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Old 01-22-2006, 08:01 PM   #101
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Old 01-22-2006, 08:12 PM   #102
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::Meanwhile at Don's Lab.again..::

Sexy Don: You know we need a pizza break. Are you sure they haven't arrived yet?


Orignal Don: Who knows I bet those other versions of us are hogging it all to themselves anyways.Those basterds


(RS) Don: Well look I'll go to Ninja Pizza and pick us up a few ok?


Orignal Don: And no sharing with those other brothers of us.


:::So while orignal & sexy Don work on the "Top secert" invention.Red Sky Don goes out to get some pizzas :::

(RS) Don: Hmm..3 large veggie lovers....1 with whipped cream...


:::Meanwhile, the rest of the turtles are getting cranky and Sexy Mikey has learned that playing Hide N Seek together was a very bad idea. But while the turtles turn each other into turtle soup the sensais have gotten together and relaxed somewhere.While TD and Leo work out Leo's stress problem.:::

(RS)Leo: Uhh what the hell are those?


Sexy Mikey: There called Nunchucks...


BAAAAAAAAM

Sexy RAph has been shell kicked by Red Sky Raph.




(RS) Raph: Heheheeh.Your not so strong are ya...dumbass
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Old 01-22-2006, 08:23 PM   #103
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Orignal Raph: WTF is that on the stairs?


Evil Monkey: ......


(RS)Leo: Is that a..monkey?


Orignal Raph: Ah swell.Now we are playing monkey in the middle.


(RS)Raph: Heehe..well 1 down....now lets get those 2
(RS) Mikey: Your on..


Orignal Mikey: Ah CRAP
Orignal Leo: Maybe things will blow over if we had those freakin pizzas!


(RS)Raph: Hell no. Lets kick some sexy & orignal shell



::Meanwhile after a tasty Pizza dinner by the Dons......:::

Orignal: WTF is all that damn noise!


(RS) Don: I don't know.But I think we should find out


Sexy Don: Yah I have a feeling it's going to be Turtle World WAr 3 in there....


::Boy was Sexy Don ever right.They where about to walk into one hell of a war::
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Old 01-22-2006, 08:50 PM   #104
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(RS) Don: Ok WTF is going on out here?!! My fellow Dons and I are trying to work.So shut the hell up


(RS)HEhe I got an idea duck behind this sofa.We're gonna get our orignal selves


Orignal Don: Ah..well my brothers nice knowing you...You too Sensai.You walked in on the wrong moment.


Sensai:What the devil? WTF did I do?


(RS) Don: Ah dang.I don't think their sensai's tail is suppose to do that...


::Meanwhile our Sexy Don has reunited with his battered brothers. With the pizzas on their way.Don has wondered where their Leo version went to.::

Sexy Don:Mikey your alive!
Sexy Mikey:Yah cept for uh...well Red Sky RAph got it worst


Sexy Don checks the bathroom and finds TD's panty hose...

Sexy Don: Ah she is here then.....


Sexy Don: Hey have you guys seen Dove?
Sexy Mikey: She was here over a page ago I think....
Sexy RAph: Whats all those noises coming from the guest room?


Sexy Raph: I hear Leo...
Sexy Mikey: I hear TD...
Sexy Don: What are they doing in there?
Sexy RAph: I can guess.....


::So sexier RAph slides the doors open.....:::
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Old 01-22-2006, 09:07 PM   #105
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Sexy Leo: Oh man..I...


Everyone: LEONARDO!!!! What the shell.....


Sexy Mikey: Heheh guess you should of ducked,Raph
Sexy Raph: ugh..shut up


Sexy Leo:Guys? WTF??


A few mintues later, Don heads back to the main part of the lair.

Sexy Don: I can't believe you Leo.....
Sexy Leo: look it's part of a massage treatment called,"Happy Ending"
Sexy Raph: Well that was a hell of a happy ending


::Meanwhile........::

(RS) Don: So those pizzas never came huh? Did you guys actually order them?
(RS) RAph: I didn't I thought you did.Ah crap
(RS) Well the orignals are still passed out so just order some more


(RS)Leo: Sensai what do you think?
(RS) Splinter:I say we clean up this mess.My orignal self seems to have lost his tail...
(RS)Mikey:Well that wasn't me
(RS)Raph:Actually...it was me
(RS)Don: We are never going to get invited over again guys


(RS)Leo: Why do you say that? That sexier version of Mikey started it with that gay game of hide n go seek...


(RS)Don: Well you need to aplogize ok! No matter how gay the game was
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Old 01-22-2006, 09:11 PM   #106
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(RS)Mikey:No actually..now with the Orignal turtles out cold it's us against the sexy version
(RS) Raph: Hell yah go green machine


Carter: Hey guys! Came as fast as I could
(RS)Leo: Great!Where you been
Carter:Was trying to renew my contract for Static Shock.WB said no


(RS)Leo:Really? Those basterds!Did you know they wanted us turtles too?Thanks to our creators it never happened.


(RS)Leo:You know I don't feel so....GROWL


(RS)Raph:Ah crap!Not now!
(RS)Mikey: We can't let the sexier version see this!
(RS) Don::Ok we need those pizzas fast! You know how MAD Leonardo gets
Carter:What can I do?


(RS)Don: Actually there is something you can do Carter...
Carter:What is it?


(RS) Don: Would you mind leaving? This story is about just us turtles


Carter: What? Ah you mother Fu**** No wonder your damn version was cancelled


(RS)Well damn that was pretty rude of him to say.


