Turtle Turncoat - Page 39

Tony Day · 05-09-2012, 03:38 AM

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Originally Posted by oldmanwinters

I just had to make it into a little free advert for you!

Haha.. love it! Thanx alot for that mate

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Tony Day · 05-17-2012, 04:42 PM

Hi folks... Page 53 is up

Talk soon
Tony

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Mona_Lisa · 05-17-2012, 06:10 PM

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Originally Posted by Tony Day

Hi folks... Page 53 is up

Talk soon
Tony

www.trydowave.com

Thanks, You made my day

You are really awesome at drawing bebop and Rocksteady! I think I like your version of those two over the 80’s version!

Tony Day · 05-17-2012, 06:28 PM

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Originally Posted by Mona_Lisa

Thanks, You made my day

You are really awesome at drawing bebop and Rocksteady! I think I like your version of those two over the 80’s version!

Cheers Mona_Lisa for the compliments. Much appreicated

cartoonistaaron · 05-17-2012, 06:31 PM

The art in this thing is fantastic! Somebody get IDW on the phone!!

Tony Day · 05-17-2012, 06:33 PM

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Originally Posted by cartoonistaaron

The art in this thing is fantastic! Somebody get IDW on the phone!!

wow.. now that really is a compliment

Cheers mate... more coming soon

*oldmanwinters* · 05-17-2012, 07:00 PM

Tony, I'm so glad you persevered some of the classic Rocksteady and Bebop incompetence in this comic! That bit with the machine gun was so funny!

**Jester** · 05-17-2012, 07:28 PM

Tony, will we see you around once Turncoat is finished? Please say yes.

Tony Day · 05-18-2012, 04:24 AM

I'll still be floating around once it's finished but I will be taking a break from drawing the turtles. Been doing it for a long time now. Might come back for a short story in future.
Afterwards i'll be concentration on learning some new software.
To stop getting too rusty i'll be drawing stand alone pictures like the ones found in my gallery and maybe finally dipping into animation.

Anyways... still lots more to come and a juicy conclusion

Laterz

Tony

www.trydowave.com

*oldmanwinters* · 05-18-2012, 10:42 AM

Yeah, Tony, don't be a stranger once Turncoat is finished!

I know it's gonna be a bittersweet moment for me when the comic if finished (regardless of whether the ending is happy or sad), because I've been one of those long-time readers.

Tony Day · 06-04-2012, 03:39 PM

Hi. Page 54 is up. Soz for taking ages. Got myself a job finally and its really hard to do a page other than on the weekends now.

Anyways.. more soon

Tony

www.trydowave.com

*oldmanwinters* · 06-04-2012, 07:13 PM

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Originally Posted by Tony Day

Hi. Page 54 is up. Soz for taking ages. Got myself a job finally and its really hard to do a page other than on the weekends now.

Anyways.. more soon

Tony

www.trydowave.com

Whoa, I didn't see that twist coming! (Well... maybe I sorta did, but I had forgotten about it).

The dialogue actually got kinda deep in that page. Who would have ever expected Casey and April to discuss a little layman's theology, eh?

I'm glad you're still digging into Shredder's bizarre motivations, Tony. It should make for a very epic conclusion!

Tony Day · 06-05-2012, 04:27 AM

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Originally Posted by oldmanwinters

Whoa, I didn't see that twist coming! (Well... maybe I sorta did, but I had forgotten about it).

The dialogue actually got kinda deep in that page. Who would have ever expected Casey and April to discuss a little layman's theology, eh?

I'm glad you're still digging into Shredder's bizarre motivations, Tony. It should make for a very epic conclusion!

I didn't particularly like that dialogue to be honest and originally it went on for longer; not really relevant to the story. I had to cut it back as I'm running outta space fast. I've discussed with Alan the importance of putting in only the essentials at this point. So what I’ll be doing is directing and drawing the entire layout from here to the end and sending it to him. He will then put dialogue to the pictures... Stan Lee style

Just hope it works... I hate rushed endings...

