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Old 06-15-2013, 09:20 PM   #21
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Hey, Babyturtles and Bauer. What's your opinions on my episode ideas? I think they can use some work.
I like the "League" episode XD Baxter Stockman failing just works...XD LoL

and him assembling a mini army would be cool :3
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Old 06-15-2013, 09:22 PM   #22
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I like the "League" episode XD Baxter Stockman failing just works...XD LoL

and him assembling a mini army would be cool :3
I know! He just can't catch a break

What did you think about " A Spy In The Foot"?
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Old 06-15-2013, 09:24 PM   #23
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I know! He just can't catch a break

What did you think about " A Spy In The Foot"?
I commented on your Stealth episode.
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Old 06-15-2013, 09:26 PM   #24
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I know! He just can't catch a break

What did you think about " A Spy In The Foot"?
any battle with Shedder sounds awesome, but who is Moshiko?? o_o
a new character? an old character I haven't heard of?

while we are comment on each other's episode~ what did you think of mine?
"Walks like an Angel"
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Old 06-15-2013, 09:27 PM   #25
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I commented on your Stealth episode.
Oh I didn't notice it on the last page, sorry.

I think that it should reel in a lot of cash for Nick. They should make more turtle variants that could tie into the show! ( like the stealth variants)
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Oh :embarrass: sorry.

I think that it should reel in a lot of cash for Nick. They should make more turtle variants that could tie into the show!
What did you think of mine?
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Old 06-15-2013, 09:30 PM   #27
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What did you think of mine?
I liked it
The only thing it needed was a title. I love the Splinter/Leo moment in there. There should be more of that kind of stuff in the show.
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Old 06-15-2013, 09:31 PM   #28
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What did you think of mine?
I liked it :3 Leo's struggle as a leader episode~ I could see Leo snapping a little at Splinter (poor Splinter though )

Don learns his lesson too right??
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Old 06-15-2013, 09:36 PM   #29
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Title: Slash

Plot: Raph and his brothers are just messing about. However, it seems that the Kraang are plotting something. Raph has an idea, but Leo won't listen, making Raph very angry. He packs up his stuff and moves out. Leo doubts his decision, while Raph spies upon the Kraang. He accidentally drops his backpack of stuff right over the Lab and they capture him.
With the other turtles, they discover on the news that there was a mutant turtle spotted near a lab. The turtles, thinking it is Raph, go there. They, to their disbelief, discover a huge, evil turtle with crocked sai and a black mask with the Kraang symbol across the forehead. They instantly think that it is somehow Raph and attempt to subdue him. They eventually succeed and take him home.
However, at the Kraang HQ, Raph is in the Jail, alone, sorrowful.
To be continued...
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any battle with Shedder sounds awesome, but who is Moshiko?? o_o
a new character? an old character I haven't heard of?

while we are comment on each other's episode~ what did you think of mine?
"Walks like an Angel"
Moshiko is a character who I created. He's a highly skilled ninja!
now onto your idea

I think this would be a great way to introduce Angel, and I agree about her being young. It works better that way. I think it's a good idea
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Old 06-15-2013, 09:42 PM   #31
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Plot: Raph and his brothers are just messing about. However, it seems that the Kraang are plotting something. Raph has an idea, but Leo won't listen, making Raph very angry. He packs up his stuff and moves out. Leo doubts his decision, while Raph spies upon the Kraang. He accidentally drops his backpack of stuff right over the Lab and they capture him.
With the other turtles, they discover on the news that there was a mutant turtle spotted near a lab. The turtles, thinking it is Raph, go there. They, to their disbelief, discover a huge, evil turtle with crocked sai and a black mask with the Kraang symbol across the forehead. They instantly think that it is somehow Raph and attempt to subdue him. They eventually succeed and take him home.
However, at the Kraang HQ, Raph is in the Jail, alone, sorrowful.
To be continued...
May I suggest the title
How about "Slash"?
I honestly LOVE this idea! Think about all the carnage Slash would cause in the lair! And April and Splinter would have to get involved as well!
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May I suggest the title
How about "Slash"?
I honestly LOVE this idea! Think about all the carnage Slash would cause in the lair! And April and Splinter would have to get involved as well!
Neat title idea! I planed this a while ago, so glad there is a thread to put this in.
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Neat title idea! I planed this a while ago, so glad there is a thread to put this in.
I know right...I like this thread
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I know right...I like this thread
I was honestly susprised one wasn't created already
How about....

Epsiode title- The Shark ( bad title, I know.)

Summary- After the turtles battle fishface in an underwater Kraang base, Raph accidently leaks some mutagen on a Shark Experimentation Tank. Creating the Shark mutant, Arrmagon! ( who occasionally will turn on his masters and attack them)
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Old 06-15-2013, 10:00 PM   #35
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I even want this episode to focus on the chemistry Leo has with Don. I want to see them hang out, doing things together, and have some nice conversation on responsibilities (or bicker on nerdy topics). In fact, I want to see Don watch Space Heroes, and realize the episode he watched earlier where Mindstrong defies Captain Ryan over something relating to emotions, putting him, the captain, and the crew in danger. There's symbolism for you. I hoping something like this happens in part 1 of the finale. Then almost everything would come together.
The way you can incorperate this is with what happened to the Pulverizer. Donnie so far is the only one of the turtles that has a true burden, and Leo is the only one that can help him through it. Donnie may have a hard time coping Leo's words simply because the others to this point have had no remorse for Timothy, which makes Donnie feel awful.

