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The Lone Wolf's Song
The lone wolf trail The one I run No pack nor mate This trail is no fun Eyes filled with fear no beast to be seen No wolf was there To lick my wound clean When the hunter came And put a bullet in my head It wont be long now I'll soon be dead No pack nor mate My future looks bleak As I lay in the snow Tired and weak I take one last look I start to cry Now it's time for me to die I close my eye's take one last breath And slip silently Into a lonely death -Tiger ok whatcha think it was my very first one soooo be nice. 
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that is so wicked i wish i was as good a poet as you
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08-21-2002, 04:55 PM
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Wow, nice. Man, I haven't done poetry in such a long time...
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08-21-2002, 07:00 PM
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Ooh, coolness! I like it. I never liked writing poetry (we were forced to in a few English classes I took... ugh), but I like reading it. Strangely enough, one of my favorite poets is Robert Frost.
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08-21-2002, 07:33 PM
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Wow!! very good!!! Especially for a vegitarian such as myself!! I can't write serious poetry only silly stuff
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08-21-2002, 07:52 PM
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lol....actually this one came outta nowhere, usually when i am made to write it's not so good.
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08-22-2002, 10:12 AM
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good job cuz lol opps i was made to say that u know the elephants did it lol j/k it is good
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08-22-2002, 10:56 AM
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i ll tell you somthing you auto start a book if you have any moore like that
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i have one to cuz u got to read it!! it is called love lol ttyl,lylas came up with it last night by
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hmmmm......i have a collection of all my favorite poems already but not one of my own......sooooo.
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08-26-2002, 10:01 AM
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hey every1 read mine (yes cuz i am making stuff on urs so ppl see mine
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11-24-2002, 02:43 PM
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yeah great poem ! it is better than the other 2 and they are good poems 2 !
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11-24-2002, 05:52 PM
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check out my raps at http://www.snootabagus.cjb.net (the forums)
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hehe....this was one of the first poem I ever wrote about two years ago!
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11-26-2002, 02:54 PM
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that was a long time ago !! guess you got a reason to have not shown me this one !
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Yeah....thats when I used to hang out with your sister a lot....back then I had only saw you like once
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11-26-2002, 03:37 PM
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yep i know !
that was back when you didnt know what a sweet little angel i am ! |
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ROTFL!
 Angel!......Hhahahaha!*stops laughing* oh....you weren't kidding?
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ha ha ha real funny tiger powers !
it is kinda funny of how we keep up with all these thing that we talk together in ! what we got like 8 different coversations goinig on between us plus the notes we write back and forth in class that we keep up with and dont get confused about ! its easy !
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I'd just like to inform you that your brain is kicking in....don't be scared....I know how much time you spend trying not to act smart but.....it didn't work.
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