Fan Comic [Roughs]- Dooney style!

[oldmanwinters]

Originally Posted by Tony Day

Very good Adam Luv it, I think you should do your own strip! Dooney Style
Btw, when did April talk to Baxter? That wasnt in the pilot.
Personally I dont find the Turtles forearms the worse to draw. Their heads are hell to draw!, as in they dont make any sense. especailly when your looking up at them from a worms eye view.

Ha, a strip sounds interesting. I think comedy would be my thing. Maybe I should revive the TMNT daily strip tradition?
Reference:
http://www.gocomics.com/teenagemutan...ef=tmnt_gce_b5

April never talked to Baxter in the pilot. That page was my attempt to reimagine the second issue of the Mirage TMNT series with an OT style. (I took the rat from a page in the Archie comic)
Original reference:
http://www.ninjaturtles.com/comics/mirage/two/pg05.htm
http://www.ninjaturtles.com/comics/mirage/two/pg09.htm
http://www.ninjaturtles.com/comics/mirage/two/pg10.htm

Originally Posted by Nickokapo

Good job, i agree it's very dooney-ish (i'm not so familiar with his art but i recognise his turtle's heads), love the krang in page 6 too.
I'm not really one to be saying this, but if you want a suggestion you may want to try making the lines a bit more smoother & loose

Thanks for the advice, Nick. I wish I could develop a looser style. But the journey from the mind to the hand sometimes feels more like miles than inches.
Got any visual aids that could help me?