Laterz mate
Tony
www.trydowave.com

*oldmanwinters* · 06-05-2012, 07:57 AM

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Originally Posted by Tony Day

So what I’ll be doing is directing and drawing the entire layout from here to the end and sending it to him. He will then put dialogue to the pictures... Stan Lee style

Just hope it works... I hate rushed endings...

Laterz mate
Tony
www.trydowave.com

You can always add an Epilogue chapter!

Tony Day · 06-05-2012, 08:47 AM

Once i get the finished script back from Alan and if it doesn't fit right for whatever reason ill do a final short chapter. Called Turncoat the final battle or something like that. Kinda like 'V' the 80's TV series

(don't know if you're old enuf to remember that!)
I will be trying my damnedest to fit it in this chapter though.

Tony

www.trydowave.com

Tony Day · 06-05-2012, 10:43 AM

Just planning the layout for the ending (7 pages in all) and I have come to this conclusion. It isn't enough. I fitted the story in there OK but not in a satisfying way. Key, important plot points and scenes are explained in one pages each. It has the rushed ending feel of most animes!!! If I end it like that it will cheapen the whole project. Put too many hours in to let that happen and i've done it before with previous comics.

So... me and Alan are creating Part 4. Just did it now in fact on the phone (the idea anyway). It will be called Turncoat the Final Battle (ala 'V

) Not part 4. And it will be much shorter. Comprising of the fight, and the endings. Part 3 will now have lots of build up and a cliffhanger ending. Looks like I'll be doing this for a little longer than planned. Just wish there were more hours in the day

Laterz
Tony

www.trydowave.com

P.s. Off to draw Final battle cover as I have no script yet....

*oldmanwinters* · 06-05-2012, 10:50 AM

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Originally Posted by Tony Day

Just planning the layout for the ending (7 pages in all) and I have come to this conclusion. It isn't enough. I fitted the story in there OK but not in a satisfying way. Key, important plot points and scenes are explained in one pages each. It has the rushed ending feel of most animes!!! If I end it like that it will cheapen the whole project. Put too many hours in to let that happen and i've done it before with previous comics.

So... me and Alan are creating Part 4. Just did it now in fact on the phone (the idea anyway). It will be called Turncoat the Final Battle (ala 'V

) Not part 4. And it will be much shorter. Comprising of the fight, and the endings. Part 3 will now have lots of build up and a cliffhanger ending. Looks like I'm gonna be around for a little longer than planned. Just wish there were more hours in the day

Laterz
Tony

www.trydowave.com

P.s. Off to draw Final battle cover as I have no script yet....

Oh, Schweet! More Turncoat is such a schway notion.

I agree with your sentiments exactly. Don't force the ending if it isn't ready yet.

Do you remember a few years back when you were planning on making "Part 2" the final installment? I think around that issue's half-way point, I recommended a shorter "Chapter 3" to really give a focus to the final battle scenes. And now, here we are again after another 54 pages! Bring it on!

Tony Day · 06-05-2012, 11:22 AM

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Originally Posted by oldmanwinters

Do you remember a few years back when you were planning on making "Part 2" the final installment? I think around that issue's half-way point, I recommended a shorter "Chapter 3" to really give a focus to the final battle scenes. And now, here we are again after another 54 pages! Bring it on!

Yup. Oh how long ago it all seems now

Tony Day · 07-18-2012, 07:37 PM

Just posted page 55 of turncoat pt3 after a massive break. Got laid off from work recently, but, on a positive note at least ill have enough time to do some more pages

.

Laterz dudes
Tony
www.trydowave.com

*oldmanwinters* · 07-18-2012, 09:00 PM

Welcome back (again), Tony.

That stinks about the job though. I hope something turns up for you soon.

