Noren Music

[PizzaPower]

Hey all I currently am writing an EP at the moment and dont have the best recording equpment at this time, here is an up coming track of the EP that will be Downloadable for free.

http://youtu.be/1mmbwkqoJZE
let me know what you all think, thanks very much

[Master Splinter]

Originally Posted by PizzaPower

Hey all I currently am writing an EP at the moment and dont have the best recording equpment at this time, here is an up coming track of the EP that will be Downloadable for free.

http://youtu.be/1mmbwkqoJZE
let me know what you all think, thanks very much

Because of the recording quality it is hard for me to follow this song. For starters your guitar in the beginning is a lot louder than the guitar in the rest of the track. Your vocals are okay but once you get the second vocal in there it sounds like crap. Neither of you are synced, or harmonized. This could probably be fixed using better equipment and recording procedures. But I would suggest practicing together more and more, even without instruments. Get that harmony flowing. I'm not entirely sure I get the context of the song, but that might be because it was hard for me to understand what I was listening too.

I applaud your effort and suggest you keep at it. You have the basics, just need to fine tune them, and get yourself a better recording setup.

-ms

[PizzaPower]

will do thanks for the advice!