first fan work submission

andrew · 02-23-2003, 10:48 PM

this effort is poor on so many levels

.. its not even funny .. the mango peices dont even look like mango peices..the third panel's wording was wrong and the frame was way too small ..i didnt use halfway decent penmanship..half the ish in the first five panels u need a magnifying glass to see ..i mean ..its pencil and crayon!!!however i like how i utilized space on the last few frames.. otherwise its pure crap
i dont personally know azure but hes obviously a lovable dude so included him because i personally enjoy his comics..
http://www.geocities.com/shrugmonkey...?1046065634210
i dont think i'll make another comic for a while

Deepflame · 02-24-2003, 03:37 AM

Don't be so hard on yourself, the drawings looked real funny

Buut, I'm afraid I didn't understand the joke

**Kali** · 02-24-2003, 09:13 AM

LOL! That was funny. I really like the style of the drawings, nice and abstract.

Looks like you've got panel composition down better than I do.

*Storm Wolf* · 02-24-2003, 11:03 AM

Well....all i can say is it's a heck of a lot better than I can do.....I doubt I could even make stick Azure's

but that was relly cute.....I liked it very much!

Mouse · 02-24-2003, 11:07 AM

i think it is cute...because it has that cuteness that can only be Azure

**HorseTechie** · 02-24-2003, 12:19 PM

Hay, I don't think it's THAT bad. I liked your chibi art style, and the way you drew the caption ballons too. The stage notes looked awkward though, and I can't believe Azure likes mango complete with skin (bleh). But you shouldn't be ashamed of this. Do more! The more you do, tha better you get. Yeah!

Tinselcat · 02-24-2003, 02:44 PM

I like your angular style. it's very original. i think you should continue to develop it!

**Nturtle** · 02-24-2003, 08:10 PM

A fan comic about Azure!!! The blue turtle will be red over this one!

I like your style dude, I've always been intrested is the angular type, like that comic strip "James"
But yeah.... the joke...was preety bad

andrew · 02-24-2003, 09:52 PM

pretty bad?! lol ..it was horrible & i spelled raph's name wrong
*shrug* i eat the mango skins ...sometimes ...okay mb not... but thanx for all the feed back!!

*Voltron* · 02-25-2003, 03:40 PM

Man, nobody cares if you spelled wrong. It looked really good to me. I've seen similar styles of art before from other people, and it looked very impressive. You have talent, good stuff.

Donatello02 · 02-25-2003, 03:54 PM

Very nice, great talent and nice creative style. Good work.

*cqb101* · 02-28-2003, 12:21 PM

It was good and a lot better than I can draw!

**azure turtle** · 03-09-2003, 11:38 PM

!!! Omigosh, I just saw this! Dude, you've got amazing talent. I was looking at all the other drawings you did, and your style rocks. I loved the Don drawing the most. As TC said, I love the angular style of your drawings. Keep going!

Oooh, and this comic was cool! I'm honored that you'd put Azure in it, and even more honored that you liked the (terribly drawn) comics I do. Mucho thanks. I enjoyed this strip, despite the minor errors. Don't let that stop you, though.

Practice makes perfect, as they say.

I can't get over how cool your style of drawing is. Keep up the good work!

02-23-2003, 10:48 PM	#1
andrew Random Punk Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: chucktown Posts: 34	first fan work submission this effort is poor on so many levels .. its not even funny .. the mango peices dont even look like mango peices..the third panel's wording was wrong and the frame was way too small ..i didnt use halfway decent penmanship..half the ish in the first five panels u need a magnifying glass to see ..i mean ..its pencil and crayon!!!however i like how i utilized space on the last few frames.. otherwise its pure crap i dont personally know azure but hes obviously a lovable dude so included him because i personally enjoy his comics.. http://www.geocities.com/shrugmonkey...?1046065634210 i dont think i'll make another comic for a while

02-24-2003, 03:37 AM	#2
Deepflame Hench Mutant Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Deep below the mountains... Posts: 254	Don't be so hard on yourself, the drawings looked real funny Buut, I'm afraid I didn't understand the joke __________________ NoOo! The killer scarfs attack!

02-24-2003, 11:07 AM	#5
Mouse Foot Soldier Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Kansas Posts: 156	i think it is cute...because it has that cuteness that can only be Azure __________________ So what we're blood brothers now?

02-24-2003, 02:44 PM	#7
Tinselcat Mad Scientist Join Date: May 2002 Location: uuuuh... off planet. Posts: 1,190	I like your angular style. it's very original. i think you should continue to develop it! __________________

02-24-2003, 08:10 PM	#8
Nturtle Ninja Master Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Technodrome Airducts Posts: 5,215	A fan comic about Azure!!! The blue turtle will be red over this one! I like your style dude, I've always been intrested is the angular type, like that comic strip "James" But yeah.... the joke...was preety bad __________________ Fil rules. If Fil takes your 5 bucks then you should be eternally grateful that Fil would even borrow your money. Fil.

02-24-2003, 09:13 AM	#3
Kali Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: California! Posts: 11,101	LOL! That was funny. I really like the style of the drawings, nice and abstract. Looks like you've got panel composition down better than I do.

02-24-2003, 12:19 PM	#6
HorseTechie Inactive Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Midwest Posts: 5,677	Hay, I don't think it's THAT bad. I liked your chibi art style, and the way you drew the caption ballons too. The stage notes looked awkward though, and I can't believe Azure likes mango complete with skin (bleh). But you shouldn't be ashamed of this. Do more! The more you do, tha better you get. Yeah!

02-24-2003, 09:52 PM	#9
andrew Random Punk Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: chucktown Posts: 34	pretty bad?! lol ..it was horrible & i spelled raph's name wrong shrug i eat the mango skins ...sometimes ...okay mb not... but thanx for all the feed back!!

02-25-2003, 03:40 PM	#10
Voltron Handsomest Boy in School Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: The Realm of SJW Posts: 4,642	Nobody knows Man, nobody cares if you spelled wrong. It looked really good to me. I've seen similar styles of art before from other people, and it looked very impressive. You have talent, good stuff.

02-25-2003, 03:54 PM	#11
Donatello02 Stone Warrior Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 503	Very nice, great talent and nice creative style. Good work. __________________ 'What ninja weapon did Don get? A stickball bat. Hey, you can call it a 'bo'. But you can call it a Ford Tempo too...it's still just a stick.'

02-28-2003, 12:21 PM	#12
cqb101 Cinephile Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Salem, MA Posts: 8,489	It was good and a lot better than I can draw! __________________ Facebook

03-09-2003, 11:38 PM	#13
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	!!! Omigosh, I just saw this! Dude, you've got amazing talent. I was looking at all the other drawings you did, and your style rocks. I loved the Don drawing the most. As TC said, I love the angular style of your drawings. Keep going! Oooh, and this comic was cool! I'm honored that you'd put Azure in it, and even more honored that you liked the (terribly drawn) comics I do. Mucho thanks. I enjoyed this strip, despite the minor errors. Don't let that stop you, though. Practice makes perfect, as they say. I can't get over how cool your style of drawing is. Keep up the good work! __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!