05-17-2012, 04:42 PM	#762
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Page 53 of Turncoat pt 3 is up Hi folks... Page 53 is up Talk soon Tony www.trydowave.com

05-17-2012, 07:00 PM	#767
oldmanwinters Overlord Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Between yesterday and tomorrow! Posts: 15,511	Tony, I'm so glad you persevered some of the classic Rocksteady and Bebop incompetence in this comic! That bit with the machine gun was so funny! __________________ Experience the TMNT Fan Commentaries! Check out my TMNT fan comic, "Nothing to Fear"! View my sketch work! I'm selling some of my hard-to-find TMNT items!

05-17-2012, 07:28 PM	#768
Jester Rat-faced Dude-guy Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Arkansas Posts: 26,301	Tony, will we see you around once Turncoat is finished? Please say yes. __________________ "Clearly, you're Ninja Turtling incorrectly." - Leo656

05-18-2012, 10:42 AM	#770
oldmanwinters Overlord Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Between yesterday and tomorrow! Posts: 15,511	Yeah, Tony, don't be a stranger once Turncoat is finished! I know it's gonna be a bittersweet moment for me when the comic if finished (regardless of whether the ending is happy or sad), because I've been one of those long-time readers. __________________ Experience the TMNT Fan Commentaries! Check out my TMNT fan comic, "Nothing to Fear"! View my sketch work! I'm selling some of my hard-to-find TMNT items!

06-04-2012, 03:39 PM	#771
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Page 54 is up Hi. Page 54 is up. Soz for taking ages. Got myself a job finally and its really hard to do a page other than on the weekends now. Anyways.. more soon Tony www.trydowave.com

05-17-2012, 06:31 PM	#765
cartoonistaaron Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 737	The art in this thing is fantastic! Somebody get IDW on the phone!!

05-18-2012, 04:24 AM	#769
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	I'll still be floating around once it's finished but I will be taking a break from drawing the turtles. Been doing it for a long time now. Might come back for a short story in future. Afterwards i'll be concentration on learning some new software. To stop getting too rusty i'll be drawing stand alone pictures like the ones found in my gallery and maybe finally dipping into animation. Anyways... still lots more to come and a juicy conclusion Laterz Tony www.trydowave.com

06-05-2012, 08:47 AM	#775
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Once i get the finished script back from Alan and if it doesn't fit right for whatever reason ill do a final short chapter. Called Turncoat the final battle or something like that. Kinda like 'V' the 80's TV series (don't know if you're old enuf to remember that!) I will be trying my damnedest to fit it in this chapter though. Tony www.trydowave.com Last edited by Tony Day; 06-05-2012 at 08:58 AM.

06-05-2012, 10:43 AM	#776
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Chapter 4 (Final Battle) Just planning the layout for the ending (7 pages in all) and I have come to this conclusion. It isn't enough. I fitted the story in there OK but not in a satisfying way. Key, important plot points and scenes are explained in one pages each. It has the rushed ending feel of most animes!!! If I end it like that it will cheapen the whole project. Put too many hours in to let that happen and i've done it before with previous comics. So... me and Alan are creating Part 4. Just did it now in fact on the phone (the idea anyway). It will be called Turncoat the Final Battle (ala 'V ) Not part 4. And it will be much shorter. Comprising of the fight, and the endings. Part 3 will now have lots of build up and a cliffhanger ending. Looks like I'll be doing this for a little longer than planned. Just wish there were more hours in the day Laterz Tony www.trydowave.com P.s. Off to draw Final battle cover as I have no script yet.... Last edited by Tony Day; 06-05-2012 at 10:50 AM.

07-18-2012, 07:37 PM	#779
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Page 55 is up (finally) Just posted page 55 of turncoat pt3 after a massive break. Got laid off from work recently, but, on a positive note at least ill have enough time to do some more pages . Laterz dudes Tony www.trydowave.com

07-18-2012, 09:00 PM	#780
oldmanwinters Overlord Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Between yesterday and tomorrow! Posts: 15,511	Welcome back (again), Tony. That stinks about the job though. I hope something turns up for you soon. __________________ Experience the TMNT Fan Commentaries! Check out my TMNT fan comic, "Nothing to Fear"! View my sketch work! I'm selling some of my hard-to-find TMNT items!