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It's not the first one I wrote, but it IS the first one I've managed to get on the web.
Do me a favor and go read, then tell me what you think! http://www.geocities.com/puckworld_o...t/reflect.html |
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That's great, Kameko. I'll read it later on and see how it turns out.
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Nice way to introduce your character, I really liked it. Not gonna spoil it for anyone else, but I've been in that situation before. I nearly flattened them too.
Though you might want to fix the links on that page. |
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Ooh, very nice fic, Kameko. I like. It sets up the scene of your "turtle universe." I hope to read more
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Awesome intro, Kameko! I definitely look forward to reading more
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Love how it's starting out, Kami. Great job on showing off your personality! Can't wait to see more of it.
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_________________ Hamato Kameko, a.k.a. Turtle Child! <font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: Kameko on 2002-04-23 10:46 ]</font> |
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Typing them? Don't tell me you're re-typing all your stories unto Geocieites
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Yeah, but the problem is, i have this habit of writing them in my spiral notebook, and then I have to put them on the computer later. And i just don't like long stretches of typing.
BTW, "Adventures in Grocery Shopping" (I think that's what I titled it) should be the next one up. Eventualy. I hope. |
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Woah, nm then. I usually type up all of my stories...I can't write at the same speed that all of my ideas are flying at. Well, when you do get your other stories up, let us know
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I have that same problem, Kameko. I have mine written down, and I have to be in the right "mood" to sit down and just type. Like I was doing this morning, I've nearly got the next three chapters of Midori done. Whew.
Adventures in Grocery Shopping. Oh, man, I've been to the mall with them. Hope you fare better than I did. |
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I loved your story, Kameko! Your character is cool, and I was right with her wanting to kick those girls!
*gives innocent smile* Can't wait to read your next one. I write my fics down on paper first too, I can't type fast enough to get all my ideas down, and sometimes I write on the bus, anyway! loolaa |
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*revels in the praise*
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woohoo! Cant wait to see it!
Hmm, i take it Dony saved the day by getting your puter up and running again? |
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Naturally. Heck, if it weren't for him, I wouldn't have a computer at all. He can be a real nerd sometimes, but he can be pretty cool, too.
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Heh, i bet he yells at the computer and talks to it just like me and my brother do...
Donnie is awesome. What else can i say? Makes me feel bad for some of the trouble i've put him through... |
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*gasp*
What terrible things have you put my Donnie through?????! Apart from the big dog... I already know about the big dog.... *glares* Loolaa |
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*looks horrified and runs over to ATFT*
Loolaa |
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