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*Skeletoncrew* · 09-18-2002, 10:02 PM

Oh my, you actually read it Machias?

I thought you didn't usually do the NC-17 thing!

Now I'm really flattered!

**Machias Banshee** · 09-18-2002, 10:04 PM

"Boys night out" caught my interest...I'm loving "Relaxation"...I just wanted to see what else you've been up to...

*Skeletoncrew* · 09-18-2002, 10:07 PM

Now you know what a sick little girl I truly am.

Don't worry, I should have Relaxation finished in a day or two. Heh heh heh...the guys are gonna get it!

**Machias Banshee** · 09-18-2002, 10:09 PM

*Will GLADLY proofread!!!!!!!!*

what can i say, you've corrupted me beyond repair...

*terran631* · 09-18-2002, 10:09 PM

I loved Relaxation even better than Boys Night Out because Splinter was so completely innocent and he looked so...uh...guilty. I hope he nails whoever that magazine belongs to.

**Machias Banshee** · 09-18-2002, 10:10 PM

There'd be a nice pic...splinter standing in the livign room, wearing just a towel and a smile...

*Skeletoncrew* · 09-18-2002, 10:16 PM

((I still think Boy's Night Out is my favorite, it was so fun to shock everyone. I love reading the feedback on it! But Relaxation is working out nicely too.))

Well, maybe you can both give me an opinion. I was originally going to have Splinter doing a couple extra things to shock them when they got home. Probably watching something immature and drinking beer. Sort of to knock them a bit more off kilter.

But now I've started thinking that I won't do that. I'll have him relaxing, watching TV, but doing nothing particularly un-Splinterish. I figure they'll feel a lot more sheepish if he's presenting his normal respectable demeanor.

Thoughts?

**Machias Banshee** · 09-18-2002, 10:20 PM

keep his respectable demeanor...You dont want people flaming you for out-of-character characters...

*terran631* · 09-18-2002, 10:24 PM

What Machias said is true, but if you're looking to unbalance the guys than I think keeping Splinter's demeanor serious is the way to go anyway. It may seem too funny if they came home and he was having a beer. (although Leo would probably pass out)

**Machias Banshee** · 09-18-2002, 10:25 PM

(although Leo would probably pass out)

which would be very funny...

*Skeletoncrew* · 09-18-2002, 10:29 PM

Actually, that's pretty much how I originally wrote it. Leo saw him drinking the beer and was reduced to a gibbering turtle once more (I've been being rather mean to him in this fic, poor guy). But now I'm sure I want to go with the "Serious Sensei".

**Machias Banshee** · 09-18-2002, 10:32 PM

Go with the serious sensei, then, when the truth is revealed, he can turn into 'Drill Sargeant Sensei'...

*terran631* · 09-18-2002, 10:39 PM

Drill Sergeant Sensei??

Why are people obsessed with turning Leo into a gibbering idiot?

Poor turtle.

**Machias Banshee** · 09-18-2002, 10:39 PM

They just like to see him feel uncomfortable...I'd like to have him feel vulnerable, then hug him all better...

*Skeletoncrew* · 09-18-2002, 10:43 PM

I do think Leo does often get a rather hard time from Fic writers. I think that's cause he's easy to pick on. He's the "Good one". You want to show that he's not perfect. I've really not written a whole lot with him because I don't relate to him well. I'm a Mikey kinda girl. Wild and Crazy!

**Machias Banshee** · 09-18-2002, 10:44 PM

Yup, just a bunch of troublemakers!

**Kali** · 09-19-2002, 09:29 AM

LOL! Poor Leo. It's fun trying to catch him off guard. I've got a line I just have to throw into a fic somewhere (and luckily I have a character in mind who would say this.) The new leader of the New York Foot, a woman, is trying to make a truce/alliance with the Turtles. Of course, Leo doesn't trust her and thinks "she has something up her sleeve." Her response? "You can frisk me if it'll make you feel better." It'll sound better written out in its entirety.

Ooh, and I promise to read your new story, SC, a bit later today. I would have yesterday, but my friends dragged me off to talk about moving plans, and only managed to convince me even further that I do not want to move out with them.

**HorseTechie** · 09-19-2002, 10:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Skeletoncrew

I do think Leo does often get a rather hard time from Fic writers. I think that's cause he's easy to pick on. He's the "Good one". You want to show that he's not perfect. I've really not written a whole lot with him because I don't relate to him well. I'm a Mikey kinda girl. Wild and Crazy!

Yeah...

I (as Raph) made him drunk in the Alpha Source round robin.

Ooo.. even Dooney did something similar to him in the Challenges book. Leo comes off sounding all prim and proper, then at the end, Raph storms in wondering who signed him up for the Barry Manilow fanclub. Leo just falls over in laughter instead of trying to hide the fact.

*Skeletoncrew* · 09-19-2002, 02:59 PM

I think I need Azure to threaten me with his katana. I should be working on "Relaxation" right now, but I'm not.

