Fanfic update-for anyone who wants to pimp their stories/art - Page 15

Sleepingseeker · 05-30-2013, 09:44 AM

Okay, Chapter 10 is up now and it features the rematch you've been waiting for between Donnie and Casey. I had planned this scene when I first started part 2 of The Tender Trap, but I couldn't help but set it aside and dedicate it to my Donatello lovers out there. XD Here ya go!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9250973/...he-Tender-Trap

Sleepingseeker · 05-30-2013, 09:46 AM

Zarius, your story is great fun! I hope I'm not driving you too nuts with my rambling reviews! I just can't help myself, especially when I'm up late reading, I get a little slap happy. But I'm really having fun reading your story

*ZariusTwo* · 05-30-2013, 10:07 AM

It's great that you're having a good time Sleepy, I don't mind you raving at all. You're a very passionate writer. I'm astounded you have so many reviews for so few chapters in your Tender Trap follow-up. Wow.

I'm checking up on your fics and they're great, very devilishly detailed in their depictions of physical conflict, you really flesh these characters out and have a frank honesty about them.

*BubblyShell22* · 05-30-2013, 03:35 PM

Read and reviewed your stories, Zarius and SS. Awesome work on your chapters.

*MsMarvelDuckie* · 05-30-2013, 09:03 PM

Thanks, DN82! I went for a mix of OT/movie Raph. Same with all the others, although I think maybe more 2K3 on Donnie, now that I've gotten further into it. Heh, just wait til you get to the, erm, "talk" between Donnie and the heroine later on. It's really funny and awkward..... Should have an update soon, if anyone wants to see more, just say so!

DonatelloNinja82 · 05-31-2013, 03:58 AM

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Originally Posted by MsMarvelDuckie

Thanks, DN82! I went for a mix of OT/movie Raph. Same with all the others, although I think maybe more 2K3 on Donnie, now that I've gotten further into it. Heh, just wait til you get to the, erm, "talk" between Donnie and the heroine later on. It's really funny and awkward..... Should have an update soon, if anyone wants to see more, just say so!

That's what I felt, too, he did seem like a mix between OT/movie Raph

Look forward to your updat

Sleepingseeker · 05-31-2013, 08:32 AM

Why thank you! Yes, I've been a bit obsessed with the guys for a long time and only since December have I put my ideas out in the public eye - it's been a wonderful experience full of kind and supportive people. Giving me the courage to work on an OF novel in between my fanfic stuff.
I look forward to reading more of your stories as well as finding a bunch more that capture the TMNT characters in a serious way.
SS xo

DonatelloNinja82 · 06-01-2013, 01:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sleepingseeker

Why thank you! Yes, I've been a bit obsessed with the guys for a long time and only since December have I put my ideas out in the public eye - it's been a wonderful experience full of kind and supportive people. Giving me the courage to work on an OF novel in between my fanfic stuff.
I look forward to reading more of your stories as well as finding a bunch more that capture the TMNT characters in a serious way.
SS xo

I just spent hours reading "The Long Way Home" and just wow!! You are very talented...It's 3 am...so I will read Tender Trap later

*MsMarvelDuckie* · 06-01-2013, 01:55 AM

SS, I just read through some of your tales, and WOW! Great job. I really liked the one-off of "Mikey's Girl". Sweet and sad. Really getting into Tender Trap Pt 2, as well. Kudos!! (With chocolate chips!) I'm liking this take on Leo/Karai, as well as the April/Don/Casey thing you've got going here. And I really got a kick out of that scene at Leo's birthday party with the girls. Mikey really must've enjoyed himself, LOL! (Okay, he's my fave, so I always enjoy seeing him get some love from other writers....)

DonatelloNinja82 · 06-01-2013, 02:04 AM

Chapter 2 of The Lesser of Two Evils is up.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9337612/...r-of-Two-Evils

*ZariusTwo* · 06-01-2013, 03:33 AM

Great chapter DNNinja. Definitely checked it out and reviewed.

Next updates from me will come around Tuesday and Thursday next week. I also aim to get the first few chapters of the next book in my 80s toon series up before the end of the month.

*BubblyShell22* · 06-01-2013, 07:34 AM

Just read and reviewed it, DN. Awesome job as always.

And, Zarius, I'll be sure to check out those updates. Can't wait.

DonatelloNinja82 · 06-01-2013, 07:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZariusTwo

Great chapter DNNinja. Definitely checked it out and reviewed.

Next updates from me will come around Tuesday and Thursday next week. I also aim to get the first few chapters of the next book in my 80s toon series up before the end of the month.

I love the 80s toon stories! I cannot wait! And thanks for the review!

Quote:

Originally Posted by BubblyShell22

Just read and reviewed it, DN. Awesome job as always.

