Turtle Turncoat - Page 65

Tony Day · 07-05-2016, 05:04 PM

Damn.. last caption... forgot leos swords.

UPDATED: corrections done.

*Fang Wolf* · 07-05-2016, 05:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Tony Day

Damn.. last caption... forgot leos swords.

Female Shredder steal them.

*oldmanwinters* · 07-06-2016, 07:40 AM

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Originally Posted by Fang Wolf

Female Shredder steal them.

Ha, I kinda like that twist!

*Fang Wolf* · 07-06-2016, 10:05 AM

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Originally Posted by oldmanwinters

Ha, I kinda like that twist!

Hehe, Me to...

*Jephael* · 07-09-2016, 08:35 PM

Mikey getting kissed by his female counterpart... I feel like this is going to lead to some really bad turtle-cest ideas down the road. Nonetheless, good job!!!

Tony Day · 07-13-2016, 07:50 PM

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Originally Posted by Jephael

Mikey getting kissed by his female counterpart... I feel like this is going to lead to some really bad turtle-cest ideas down the road. Nonetheless, good job!!!

not from me mate

Its meant to be more of a fun flirty thing. Bit like Mikey and Kala's relationship from the original toon.

Right... Page 28 of part 2 is up..

www.trydowave.com/turtletales.0158.web.htm

more a coming

Tony

www.trydowave.com

*oldmanwinters* · 07-13-2016, 10:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

not from me mate

Its meant to be more of a fun flirty thing. Bit like Mikey and Kala's relationship from the original toon.

Right... Page 28 of part 2 is up..

www.trydowave.com/turtletales.0158.web.htm

more a coming

Tony

www.trydowave.com

Hoho, that last panel is adorable! Even after reading a rough draft of your original script, that was quite a surprise! Looks like the "adult" supporting characters have been having a little too much fun...

*Fang Wolf* · 07-14-2016, 06:35 AM

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Originally Posted by Tony Day

Right... Page 28 of part 2 is up..

www.trydowave.com/turtletales.0158.web.htm

more a coming

Tony

www.trydowave.com

Twister Time! Drink and have fun!

Keep it up.

Gadget · 07-15-2016, 03:12 PM

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Originally Posted by Tony Day

not from me mate

Its meant to be more of a fun flirty thing. Bit like Mikey and Kala's relationship from the original toon.

Right... Page 28 of part 2 is up..

www.trydowave.com/turtletales.0158.web.htm

more a coming

Tony

www.trydowave.com

ahah that was great

(i like female-shredder's "Yuck!") what a sweet/fun ending too

*Raven* · 07-16-2016, 08:16 AM

That last panel is genius

Tony Day · 07-16-2016, 04:55 PM

Hi yall. Thanks for the comments.

Page 29 of part 2 is up...

www.trydowave.com/issue2.htm

just one more to go

Thanks again to Fang for doing some of the base colouring.

Tony

www.trydowave.com

*Fang Wolf* · 07-16-2016, 05:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

Thanks again to Fang for doing some of the base colouring.

No Problem.

*MikeandRaph87* · 07-16-2016, 05:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

Hi yall. Thanks for the comments.

Page 29 of part 2 is up...

www.trydowave.com/issue2.htm

just one more to go

Thanks again to Fang for doing some of the base colouring.

Tony

www.trydowave.com

Master Splinter tellonh Donatello to 'shut up' was out of character. You would think Shredder and he had switched bodies again. Or is that what is going on?

Tony Day · 07-16-2016, 05:41 PM

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Originally Posted by MikeandRaph87

Master Splinter tellonh Donatello to 'shut up' was out of character. You would think Shredder and he had switched bodies again. Or is that what is going on?

pages 28 & 29 have had a rewrite from the original script to accommodate the the new scenes added.

Basically I was trying to convey Splinter slightly losing it as Donatello very nearly caused the destruction of all life in the universe... all before lunch.

Anyways... I agree with your points and have rewritten about 50% of the first two panels. Hopefully it makes Splinter seem less schizophrenic

*oldmanwinters* · 07-16-2016, 08:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

pages 28 & 29 have had a rewrite from the original script to accommodate the the new scenes added.

Basically I was trying to convey Splinter slightly losing it as Donatello very nearly caused the destruction of all life in the universe... all before lunch.

Anyways... I agree with your points and have rewritten about 50% of the first two panels. Hopefully it makes Splinter seem less schizophrenic

Probably for the best. I figured something like "Shut it!" would be more his style. Granted, he's an aging rat who has been through a lot though.

Tony Day · 07-17-2016, 08:13 PM

Hello friends.

The final page of part 2 has been posted

Here: www.trydowave.com/issue2.htm

This Superluminal Effect has finally drawn to a close. I hope all of you who stuck around enjoyed it as much as I did creating it. Makes the slog worthwhile.
The original plan was to finish it in a year. I started in March 2015 so I overshot a bit. Anyway. In the end i'm quiet happy about how long it took to finish. Much speedier than Turtle Turncoat

Wanna thank Adam for proof reading for me and giving me some handy hints when it came to dialogue and grammar in general. Your the best mate.