*terran631* · 09-19-2002, 03:00 PM

Hmm...I don't have a katana, but I have a butter knife. Would that be a good threat?

09-18-2002, 10:02 PM	#161
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Oh my, you actually read it Machias? I thought you didn't usually do the NC-17 thing! Now I'm really flattered! __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

09-18-2002, 10:04 PM	#162
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	Heh, just dont advertise it everywhere.... "Boys night out" caught my interest...I'm loving "Relaxation"...I just wanted to see what else you've been up to...

09-18-2002, 10:07 PM	#163
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Now you know what a sick little girl I truly am. Don't worry, I should have Relaxation finished in a day or two. Heh heh heh...the guys are gonna get it! __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

09-18-2002, 10:16 PM	#167
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	((I still think Boy's Night Out is my favorite, it was so fun to shock everyone. I love reading the feedback on it! But Relaxation is working out nicely too.)) Well, maybe you can both give me an opinion. I was originally going to have Splinter doing a couple extra things to shock them when they got home. Probably watching something immature and drinking beer. Sort of to knock them a bit more off kilter. But now I've started thinking that I won't do that. I'll have him relaxing, watching TV, but doing nothing particularly un-Splinterish. I figure they'll feel a lot more sheepish if he's presenting his normal respectable demeanor. Thoughts? __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

09-18-2002, 10:29 PM	#171
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	Actually, that's pretty much how I originally wrote it. Leo saw him drinking the beer and was reduced to a gibbering turtle once more (I've been being rather mean to him in this fic, poor guy). But now I'm sure I want to go with the "Serious Sensei". __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

09-18-2002, 10:09 PM	#164
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	Will GLADLY proofread!!!!!!!! what can i say, you've corrupted me beyond repair...

09-18-2002, 10:09 PM	#165
terran631 The Defender of Splinter Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Third Rock from the Sun Posts: 3,948	I loved Relaxation even better than Boys Night Out because Splinter was so completely innocent and he looked so...uh...guilty. I hope he nails whoever that magazine belongs to.

09-18-2002, 10:10 PM	#166
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	There'd be a nice pic...splinter standing in the livign room, wearing just a towel and a smile...

09-18-2002, 10:20 PM	#168
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	keep his respectable demeanor...You dont want people flaming you for out-of-character characters...

09-18-2002, 10:24 PM	#169
terran631 The Defender of Splinter Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Third Rock from the Sun Posts: 3,948	What Machias said is true, but if you're looking to unbalance the guys than I think keeping Splinter's demeanor serious is the way to go anyway. It may seem too funny if they came home and he was having a beer. (although Leo would probably pass out)

09-18-2002, 10:25 PM	#170
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	(although Leo would probably pass out) which would be very funny...

09-18-2002, 10:32 PM	#172
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	Go with the serious sensei, then, when the truth is revealed, he can turn into 'Drill Sargeant Sensei'...

09-18-2002, 10:39 PM	#173
terran631 The Defender of Splinter Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Third Rock from the Sun Posts: 3,948	Drill Sergeant Sensei?? Why are people obsessed with turning Leo into a gibbering idiot? Poor turtle.

09-18-2002, 10:39 PM	#174
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	They just like to see him feel uncomfortable...I'd like to have him feel vulnerable, then hug him all better...

09-18-2002, 10:43 PM	#175
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	I do think Leo does often get a rather hard time from Fic writers. I think that's cause he's easy to pick on. He's the "Good one". You want to show that he's not perfect. I've really not written a whole lot with him because I don't relate to him well. I'm a Mikey kinda girl. Wild and Crazy! __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

09-18-2002, 10:44 PM	#176
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	Yup, just a bunch of troublemakers!

09-19-2002, 09:29 AM	#177
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	LOL! Poor Leo. It's fun trying to catch him off guard. I've got a line I just have to throw into a fic somewhere (and luckily I have a character in mind who would say this.) The new leader of the New York Foot, a woman, is trying to make a truce/alliance with the Turtles. Of course, Leo doesn't trust her and thinks "she has something up her sleeve." Her response? "You can frisk me if it'll make you feel better." It'll sound better written out in its entirety. Ooh, and I promise to read your new story, SC, a bit later today. I would have yesterday, but my friends dragged me off to talk about moving plans, and only managed to convince me even further that I do not want to move out with them.

09-19-2002, 02:59 PM	#179
Skeletoncrew Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Bearing in on your spicy brains Posts: 3,275	I think I need Azure to threaten me with his katana. I should be working on "Relaxation" right now, but I'm not. __________________ Adult TMNT fan art and fiction contest Now accepting entries!

09-19-2002, 03:00 PM	#180
terran631 The Defender of Splinter Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Third Rock from the Sun Posts: 3,948	Hmm...I don't have a katana, but I have a butter knife. Would that be a good threat?