Poems

Pepzi · 05-14-2003, 05:03 AM

My friends say this is a good poem, and i have a hard time believing them concidering they say al my poems are good, and i dont like em much...

Does god exist,
And if he does then why is my life like this?
It ain’t heavenly bliss,
So is this what I was meant to be,
Or did god just miss me,
When he placed me in this cold world no money,
God can’t think this is funny,
Because this ain’t no joke,
I choke in this world of smoke,
Make a livin in a world cold as a prision,
So if I believed in him,
Would I make it to his kingdom?
And my life wouldn’t be so dim,
Or is it to late to confess my sins

Friction X · 05-17-2003, 02:12 PM

Ooh, I really like it. Deep stuff. tsk, tsk tsk...You should have more faith in your writing, PepZ!

Since this is the "poems" thread, I guess I'll have to post one of my own. It's TMNT related, too! (well sorta)

You may not be Real (aka Ode to Raphael)

You may not be real, but you’re there in my dreams
And the feel of your body is all that I need
Sometimes this life is just too much
But unless you’re here there's not enough
to keep me going on

You may not be real, but there’s always hope
I’d die just to hold you and never let go
'Cause to feel you against me is all that I need
And I’d give up reality to live in your dreams

(Me, an obsessed fangirl?? Noooo...

)

*Storm Wolf* · 05-27-2003, 08:44 PM

the poem was hella good Pep_z! way deep....but religion always is....err if ya don't mind I'd be interested in others you might have wrote (I'm a poem junky, I like it all

)

and Friction X you're no more of an obsessed fangirl than most the girls here....

*Tetsu Deinonychus* · 05-27-2003, 10:08 PM

This poem is about the value of politeness.
It's called: Etiquette Lessons From My Foot!

My foot is large and it goes into the rectums...
...of people who act the most crass...
...so, if you are rude...
...and also so crude...
My foot will go right up your @$$!!!

Not very deep but it gets my message across.

Ahem... Sorry, I couldn't resist.

Friction X · 05-29-2003, 06:51 AM

LoL! That poem is hilarious, Tetsu. I don't think anyone's gonna be missing the point.

05-14-2003, 05:03 AM	#1
Pepzi Hench Mutant Join Date: May 2003 Location: In The Center Posts: 421	Poems My friends say this is a good poem, and i have a hard time believing them concidering they say al my poems are good, and i dont like em much... Does god exist, And if he does then why is my life like this? It ain’t heavenly bliss, So is this what I was meant to be, Or did god just miss me, When he placed me in this cold world no money, God can’t think this is funny, Because this ain’t no joke, I choke in this world of smoke, Make a livin in a world cold as a prision, So if I believed in him, Would I make it to his kingdom? And my life wouldn’t be so dim, Or is it to late to confess my sins __________________ Have a TMNT site? Join the top TMNT site list! TMNT-FSC.net

05-27-2003, 10:08 PM	#4
Tetsu Deinonychus The Iron Dinosaur Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Studio Snowlion HQ Posts: 3,021	This poem is about the value of politeness. It's called: Etiquette Lessons From My Foot! My foot is large and it goes into the rectums... ...of people who act the most crass... ...so, if you are rude... ...and also so crude... My foot will go right up your @$$!!! Not very deep but it gets my message across. Ahem... Sorry, I couldn't resist. __________________ (Image hosting by Postimage.org) And here's a list of all my old wacky threads!

05-17-2003, 02:12 PM	#2
Friction X Foot Soldier Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 214	Ooh, I really like it. Deep stuff. tsk, tsk tsk...You should have more faith in your writing, PepZ! Since this is the "poems" thread, I guess I'll have to post one of my own. It's TMNT related, too! (well sorta) You may not be Real (aka Ode to Raphael) You may not be real, but you’re there in my dreams And the feel of your body is all that I need Sometimes this life is just too much But unless you’re here there's not enough to keep me going on You may not be real, but there’s always hope I’d die just to hold you and never let go 'Cause to feel you against me is all that I need And I’d give up reality to live in your dreams (Me, an obsessed fangirl?? Noooo... )

05-29-2003, 06:51 AM	#5
Friction X Foot Soldier Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 214	LoL! That poem is hilarious, Tetsu. I don't think anyone's gonna be missing the point.