Turtle Turncoat - Page 9

*oldmanwinters* · 09-11-2007, 04:45 PM

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Originally Posted by Tony Day

How you doing Adam? Hope things have been going good for you...
Yeah. Feels like years to me too... wait a minute it has been years.. U know I think I started this comic in 2001?
I wanted his journey to the dark side, so to speak, be gradual instead of him becoming bad in a few pages. I sort of pulled it off, but it suffered because of my writing.
I'm just glad that Alan's on board. Page 9 is half colored and will be up in a few hours

Funny you mentioned the starwars connection... Shredder uses the word farther in the script coming up lol

I'm doing very well, Tony, thanks for asking. I figured there has always been a Star Wars-ish element to the Turtles & Shredder, since in most universes he played a key role in exposing them to the mutagen. And in the comics, he is the motivation for their training. I think the illegitimate father angle is worth playing up.

And the new pages are great, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Tony Day · 10-06-2007, 01:57 AM

Hi there again... Soz its been a month... gonna get to work on the next one tommorow.

http://www.trydowave.com/turncoatpt2.web.htm

*oldmanwinters* · 10-08-2007, 12:42 AM

Very nice, Tony. I especially love that night sky coloring style. The store below the rooftop scene was a great asthestic touch.

It's nice to see the comic finally manifesting its promised title. Poor Raph, it doesn't look like he's got much logic left against the Dark Side of the Foot.

*Whitewolf89* · 10-08-2007, 02:02 PM

I just hope that he doesn't end up making the wriong decision; one that will lose him his TRUE family, and they him; forever. But the name of this comic is "Turtle Turncoat " for a very DEFINITE reason, right, bro?

Something just tells ME that things are gonna get a LOT worse for Raph and those that, deep down in his heart of heats, he STILL loves VERY deeply (and that DOES include his brothers, whether or not he believes it at the moment), before it gets better.

And after what he's gone through against Shredder and the Foot (okay, AND Krang and the mutidiots (YOU all know who I mean

)), that Raph would be MORE than a bit leery of what Saki's telling him. But he's still hurting at the moment, so I'm afraid he's about to make THE biggest mistake of his entire young life!

And I could just BAP him for just STANDING there while Saki badmouths Splinter. Raph still loves and respects him, and he KNOWS what Ol' Tin-Grin;s saying is a big ol' stinkin' pile of manure! But we ALL know that you've got the plot all hidden in your sneaky l'il mind, so I PERSONALLY can't WAIT to see what happens in the next page, and pages.

Keep up the rad work, bro! This looking great!!!

turkishproverb · 10-10-2007, 11:27 PM

Well, his brothers DID try to kill him until april got involved...

Besides which, shredder is having the brains not to act like the poor wounded puppy, or to apologise. He's being buisinesslike about it.

*Whitewolf89* · 10-11-2007, 01:27 PM

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Originally Posted by turkishproverb

Well, his brothers DID try to kill him until april got involved...

Besides which, shredder is having the brains not to act like the poor wounded puppy, or to apologise. He's being buisinesslike about it.

Hmmm, true dat, to both comments.

*shuriken* · 10-16-2007, 11:05 PM

Wow. this is an awesome web Comic, keep up the good work.

Tony Day · 10-31-2007, 01:12 AM

Hi all, thanx for the comments.... the next page is up finally...

http://www.trydowave.com/turncoatpt2.web.htm

*oldmanwinters* · 10-31-2007, 07:57 PM

I love how Shredder was "holding back" until the right moment. It really adds to his intimidation factor. And it felt bizzare in that last panel when the two grabbed arms as if they were old friends. I feel like Raph is in for trouble, but I am glad this comic is coming along good.

Tony Day · 11-03-2007, 10:50 PM

What u up to? Glad u like the strip and yes its all down hill now for raph. Ive sent an email to the writer (allan) and Im currently waiting for new script. So until hes gets up of his ass! I wont be doing anymore (only kidding al.)
Im sure ill get more script soon...
Btw. Do u know if there making another TMNT movie?
at the end I saw shredders mask. If they do make one I hope hes in it. Coz hes the greatest!
Anyways talk soon
Tony

*oldmanwinters* · 11-05-2007, 09:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

What u up to? Glad u like the strip and yes its all down hill now for raph.