(Your nerdy topic) could be Leo comparing Donnie to a computer: super reliable, but even when a computer has too much memories stored; it freezes, crashes, and sometimes you need to reboot to clear your memory out.

And what's the one constant memory Donnie has had since the pilot, April. Leo tells him that he needs to just tell her how he feels to clear his mind and put him at ease.

This could lead to Donnie having a "mini-date" with April on the surface, however, it's how she gets captured by the Kraang. Which of course puts even more pain in Donnie's head.

Which would then lead to what you said about rushing out to save her without a plan and doing more harm than good.
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Plot: Continued... Don is examining the turtle, and is doing a DNA match to see if it is Raph. It, however, breaks through the glass it is held in and jumps at Splinter. He, believing it is Raph, only flips it into it's back. It coughs and runs away. The turtles chase after it on Don's new invention, "The Rippin' Ridder" one for each. They track it back to the Kraang HQ. They run into the lab to see the Kraang and tubes of mutagen. They look over and see Raph in the jail. They are all shocked, and Raph tells them the story: Raph had fallen into the lab, so they locked him up. They looked through his stuff and found Spike. They tested out some mutagen on him and then brain washed him. They sent him to do their dirty work;stealing ingredients and mechanisms. They let Raph out and all four of them fight the newly dubbed, "Slash" and all the Kraang. They manage to reverse the brain washing, thanks to Don, and destroy the HQ. Now that Spike isn't brainwashed, he thanks the turtles. He, however, says he must go, for he was now to big to be Raph's pet, to intelligent. Raph hugs Spike goodbye, and Spike flees away.
Back at the lair, Raph is mopping on the coach. Mikey comes to cheer him up.
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The way you can incorperate this is with what happened to the Pulverizer. Donnie so far is the only one of the turtles that has a true burden, and Leo is the only one that can help him through it. Donnie may have a hard time coping Leo's words simply because the others to this point have had no remorse for Timothy, which makes Donnie feel awful.

(Your nerdy topic) could be Leo comparing Donnie to a computer: super reliable, but even when a computer has too much memories stored; it freezes, crashes, and sometimes you need to reboot to clear your memory out.

And what's the one constant memory Donnie has had since the pilot, April. Leo tells him that he needs to just tell her how he feels to clear his mind and put him at ease.

This could lead to Donnie having a "mini-date" with April on the surface, however, it's how she gets captured by the Kraang. Which of course puts even more pain in Donnie's head.

Which would then lead to what you said about rushing out to save her without a plan and doing more harm than good.
Man, you people loving destroying poor Don!

He's been through a lot in this series!
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Old 06-15-2013, 10:05 PM   #38
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Plot: Continued... Don is examining the turtle, and is doing a DNA match to see if it is Raph. It, however, breaks through the glass it is held in and jumps at Splinter. He, believing it is Raph, only flips it into it's back. It coughs and runs away. The turtles chase after it on Don's new invention, "The Rippin' Ridder" one for each. They track it back to the Kraang HQ. They run into the lab to see the Kraang and tubes of mutagen. They look over and see Raph in the jail. They are all shocked, and Raph tells them the story: Raph had fallen into the lab, so they locked him up. They looked through his stuff and found Spike. They tested out some mutagen on him and then brain washed him. They sent him to do their dirty work;stealing ingredients and mechanisms. They let Raph out and all four of them fight the newly dubbed, "Slash" and all the Kraang. They manage to reverse the brain washing, thanks to Don, and destroy the HQ. Now that Spike isn't brainwashed, he thanks the turtles. He, however, says he must go, for he was now to big to be Raph's pet, to intelligent. Raph hugs Spike goodbye, and Spike flees away.
Back at the lair, Raph is mopping on the coach. Mikey comes to cheer him up.
The end.
Kind of sad that Spike would be gone.

But I love the addition of the Rippin' Rider! Another idea would be that Slash would have to fight between the Turtles and the Kraang because of his ability to easily get mind controlled by the Kraang.
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Man, you people loving destroying poor Don!

He's been through a lot in this series!
I know.

Honestly, he's the easiest character in this incarnation to make a story on, because he simply cares for everybody.

And the fact his one weakness is he has a weak heart; he never knows when his heart is going conk out on him which makes a story interest when you put a character in a position where he has to make a serious choice.
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I know.

Honestly, he's the easiest character in this incarnation to make a story on, because he simply cares for everybody.

And the fact his one weakness is he has a weak heart; he never knows when his heart is going conk out on him which makes a story interest when you put a character in a position where he has to make a serious choice.
I know, he's always determined to help though. Just imagine if April was apparently killed. ( or at least the turtles though so.)
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