?!" "Gee Raph, I must have forgot to bring me book on alternate dimensions with me while we were fighting for our lives against the Foot", said Donnie. Leo stepped in, and spoke in his best heroic voice. "This no time to lose our heads. We may not have a way to leave, but by working together, we can overcome any obstacles." Raph turned to Leo. "Seriously, you have got to stop using lines from that 'Space Heroes' show." "So, like, we're stuck here?!", said Mikey freaking out. "Aw,man,I'll never have pizza again! This the worst day of my life!" Leo rolled his eyes, and turned around. "Look, someone's coming. Maybe he can tell us if there's a town near by or something." Mikey looked to the ground, and saw the swords Shredder had before. "Might as well pick them up...", he thought. The traveler came towards the turtles, and they could see he was a goose. Leo walked up to him. "Excuse me, but could you tell us if...." "AHHH! Bandits!" He cowarded before them. "Please, don't hurt me!" "Would you relax? We're not not bandits", said Raph. The goose looked up. "Oh yeah? Then what's with the masks and weapons?" "Look", said Leo,"We promise we won't harm you. We just want to know if there's town or city somewhere near here." The goose got on his feet. "The only town around here would be at the Valley of Peace. It's down the road", he said, geturing to where he was coming from. "Can I go?" Leo nodded, and the goose quickly left. "Anyone else find it werid how even though we're in China that dude spoke perfect English?", said Mikey. Leo looked down the road. "C'mon, let's go. Maybe we can find a place to rest for awhile until we can figure out our next move." As the turtles moved, Donnie was deep in thought. 'I can't believe we're in another universe! It's science fiction come true. April is SO going to be impressed when I tell her!', thought the mutant turtle. 'If I ever see her again that is...'

"Are we there yet?", said Mikey. The others groaned. "Mikey, for the last time, no, we aren't there yet", said Leo. Mikey's stomach growled. "Man, I could sure go for some pizza right now." Raph turned to him. "You said it. I wonder how Spike is doing. I hope Splinter didn't forget to feed him..." Donnie looked towards the distance. "Look guys, smoke!" Leo smiled. "We must be getting close." Mikey lit up. "Sweet! Race ya! Last one down to the valley is a tortise!", said as he ran. "You're on!", said the others joining. Briefly forgetting the situation they were in, the turtles raced it each other, laughing and smiling like they were back in NYC. It wasn't till they got close that their faces turned from happiness to shock. "Whoa, that's some fire!" Down below, they could see a village burning, and could hear the shouts of scared people. "For a place called the Valley of Peace, it sure doesn't look peaceful", said Donnie. "Looks like they could use some help", remarked Leo. "C'mon, turtles, let's go!" The others followed Leo as they raced towards the valley as fast as they could go.

END OF CHAPTER 3
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Old 11-27-2012, 08:50 AM   #48
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Awesome work on this. I really like where this is going. I hope the Turtles can help the villagers. Nicely done. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.
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Old 11-28-2012, 07:17 PM   #49
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Chapter 4: Heroes United

As the turtles rushed forward towards the villiage, the screams continued to get louder and louder. When they finally reached it, it was shocking. Everywhere around them, rats were burning down everything, and attacking the villiagers. All the turtles could say to this was,"...Whoa." "Let him go!", said a voice. The turtles turned to the side and saw a father pig trying to get back his son from two rats. One of the rats were holding the child by his arm, while great fear was in his eyes while looking at the rats. "Oh yeah? Or else what, fatty?!", said one of the rats when he pushed the pig into the ground. "Father!" "Don't worry, son. I'll be alright.", said the pig. The rat who pushed him pulls out a knife. "You won't be for long, old man." Suddenly he's tapped on the shoulder, and the rat turns around. "Hey, do you mine? We're in the middle of...huh?!" It was then the rat was suckered punch, sending him into the wall, by none other than Raph. Donnie and Mikey rushed in, ambushing the other rat, and he let go, causing the piglet to fly through the air. Leo jumped and catched the child. When he let go, he ran to his father. "My son! Thank goodness you're safe! Thank you, my young friends. How can I ever repay you?" Leo smiled and said, "We're just doing our job, sir." "You know, we could actually use some...owww!", said Mikey before Raph slapped him from behind. Leo turned back to the pig. "So, who're these rat guys?" "They are invaders from outside of China", said the pig as he got up. "They came here to challenge the Furious Five and the Dragon Warrior." "Furious Five? Dragon Warrior? Who are they?", asked Mikey. The pig turned to the turtles with a puzzled look. "You've never hear of them? They're only one of the greatest groups of Kung Fu masters that ever lived! Espically the Dragon Warrior! They are our protectors.""Kung Fu masters? That's so cool!", said Mikey. Raph looked at the chaos around them. "Oh yeah...they're REALLY good protectors. If their so great, why aren't they here fighting off these guys?" "Last I heard, they were fighting off against a large group of rats in the center of town", said the pig, "But I think they may be in need of some assistence." Leo nodded. "Guys, I think we should go and help this Furious Five out. After all, we can't fight off these rats all by ourselves." The other turtles nodded in agreement. "C'mon. Let's take the rooftops. That way we won't have to fight our way through these guys." "Good luck, my friends. Come, my son. We must leave now", said the pig as he turned away. The piglet said "Thank you", and left with his father. The turtles soon climbed up a buliding, and headed to where the Furious Five were.
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Old 12-02-2012, 01:06 PM   #50
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This is really good so far! I'm really enjoying it and you have the characters down excellently!!
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