Just keeping up with my seminary classes. I always look forward to a T.Turncoat update. I look forward to Raph's demise with both sadness and suspense. This will be the ultimate "What-IF" TMNT scenario, I'm sure.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

Btw. Do u know if there making another TMNT movie? at the end I saw shredders mask. If they do make one I hope hes in it. Coz hes the greatest!
Anyways talk soon
Tony

No confirmation or denial just yet. The latest official news can be found here:http://the-5th-turtle.blogspot.com/2...ood-grief.html
Right now there is some hesitation on the part of the distributor for the first film (Warner Bros.) to green light Imagi to make a sequel. WB apparently wanted a block-buster for the first film which only performed moderately well. Mirage and Imagi are still in talks, so we'll see. A sequel definitely should be made if only to get the Shredder back on the big screen!

dejawolf · 11-08-2007, 02:40 AM

oh this one's truly picking up speed now.
better than SW: episode 3

Tony Day · 11-20-2007, 03:57 PM

Hi, just wanted to say that the comic isnt on hold, just waiting for some script to come through!
Laterz

Tony Day · 03-07-2008, 03:49 PM

Hi all. Im back and I wanted to let ya know that 3 new pages are up now for u to read.... thats if u remember my comic as its been so long!

More pages coming soon

Also if ya like, check out my transformers 2d animation on youtube, heres the link...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dtJmc0R7tEM

Laterz
Tony
http://www.trydowave.com/

*oldmanwinters* · 03-07-2008, 07:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

Hi all. Im back and I wanted to let ya know that 3 new pages are up now for u to read.... thats if u remember my comic as its been so long!

More pages coming soon

Wow! I was just thinking about how much I've wanted to see more of the story. I love that training sequence between Raph and Shredder. At least Raph still appears to display a shred of reluctance to give in to the Dark Side!

Keep it comin', Tony. At your own pace, of course!

Tony Day · 03-07-2008, 07:35 PM

Hi man howz it going long time no talk. Glad u like it. I would say that the comics delayed because of Als lack of writing a script but that aint true.

Apart from the moving problems my daughter was born a few months back and everything has been really hectic since then. I will be trying to get more of the comic coming though, along with the animation thing...

Anyway, let me know how youve been and i hope well talk soon

Laterz
Tony

*Buslady* · 03-10-2008, 09:45 AM

Man April's got big honkin boobs for someone so skinny...they look like she had a job done on 'em LOL!! Guess Casey won the lottery, "hey babe, lets get you a boob job done!"

Tony Day · 03-27-2008, 03:42 AM

Hi all... pages 15 & 16 are up for viewing...

buslady... What can i say, im a fan of big honkin boobs!

but thanx for the comments anyway...

more coming soon....

http://www.trydowave.com/

*Tinuvielsdreams* · 03-27-2008, 06:16 PM

This is the first I have been on your site and I read the whole thing so far. I am just really loving the colors. I am anxious to see where you go with this story plot...Raph has turned which way will he go?
One thing though in part one I really felt for him when he left the lair. He really does seem so effected by his own existence.

Yeah Buslady April is uber comic book babe here, that's for sure.
It's funny that her bra and panties were yellow too!

Tony Day · 03-28-2008, 07:12 PM

Page 17 for turncoat part 2 is now up....
Next some fighting between the turtles and rocksteady and beebop

Tinuvielsdreams, Glad u appreciate the colours as it really does take me a very long time to do...

Laterz

http://www.trydowave.com/

10-06-2007, 01:57 AM	#162
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 555	Page 10 of Turtle Turncoat Pt 2 is up... Hi there again... Soz its been a month... gonna get to work on the next one tommorow. http://www.trydowave.com/turncoatpt2.web.htm

10-08-2007, 02:02 PM	#164
Whitewolf89 Freedom Fighter and Ninja Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Currently residing in the Turtles' Lair, NYC sewer system, NYC, NY Posts: 2,927	I just hope that he doesn't end up making the wriong decision; one that will lose him his TRUE family, and they him; forever. But the name of this comic is "Turtle Turncoat " for a very DEFINITE reason, right, bro? Something just tells ME that things are gonna get a LOT worse for Raph and those that, deep down in his heart of heats, he STILL loves VERY deeply (and that DOES include his brothers, whether or not he believes it at the moment), before it gets better. And after what he's gone through against Shredder and the Foot (okay, AND Krang and the mutidiots (YOU all know who I mean)), that Raph would be MORE than a bit leery of what Saki's telling him. But he's still hurting at the moment, so I'm afraid he's about to make THE biggest mistake of his entire young life! And I could just BAP him for just STANDING there while Saki badmouths Splinter. Raph still loves and respects him, and he KNOWS what Ol' Tin-Grin;s saying is a big ol' stinkin' pile of manure! But we ALL know that you've got the plot all hidden in your sneaky l'il mind, so I PERSONALLY can't WAIT to see what happens in the next page, and pages. Keep up the rad work, bro! This looking great!!! __________________ Brother against brother........... Last edited by Whitewolf89; 10-11-2007 at 01:26 PM.

