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11-20-2012, 08:31 AM
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Indiana
Posts: 16,912
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Awesome samples. Found two mistakes on the second one. "These detectives of your have weapons?" should be "These detectives of yours have weapons?" Also, cival should be civil. Other than that, nice job. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.
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