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Stone Warrior
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Raphael Movie 3d model opinions and help please?
Hi Everyone,
Please take a look at this 3d model of Raphael and help me figure out what needs to be changed and fixed in order to create a better likeness of Raph from the first film. Something is off about the front of the mouth and other things but it is hard to figure out what it is. Any help would be appreciated. Thank you Last edited by Bmaga123; 02-04-2015 at 12:29 PM. |
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Stone Warrior
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Maybe its just me but I think it looks spot on. The color is a bit bright in the middle of his lips but thats more a shading thing. Actually looks pretty good.
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Something about his mouth seems off. I think Raph had mor of a natural frown.
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Thanks guys, The coloring doesnt matter since this is eventually going to be molded in clay and cast in silicone. This will end up being an animatronic head with the mouth being static but the eyes, lids, and brow fully functional. I will have the artist adjust the mouth
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yeah. I've seen great sculpts, both practical and cgi. And often there is something "off", something is missing or isn't right. yet they are beautiful pieces of craftsmanship.
I will say, that the sculpt you're working/commission on. Have captured some of the Kermit-like structure in the snout when looking at the profile picture, something that seems to be very hard to replicate correctly. |
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It's hard to tell from reference photos because the shape of the face changes with the expression, but I think you did a great job. I though it was weird how the eyebrows interlock in the middle, but the original seems to do that too.
Good luck with the rest of the project.
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Looking good.l from pics I have seen, the holes cut out for his eyes aren't exactly the same, and the bandanna somewhat droops more over one side, creating a bit more of that squint look vs full eyed look. If that makes sense
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Thanks everyone all your opinions and input really help. I updated the pic picture above with the latest revisions but still think he needs work.
Last edited by Bmaga123; 01-31-2015 at 02:56 PM. |
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Foot Soldier
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That is looking fantastic man, looking forward to seeing this one...
I have similar interests in trying to get something like this done |
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Sounds great mate, look forward to seeing it..
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Fantastic job on Raph! It looks really damn close. Can't wait to see an updated version.
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You have done an excellent job. Like the other have said, it looks pretty close.
I tried to figure out what was missing. It's still not quite there but this may help you:
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I'm a little biased since I worked on this one but I very much like the side view to this. Maybe the mouth in the front view is too wide. If I'm not mistaken, there's also some indentations along the the sides of upper mouth that should be there. I'll have to look into it further.
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Updated the picture above to the final version that will be printed out and than final touches to improve the likeness will happen during the finishing process
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