10-16-2007, 11:05 PM	#167
shuriken Second City Shinobi Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Chi-town Posts: 4,182	Wow. this is an awesome web Comic, keep up the good work. __________________ Some things are better left unsaid. This isn't one of them

10-31-2007, 01:12 AM	#168
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 555	Page 11 up. Hi all, thanx for the comments.... the next page is up finally... http://www.trydowave.com/turncoatpt2.web.htm

11-03-2007, 10:50 PM	#170
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 555	Hi Adam What u up to? Glad u like the strip and yes its all down hill now for raph. Ive sent an email to the writer (allan) and Im currently waiting for new script. So until hes gets up of his ass! I wont be doing anymore (only kidding al.) Im sure ill get more script soon... Btw. Do u know if there making another TMNT movie? at the end I saw shredders mask. If they do make one I hope hes in it. Coz hes the greatest! Anyways talk soon Tony

10-08-2007, 12:42 AM	#163
oldmanwinters Overlord Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Between yesterday and tomorrow! Posts: 14,964	Very nice, Tony. I especially love that night sky coloring style. The store below the rooftop scene was a great asthestic touch. It's nice to see the comic finally manifesting its promised title. Poor Raph, it doesn't look like he's got much logic left against the Dark Side of the Foot.

10-31-2007, 07:57 PM	#169
oldmanwinters Overlord Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Between yesterday and tomorrow! Posts: 14,964	I love how Shredder was "holding back" until the right moment. It really adds to his intimidation factor. And it felt bizzare in that last panel when the two grabbed arms as if they were old friends. I feel like Raph is in for trouble, but I am glad this comic is coming along good.

11-08-2007, 02:40 AM	#172
dejawolf Foot Soldier Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: norway Posts: 141	oh this one's truly picking up speed now. better than SW: episode 3 __________________ one of the first english words i ever learned, was leatherhead.

11-20-2007, 03:57 PM	#173
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 555	Havent put the comic on hold Hi, just wanted to say that the comic isnt on hold, just waiting for some script to come through! Laterz

03-07-2008, 03:49 PM	#174
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 555	New Pages Of Turtle Turncoat Part 2 Are Up Hi all. Im back and I wanted to let ya know that 3 new pages are up now for u to read.... thats if u remember my comic as its been so long! More pages coming soon Also if ya like, check out my transformers 2d animation on youtube, heres the link... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dtJmc0R7tEM Laterz Tony http://www.trydowave.com/ Last edited by Tony Day; 03-07-2008 at 03:56 PM.

03-07-2008, 07:35 PM	#176
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 555	Hi Adam Hi man howz it going long time no talk. Glad u like it. I would say that the comics delayed because of Als lack of writing a script but that aint true. Apart from the moving problems my daughter was born a few months back and everything has been really hectic since then. I will be trying to get more of the comic coming though, along with the animation thing... Anyway, let me know how youve been and i hope well talk soon Laterz Tony

03-10-2008, 09:45 AM	#177
Buslady WingsOfDarkness! Perkele! Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: In 7803... Posts: 4,366	Man April's got big honkin boobs for someone so skinny...they look like she had a job done on 'em LOL!! Guess Casey won the lottery, "hey babe, lets get you a boob job done!" __________________

03-27-2008, 03:42 AM	#178
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 555	More pages up.... Hi all... pages 15 & 16 are up for viewing... buslady... What can i say, im a fan of big honkin boobs! but thanx for the comments anyway... more coming soon.... http://www.trydowave.com/

03-27-2008, 06:16 PM	#179
Tinuvielsdreams Nothing without passion Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 1,722	This is the first I have been on your site and I read the whole thing so far. I am just really loving the colors. I am anxious to see where you go with this story plot...Raph has turned which way will he go? One thing though in part one I really felt for him when he left the lair. He really does seem so effected by his own existence. Yeah Buslady April is uber comic book babe here, that's for sure. It's funny that her bra and panties were yellow too!

03-28-2008, 07:12 PM	#180
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 555	Page 17 Is Up Page 17 for turncoat part 2 is now up.... Next some fighting between the turtles and rocksteady and beebop Tinuvielsdreams, Glad u appreciate the colours as it really does take me a very long time to do... Laterz http://www.trydowave.com/ Last edited by Tony Day; 03-28-2008 at 07:21 PM.