Turtle Turncoat

[ZariusTwo]

Looking glorious. What will a pissed Splinter look like?

[Tony Day]

I've changed Leos dialogue. I originally wrote that for Mike

[oldmanwinters]

Originally Posted by Tony Day

I've changed Leos dialogue. I originally wrote that for Mike

It did strike me as out of character when I read that line from Leo's mouth. Definitely something more fitting for Mikey's personality.

[Jephael]

Hey, Leonardo's allowed to make with the wisecracks as well, just like Donatello's allowed to lose his temper from time to time. Their personalities aren't confined to their roles.

[Gadget]

eee! being a long time reader wanted to congratulate you on finishing Turtle Turncoat (I'm not sure whether i said that earlier though...) but also just found you're drwing another comic can't wait to read.
I am also kinda hoping Shredder comes back somehow...him being my favourite also hah.

[Tony Day]

Hi yall sorry been gone for so long, moving home again, working weekends and all that boring crap. Been busy with the comic though. just completed drawing and inking of page 50. Just 10 pages to go before completion now (not including colouring )

In the meantime heres page 10...

http://www.trydowave.com/issue1.htm


Hope ya like...

Thanks Gadget. Glad u liked Turncoat. As for Shredder... A version of the Shredder makes an appearance. That's all im gonna say for now.

I will continue to draw him in future though as hes my fave character too. When ever I got a biro in my hands im always scribbling little shredder heads on bits of scrap paper

Laters all
Tony

www.trydowave.com

[oldmanwinters]

Welcome back, Tony!

There's a type in the 2nd panel:
Splinter should say "all this is . . ."

And remind me... was "Kuso!" his Japanese expression? You might want to consider the old comic trip of putting the English "translation" (assuming it has one) in a box at the bottom of the panel and noting it with an asterisk or something in the speech bubble.

[ZariusTwo]

Good work Tony

[Gadget]

Originally Posted by Tony Day

Hi yall sorry been gone for so long, moving home again, working weekends and all that boring crap. Been busy with the comic though. just completed drawing and inking of page 50. Just 10 pages to go before completion now (not including colouring )

In the meantime heres page 10...

http://www.trydowave.com/issue1.htm


Hope ya like...

Thanks Gadget. Glad u liked Turncoat. As for Shredder... A version of the Shredder makes an appearance. That's all im gonna say for now.

I will continue to draw him in future though as hes my fave character too. When ever I got a biro in my hands im always scribbling little shredder heads on bits of scrap paper

Laters all
Tony

www.trydowave.com

Well you can really see that he's a favourite, i just love the way you draw Shredder! Really looking forward to more, whatever you decide to work on next. Keep it up and good luck

[Tony Day]

correction done.... I must of been really tired to miss that one.

Btw Adam. Ill be finishing up all the tweaking of the script soon. Do u mind if I send the rest over to u so u could have a look through it?

As for Kuzo!. I wont put the explanation for it in the comic as its a very rude word

[oldmanwinters]

Originally Posted by Tony Day

correction done.... I must of been really tired to miss that one.

Btw Adam. Ill be finishing up all the tweaking of the script soon. Do u mind if I send the rest over to u so u could have a look through it?

As for Kuzo!. I wont put the explanation for it in the comic as its a very rude word

Send it my way!

I think you've got the right idea about not putting the literal translation, but maybe to make it clear what's going on, you might make a little joke in the explanatory box... maybe something like "Japanese for !!!!!" or "you don't wanna know!"

[Fang Wolf]

Originally Posted by Tony Day

As for Shredder... A version of the Shredder makes an appearance. That's all im gonna say for now.

A version of Shredder? *Hm, I read right?*
What kind version of the Shredder will show up?.

[Tony Day]

Living out of boxes round my sisters at the moment as im moving house. Had my graphire tablet and pen right here and now the sodding pens missing!

I bet one of her kids got it. Could be anywhere in the house!

I cant colour any of my comic until I find it (the mouse is beyond crap). what's worse is these cheap little plastic pens cost a fortune, especially if you have to buy a tablet with it.

Hoping it turns up

[Fang Wolf]

That was bad news, Matey.
I Hope you find it....

[Tony Day]

found it

[Tony Day]

Hi ya'll . Page 11 is up for viewing

http://trydowave.com/issue1.htm

Cya
Tony

http://trydowave.com

[oldmanwinters]

Originally Posted by Tony Day

Hi ya'll . Page 11 is up for viewing

http://trydowave.com/issue1.htm

Cya
Tony

http://trydowave.com

Herd 'em up! Mooove 'em out!

So glad you found that pen!

[Tony Day]

hi everyone. page 12 is up, finally.

http://trydowave.com/issue1.htm

cya

tony

http://trydowave.com

[oldmanwinters]

Very convincing work on that interdimensional technobabble! That cow just said a mouth-full!

[Tony Day]

thanks. getting most of those plot points out of the way.

Next page (13) is up:
http://trydowave.com/issue1.htm

More to follow

Tony

http://trydowave.com