And many thanks to FangWolf for helping me colour a lot of the final pages to part 2. Really helped out

Thanks again dudes and ill see you all soon.

Tony

www.trydowave.com

*MikeandRaph87* · 07-17-2016, 08:18 PM

It's a pleasure being a part of your readership. I also hope you take time to comment elsewhere as we would like to get more of your insights beyond your stellar work.

*Coola Yagami* · 07-17-2016, 08:48 PM

It's an awesome series as a whole. I did like this one since it showed the Turtles as a team again after Turncoat. I especially like all the old arcade game references and little surprised like Transformers and Terry Bogard and whatnot.

*oldmanwinters* · 07-17-2016, 09:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

Hello friends.

The final page of part 2 has been posted

Here: www.trydowave.com/issue2.htm

This Superluminal Effect has finally drawn to a close. I hope all of you who stuck around enjoyed it as much as I did creating it. Makes the slog worthwhile.
The original plan was to finish it in a year. I started in March 2015 so I overshot a bit. Anyway. In the end i'm quiet happy about how long it took to finish. Much speedier than Turtle Turncoat

Wanna thank Adam for proof reading for me and giving me some handy hints when it came to dialogue and grammar in general. Your the best mate.

And many thanks to FangWolf for helping me colour a lot of the final pages to part 2. Really helped out

Thanks again dudes and ill see you all soon.

Tony

www.trydowave.com

Aw, man, that execution was perfect, Tony. You shot for a fun story and you nailed it. What a great way to followup up the marathon tragedy/redemption story of Turtle Turncoat!

*Fang Wolf* · 07-18-2016, 03:26 AM

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Originally Posted by Tony Day

And many thanks to FangWolf for helping me colour a lot of the final pages to part 2.
Really helped out

It was entirely my pleasure to help you.
I can say I enjoy reading your comics.

- Fang Wolf

07-05-2016, 05:04 PM	#1281
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Damn.. last caption... forgot leos swords. UPDATED: corrections done. Last edited by Tony Day; 07-06-2016 at 09:36 AM.

07-09-2016, 08:35 PM	#1285
Jephael That whack job behind you Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Carlisle, Pennsylvania Posts: 8,143	Mikey getting kissed by his female counterpart... I feel like this is going to lead to some really bad turtle-cest ideas down the road. Nonetheless, good job!!! __________________ "I like it. Simple, but effective!" Raphael; The Mean Machines - 1988

07-16-2016, 08:16 AM	#1290
Raven follower of Jesus Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 6,212	That last panel is genius __________________ TMNT Future Despair Deviant Offical Ultimate Ninja Turtles Site!

07-16-2016, 04:55 PM	#1291
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Page 29 of Superluminal Effect part 2 is up Hi yall. Thanks for the comments. Page 29 of part 2 is up... www.trydowave.com/issue2.htm just one more to go Thanks again to Fang for doing some of the base colouring. Tony www.trydowave.com

07-17-2016, 08:13 PM	#1296
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 559	Superluminal Effect Part 2 Final Page added. Hello friends. The final page of part 2 has been posted Here: www.trydowave.com/issue2.htm This Superluminal Effect has finally drawn to a close. I hope all of you who stuck around enjoyed it as much as I did creating it. Makes the slog worthwhile. The original plan was to finish it in a year. I started in March 2015 so I overshot a bit. Anyway. In the end i'm quiet happy about how long it took to finish. Much speedier than Turtle Turncoat Wanna thank Adam for proof reading for me and giving me some handy hints when it came to dialogue and grammar in general. Your the best mate. And many thanks to FangWolf for helping me colour a lot of the final pages to part 2. Really helped out Thanks again dudes and ill see you all soon. Tony www.trydowave.com

07-17-2016, 08:18 PM	#1297
MikeandRaph87 Jedi Master Join Date: Dec 2011 Location: JLA Satellite Headquarters Posts: 11,189	It's a pleasure being a part of your readership. I also hope you take time to comment elsewhere as we would like to get more of your insights beyond your stellar work. __________________ Michelangelo: This looks like a job for the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles! Raphael: Sheesh, Mikey this ain't a cartoon!

07-17-2016, 08:48 PM	#1298
Coola Yagami Overlord Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 15,720	It's an awesome series as a whole. I did like this one since it showed the Turtles as a team again after Turncoat. I especially like all the old arcade game references and little surprised like Transformers and Terry Bogard and whatnot. __________________ "I was down with TMNT once, but then they changed what TMNT was. Now what I was down with is no longer TMNT and what TMNT now is seems weird and scary. And it'll happen to YOU." Check out my blog for Comic Reviews and other things. https://markepicblogofrandomness.blogspot.com/ I also started The AEW Crew, the All Elite Wrestling Fan Club! https://www.facebook.com/groups/637508120044168/