And, Zarius, I'll be sure to check out those updates. Can't wait.

Thank you!!!

DonatelloNinja82 · 06-01-2013, 02:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZariusTwo

Great chapter DNNinja. Definitely checked it out and reviewed.

Next updates from me will come around Tuesday and Thursday next week. I also aim to get the first few chapters of the next book in my 80s toon series up before the end of the month.

Reread We are Shadows and left reviews

I love this so much! I love your take on the turtles and their personalities. They are a great mix of different incarnations. The battle scenes are exciting, and the coversation is excellent!

*ZariusTwo* · 06-01-2013, 02:53 PM

Wow, thanks for your kind words, really glad to have my homework marked by fans who know their stuff

DonatelloNinja82 · 06-01-2013, 04:49 PM

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Originally Posted by ZariusTwo

Wow, thanks for your kind words, really glad to have my homework marked by fans who know their stuff

Ohhh yes, I love the references to different incarnations you have there. I also forgot to mention I noticed the "ow, ow, my toe, my toe" by Mikey...totally from Turtles in Time

*MsMarvelDuckie* · 06-01-2013, 06:56 PM

SS: I just finished "The Long Way Home", and it was most pleased. A great tale, and an interesting take on splinter/Shredder. I liked the conflicts between the characters, and I'd love to see more of this version. Really liking Deborah, and the Mistress was a cool villainess!

Bossa Nova · 06-04-2013, 12:59 AM

Well, since the thread title does include art, thought I'd try a little pimping of a couple of my recent artpieces. They belong to an AU series I'm working on titled A Waste of Silver, so they still include a bit of fanfiction.

Leo: http://bossanovaink.deviantart.com/a...t&ga_changes=1
Raph: http://bossanovaink.deviantart.com/a...253A1370215065

Donnie should be done fairly soon and hopefully Mike not too long after.

*ZariusTwo* · 06-04-2013, 04:34 AM

First of two "We Are Shadows" updates this week

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9147756/1/We-Are-Shadows

*BubblyShell22* · 06-04-2013, 07:31 AM

Just read and reviewed it, Zar. Nice job. Can't wait for more.

05-30-2013, 09:44 AM	#281
Sleepingseeker Foot Soldier Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Chicago Posts: 213	Donnie VS Casey Part two Okay, Chapter 10 is up now and it features the rematch you've been waiting for between Donnie and Casey. I had planned this scene when I first started part 2 of The Tender Trap, but I couldn't help but set it aside and dedicate it to my Donatello lovers out there. XD Here ya go! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9250973/...he-Tender-Trap __________________ ------------------------------------------------------ Love ya! http://www.fanfiction.net/~sleepingseeker http://sleepingseeker.deviantart.com/ http://sleepingseeker.tumblr.com/

05-30-2013, 09:46 AM	#282
Sleepingseeker Foot Soldier Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Chicago Posts: 213	Zarius, your story is great fun! I hope I'm not driving you too nuts with my rambling reviews! I just can't help myself, especially when I'm up late reading, I get a little slap happy. But I'm really having fun reading your story __________________ ------------------------------------------------------ Love ya! http://www.fanfiction.net/~sleepingseeker http://sleepingseeker.deviantart.com/ http://sleepingseeker.tumblr.com/

05-30-2013, 10:07 AM	#283
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 20,900	It's great that you're having a good time Sleepy, I don't mind you raving at all. You're a very passionate writer. I'm astounded you have so many reviews for so few chapters in your Tender Trap follow-up. Wow. I'm checking up on your fics and they're great, very devilishly detailed in their depictions of physical conflict, you really flesh these characters out and have a frank honesty about them. __________________ TMNT Fan Script Discussion Thread "It Should Have Ended Here"...add your ideal ending to the Series Fauxnale wiki Add Your Story to the TMNT Fanfiction Wiki Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks

05-30-2013, 03:35 PM	#284
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Read and reviewed your stories, Zarius and SS. Awesome work on your chapters. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

05-30-2013, 09:03 PM	#285
MsMarvelDuckie I Married a Duck! Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: The bowels of Hell, Texas(otherwise known as Decatur) Posts: 8,772	Thanks, DN82! I went for a mix of OT/movie Raph. Same with all the others, although I think maybe more 2K3 on Donnie, now that I've gotten further into it. Heh, just wait til you get to the, erm, "talk" between Donnie and the heroine later on. It's really funny and awkward..... Should have an update soon, if anyone wants to see more, just say so! __________________ "You IDIOTS! You've captured their STUNT doubles!" -from "Spaceballs" "Where Science ends, magic begins." -Spiral, Uncanny X-Men #491 My various stories and fan-fics are now here- https://m.fanfiction.net/u/4770494/#end

