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The Thread Killer
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Here I Am
Here I am Waiting for you You said you loved me I'm positive that it's true Here I am Writing to you Your letters make me feel special Like your giving me some clue Here I am Pouring out my soul Couldn't imagine you doing it But you left a massive hole Here I am Writing this for you You're breaking my heart And I don't know what to do So here I am Turning from you You said that you loved me And now I realize it's not true |
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She is Me
I gaze into the mirror And what do I see Someone not so appealing And that nobody is me Sometimes I drift Into my mind For there I am attractive And have men in a bind Her hair is so long Her eye's an unadulterated blue But she is not me That I know is true Her skin is fair Her teeth are straight She walks confidently Not with a stupid gait Sometimes I write of her And how she comes across her significant other But these are just my imaginings Yearning for a lover I know that they say "Beauty is within" But if you aren't good-looking There's no way to win I'll never accept myself With her in my mind She's just the inner me That no one can find So I stand here and wait For someone to take a peek And hope that they see her The girl for whom they seek |
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Thoughts
I listen to this music It makes me want to cry Even gives me thoughts About wanting to die Misery is my lover It tags along wherever I may go That's because the reality is Misery is the only thing I know Why must I smile? Can't you perceive, I'm happy Just cause I don't Doesn't mean I'm feeling crappy Why do I mope and pout? Come here and I will tell Live one day as me See my living hell Why do you never see my friends? Tell me what's the point Cause the only ones I can make Are the kind that offer me a joint This life that I lead Contains many fascinating things And even if I wanted I don't think I could change Maybe I like this life And don't want to start new So lay off me why don't you And refrain from telling me what to do |
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The Thread Killer
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ok then.....no comment is to harsh for the Tiger to take, so tell me what you think....and if you have any questions don't be afraid to ask 'cause the only stupid question is the one not asked!
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come on now don't be shy........
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Well...i liked the poem about tuna...or was it...
... Nevermind i think that never happend... |
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The Thread Killer
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I don't even think that was a poem
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That's good because i ate the tuna, and i don't like eating poems, they gimme stomach ache
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The Thread Killer
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ooooookkkkk......righty then.
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I like tuna, especially when it's in sushi.
Aww... I love the poems, Tiger! "Thoughts" is my favorite... I think it's interesting, and it makes the reader think. I like.
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The Thread Killer
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Ok you know what forget the tuna!!! that was just a phase me and filly were goin thru! it happens....just like yurkey
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when did you write those ? and how come you didnt show me ? we are in the same class you know ! they are realy good ! i like em.
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I never showed you because.....I can't remember I think it was because school had just started.
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Hench Mutant
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oh ok !
since when do you write poetry ? i knew you did the rp and the auther things but not the poetry ! |
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Outstanding poems! I loved them all! Poetry is by far my favorite form of writing. You do an awesome job!
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TY Snow White....and I do all kinds of writing not just RP and stories.....I guess just whenever it hits me I write!
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Hench Mutant
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i have written several poems ! over the years but i have not showed them to any one exept my twin and carmen!
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The Thread Killer
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Carmen....who is that?
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Hench Mutant
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one of my best friends met her about 3 years ago
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