A poem by the Mouse

Mouse · 01-27-2003, 08:39 PM

What Happens

Sometimes it's about the stresses of life
What we go through that makes us what
We are individually.

The trials and errors we all face
And the hurt and pain of the loss
Of good friends or good times.

No one reaches bottom alone
But actually a somebody
Can reach the top together

**azure turtle** · 01-27-2003, 09:53 PM

Ooh... That was pretty cool, Mouse! I especially love your closing lines. So true.

The Angel Queen · 01-29-2003, 02:29 PM

yes very good !!!
i would give it a 5 out of 5 !

The Master Foot Soldier · 01-29-2003, 03:17 PM

Yes, it was the sad truth of realaity...

01-27-2003, 08:39 PM	#1
Mouse Foot Soldier Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Kansas Posts: 156	A poem by the Mouse What Happens Sometimes it's about the stresses of life What we go through that makes us what We are individually. The trials and errors we all face And the hurt and pain of the loss Of good friends or good times. No one reaches bottom alone But actually a somebody Can reach the top together __________________ So what we're blood brothers now?

01-27-2003, 09:53 PM	#2
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Ooh... That was pretty cool, Mouse! I especially love your closing lines. So true. __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

01-29-2003, 02:29 PM	#3
The Angel Queen Hench Mutant Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: WEIRSDALE Posts: 451	yes very good !!! i would give it a 5 out of 5 ! __________________ Michael

01-29-2003, 03:17 PM	#4
The Master Foot Soldier Thug Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Ontario Posts: 79	Yes, it was the sad truth of realaity...