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Storm Wolf 08-21-2002 03:10 PM

poem
 
The Lone Wolf's Song

The lone wolf trail
The one I run
No pack nor mate
This trail is no fun

Eyes filled with fear
no beast to be seen
No wolf was there
To lick my wound clean

When the hunter came
And put a bullet in my head
It wont be long now
I'll soon be dead

No pack nor mate
My future looks bleak
As I lay in the snow
Tired and weak

I take one last look
I start to cry
Now it's time for me to die
I close my eye's
take one last breath
And slip silently
Into a lonely death

-Tiger

ok whatcha think it was my very first one soooo be nice. :P

angryash 08-21-2002 03:53 PM

that is so wicked i wish i was as good a poet as you

Kali 08-21-2002 04:55 PM

Wow, nice. Man, I haven't done poetry in such a long time...

azure turtle 08-21-2002 07:00 PM

Ooh, coolness! I like it. I never liked writing poetry (we were forced to in a few English classes I took... ugh), but I like reading it. Strangely enough, one of my favorite poets is Robert Frost. :anime:

Nturtle 08-21-2002 07:33 PM

Wow!! very good!!! Especially for a vegitarian such as myself!! I can't write serious poetry only silly stuff :goof:

Storm Wolf 08-21-2002 07:52 PM

lol....actually this one came outta nowhere, usually when i am made to write it's not so good.

Little_Ebony_Filly 08-22-2002 10:12 AM

good job cuz lol opps i was made to say that u know the elephants did it lol j/k it is good

angryash 08-22-2002 10:56 AM

i ll tell you somthing you auto start a book if you have any moore like that

Little_Ebony_Filly 08-23-2002 10:06 AM

i have one to cuz u got to read it!! it is called love lol ttyl,lylas came up with it last night by

Storm Wolf 08-24-2002 10:57 AM

hmmmm......i have a collection of all my favorite poems already but not one of my own......sooooo.

Little_Ebony_Filly 08-26-2002 10:01 AM

hey every1 read mine (yes cuz i am making stuff on urs so ppl see mine :evilgrin: ) plz go check it out. it would mean so much to me

The Angel Queen 11-24-2002 02:43 PM

yeah great poem ! it is better than the other 2 and they are good poems 2 ! 8)

Kingkapong 11-24-2002 05:52 PM

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Storm Wolf 11-26-2002 09:41 AM

hehe....this was one of the first poem I ever wrote about two years ago!

The Angel Queen 11-26-2002 02:54 PM

that was a long time ago !! guess you got a reason to have not shown me this one ! :wink:

Storm Wolf 11-26-2002 02:56 PM

Yeah....thats when I used to hang out with your sister a lot....back then I had only saw you like once :P

The Angel Queen 11-26-2002 03:37 PM

yep i know !


that was back when you didnt know what a sweet little angel i am !

Storm Wolf 11-27-2002 08:44 AM

ROTFL! :lol: Angel!......Hhahahaha!
*stops laughing*
oh....you weren't kidding? :P

The Angel Queen 11-27-2002 03:13 PM

ha ha ha real funny tiger powers !


it is kinda funny of how we keep up with all these thing that we talk together in ! what we got like 8 different coversations goinig on between us plus the notes we write back and forth in class that we keep up with and dont get confused about ! its easy ! :lol:

Storm Wolf 11-28-2002 07:26 AM

I'd just like to inform you that your brain is kicking in....don't be scared....I know how much time you spend trying not to act smart but.....it didn't work.


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