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12-31-2012, 09:38 AM
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Leo-holic
 
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Indiana
Posts: 16,912
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Awesome sample. Love that little conversation between Leo and Casey. I see one mistake though. Based on I've seen you act should be Based on the way I've seen you act. Other than that, good job. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.
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