05-31-2013, 08:32 AM	#287
Sleepingseeker Foot Soldier Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Chicago Posts: 213	Why thank you! Yes, I've been a bit obsessed with the guys for a long time and only since December have I put my ideas out in the public eye - it's been a wonderful experience full of kind and supportive people. Giving me the courage to work on an OF novel in between my fanfic stuff. I look forward to reading more of your stories as well as finding a bunch more that capture the TMNT characters in a serious way. SS xo __________________ ------------------------------------------------------ Love ya! http://www.fanfiction.net/~sleepingseeker http://sleepingseeker.deviantart.com/ http://sleepingseeker.tumblr.com/

06-01-2013, 01:55 AM	#289
MsMarvelDuckie I Married a Duck! Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: The bowels of Hell, Texas(otherwise known as Decatur) Posts: 8,772	SS, I just read through some of your tales, and WOW! Great job. I really liked the one-off of "Mikey's Girl". Sweet and sad. Really getting into Tender Trap Pt 2, as well. Kudos!! (With chocolate chips!) I'm liking this take on Leo/Karai, as well as the April/Don/Casey thing you've got going here. And I really got a kick out of that scene at Leo's birthday party with the girls. Mikey really must've enjoyed himself, LOL! (Okay, he's my fave, so I always enjoy seeing him get some love from other writers....) __________________ "You IDIOTS! You've captured their STUNT doubles!" -from "Spaceballs" "Where Science ends, magic begins." -Spiral, Uncanny X-Men #491 My various stories and fan-fics are now here- https://m.fanfiction.net/u/4770494/#end

06-01-2013, 02:04 AM	#290
DonatelloNinja82 Mad Scientist Join Date: Nov 2012 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 1,345	Chapter 2 of The Lesser of Two Evils is up. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9337612/...r-of-Two-Evils __________________ Michelangelo: Holy guacamole with hot sauce and jalapenos!

06-01-2013, 03:33 AM	#291
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 20,900	Great chapter DNNinja. Definitely checked it out and reviewed. Next updates from me will come around Tuesday and Thursday next week. I also aim to get the first few chapters of the next book in my 80s toon series up before the end of the month. __________________ TMNT Fan Script Discussion Thread "It Should Have Ended Here"...add your ideal ending to the Series Fauxnale wiki Add Your Story to the TMNT Fanfiction Wiki Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks Last edited by ZariusTwo; 06-01-2013 at 03:46 AM.

06-01-2013, 07:34 AM	#292
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Just read and reviewed it, DN. Awesome job as always. And, Zarius, I'll be sure to check out those updates. Can't wait. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

06-01-2013, 02:53 PM	#295
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 20,900	Wow, thanks for your kind words, really glad to have my homework marked by fans who know their stuff __________________ TMNT Fan Script Discussion Thread "It Should Have Ended Here"...add your ideal ending to the Series Fauxnale wiki Add Your Story to the TMNT Fanfiction Wiki Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks

06-01-2013, 06:56 PM	#297
MsMarvelDuckie I Married a Duck! Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: The bowels of Hell, Texas(otherwise known as Decatur) Posts: 8,772	SS: I just finished "The Long Way Home", and it was most pleased. A great tale, and an interesting take on splinter/Shredder. I liked the conflicts between the characters, and I'd love to see more of this version. Really liking Deborah, and the Mistress was a cool villainess! __________________ "You IDIOTS! You've captured their STUNT doubles!" -from "Spaceballs" "Where Science ends, magic begins." -Spiral, Uncanny X-Men #491 My various stories and fan-fics are now here- https://m.fanfiction.net/u/4770494/#end

06-04-2013, 12:59 AM	#298
Bossa Nova Stone Warrior Join Date: Jul 2012 Location: United States, California Posts: 592	Well, since the thread title does include art, thought I'd try a little pimping of a couple of my recent artpieces. They belong to an AU series I'm working on titled A Waste of Silver, so they still include a bit of fanfiction. Leo: http://bossanovaink.deviantart.com/a...t&ga_changes=1 Raph: http://bossanovaink.deviantart.com/a...253A1370215065 Donnie should be done fairly soon and hopefully Mike not too long after. __________________ Nova's TMNT Fanfics

06-04-2013, 04:34 AM	#299
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 20,900	First of two "We Are Shadows" updates this week http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9147756/1/We-Are-Shadows __________________ TMNT Fan Script Discussion Thread "It Should Have Ended Here"...add your ideal ending to the Series Fauxnale wiki Add Your Story to the TMNT Fanfiction Wiki Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks

06-04-2013, 07:31 AM	#300
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Just read and reviewed it, Zar. Nice job. Can't wait for more. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.