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05-20-2012, 09:42 PM
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Stone Warrior
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Work in progress
This started as something for me to use to hone the point on my brush before inking my self-published comic book The Strange Adventures of Toaster Guy, but I liked the way it was looking so I think I'm gonna finish it up. I don't usually draw stuff in this style but my wife thinks it looks cool so I guess I'll stick to it.
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05-20-2012, 10:19 PM
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Thug
Join Date: May 2012
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Looks great to me so far. You seem to be really good at feathering. You should really think about coloring this after it's inked; it would look really cool.
The only suggestion I could make is to finish the penciling completely before starting to ink next time; sometimes you can make a mess of your art if you don't. But, since I don't have the whole picture in the shot, I don't know if that advice really applies here. Anyway, continue! |
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05-20-2012, 11:29 PM
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Stone Warrior
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Looking good!!
My only suggestion is to fix the elbow pad on his left arm, besides that great job as always!! 
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05-20-2012, 11:32 PM
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Stone Warrior
Join Date: Mar 2012
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i really like the inking so far... Looks great. Will you be posting the final product?
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05-21-2012, 05:33 AM
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Stone Warrior
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Thanks guys! The drawing is completely pencilled, IcyKali, except for some of the shading. My webcam and the crappy late-night lighting in my home office didn't capture it very well. I'll finish it up this week and post the final piece probably over the weekend.
pl212 - what about the elbow pad?? I hesitated to ink it and now you've got me freaked out! |
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05-21-2012, 11:48 AM
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Stone Warrior
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Im talking about Raph's left elbow (its to our right side) just in case I confused you Dont freak out, it happens to us all lol
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08-26-2012, 07:44 PM
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Random Punk
Join Date: Aug 2012
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love the face! nice work
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08-28-2012, 11:37 AM
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Stone Warrior
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Hey someone bumped this! I never posted the finished piece! I guess I better dig it out...!
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08-31-2012, 03:46 PM
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the gray ghost
Join Date: Nov 2011
Location: North East
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aaron this pic is great! i like this style. its more mirage than your usual toon type turtles ive seen you draw. though i love them all, this one is one of my faves.
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09-05-2012, 11:30 AM
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Stone Warrior
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Okay I found the finished piece and scanned it in! Comments? Critiques? Anyone wanna color it?
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09-05-2012, 11:33 AM
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Great art from a great artist, IMHO !
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09-05-2012, 02:52 PM
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09-05-2012, 03:10 PM
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Fashionably late
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I think it looks Awesome in b/w.
I love all the detail.
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09-05-2012, 05:49 PM
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The Little Nerdy Teacher
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 Man, that came out AWESOME!: Great job!
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09-05-2012, 05:51 PM
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09-05-2012, 10:32 PM
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Looks fantastic dude, I might take a crack at coloring it if I can find the time.
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09-06-2012, 07:11 AM
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Hench Mutant
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Looks awesome. I love to see progress pics and final results.
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09-06-2012, 09:04 AM
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Stone Warrior
Join Date: Feb 2007
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Glad you guys like it. Inking like this is a giant pain in the you know what, so I don't do it often. But it always seems to get a better response than my usual style.
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09-06-2012, 06:31 PM
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the gray ghost
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The only minor crit I can come up with is his right foot looks to be a little small in the heel area. Like I said though, its minor. I love the style of this piece and your inking is great. It really does have a mirage kind of feel to it. I always look fwd to your posts man. I love checking out good art
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09-07-2012, 04:59 PM
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Mad Scientist
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Great to see something not cartoony from you Aaron.
If Powder and Aaron don´t mind I would like to try to color it also, what do you say guys? Would be fun to see different takes to it.
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