(RS)Leo:GROWL...GRRRRR.WTF are those pizzas?
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Old 01-22-2006, 09:59 PM   #107
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(RS)Mikey:Ah crap. If the sexier version of us sees this we'll be laughed at right out of the sewers!
(RS)Well we better think of something quick then.


(RS)Mikey: Look we are going to pick up those pizzas ok?
(RS)Leo:GROWWWWWL...WHEN?


(RS)Don: We're going to pick up the pizzas.If the sexier version of us asks.We went to get the pizzas
Carter:Hey wait pick up some fried chicken at Popeyes too ok? There is a special there
(RS)Don: Hell no.I hate fried chicken


:::Meanwhile:::

Sexier Leo: WTF happened in here?!! What the shell guys?WHats wrong with you guys?


Sexier Splinter: Why does my orignal version missing his tail?


Sexier Don: Ughh I don't believe this! The Red sky version is missing and the orignal version of me is still in the lab I bet
Sexier Mikey: So like what happened to the Red Sky version of us?


Sexier Mikey: Uh oh.WE have a bigger problem....the orignals are waking up...and whats that sound?



Sexier Leo: WTF...


(RS)Leo: GRRRRRRRROWLLL Where are those pizzas??


Sexier Don:What the shell?*Snicker*
Sexier Mikey:That's the red Sky version of Leo?
Sexier Raph: HAHAHAHA
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Old 01-22-2006, 10:25 PM   #108
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(RS)Mikey: Hey Leo we're back and we got those pizzas
(RS) Don:Ahh crap! They found him....


(RS)Leo: Pizzas? grrrrooollllll.....


::So RS Leo had come back to us and the pizzas have finally arrived.::

Sexier Raph: hahaha thats was so lame.
Sexier:Mikey: No wonder you guys got cancelled.
SExier:heeheh..


(RS) Mikey: Yah heeh I gues it was really gay back then
(RS)Don: Hey sexy Don should we get back to the lab then?


Sexier Don:Ok.Hmm..I had an idea....


(RS)Don:You guys...BEHAVE!


::So the Dons leave back to Don's Lab. But the final showdown takes place.:::

(RS)Leo: Ok now for the final show down...Come on sexy version of me TTTTUUUURRTTLE POWER


Sexier Leo: Whatever you say Red Sky.....



Orignal Mikey: Well come on fearless leader get in there and kick some shell
Orignal Leo: I'm not getting involded yet.....


Who will win? Sexy, Red Sky or Orignal? Which Leo goes down first? And what ARE the Dons working on? Find out next time on a vry special TMNT4 EVER ep!
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Old 01-22-2006, 10:44 PM   #109
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Aggggh!!! Get it out of my head. My head! No sexier version of Splinter. Splinter is the sensei!

This is thread is sooo wrong.

And what the hell is Donnie laughing at RS Leo for? Wait a couple weeks pal!
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Old 01-22-2006, 10:49 PM   #110
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Aggggh!!! Get it out of my head. My head! No sexier version of Splinter. Splinter is the sensei!

This is thread is sooo wrong.

And what the hell is Donnie laughing at RS Leo for? Wait a couple weeks pal!
hehe Well it's a laugh huh...hehe..wait What do you mean wait a couple of weeks? Oh no..the monster Don version huh....
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Old 01-23-2006, 12:25 AM   #111
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Original and RS Leo don't even hold a candle to NT Leo... too busy whining about whether Splinter would approve.

This amuses me to no end.
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Old 01-23-2006, 10:56 AM   #112
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Original and RS Leo don't even hold a candle to NT Leo... too busy whining about whether Splinter would approve.

This amuses me to no end.
While NT Leo is all "I'm angry!" and slices Splinter up like a pizza.
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Old 01-23-2006, 12:23 PM   #113
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I know. HEheh..thats what going to make the ending so much fun.
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Old 01-23-2006, 01:00 PM   #114
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Well done TD, great story. But that Leo "Happy Ending" thing tops my Popsicle gag any day.
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Old 01-23-2006, 01:02 PM   #115
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Well done TD, great story. But that Leo "Happy Ending" thing tops my Popsicle gag any day.
hehhe it's not done yet.The ending will be funny hopefully but "happy Ending"is actually a real asian massage treatment. I found that out from a friend.
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Orignal Raph: HAHAHA I can't believe it's Red Sky Vs the sexier version of you Leo. GEt in there and start kicking some shell will ya?
Orignal Leo: I can't sensai didn't say to....


SExier Raph: Heh I never knew the formal leos where such whiney wussy pussies


(RS)Raph: That's my brother bitch


(RS)Leo: Come and get me mr. Universe


Sexier Leo: What a lame line...no winder you got cancelled


(RS) Leo: Nice move....but let's see you....beat me!


Sexy Leo: Arghhh....


Sexy Leo: Gotcha Red Sky....


Orignal MIkey: Uhh Leonardo maybe you should get in there
Orignal Raph: Yah make it quick
Orignal Leo: Are you sure? What about master Splnter.....
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Old 01-23-2006, 01:39 PM   #117
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Orignal Mikey: Like come on Leonardo.Go!
Orignal Leo: No..I better not. Master Splinter never said to..


Sexier Leo: What do you say Red Sky version of me. Do you say uncle?
(RS) Leo: Ughh...alright. I give...


Sexier Leo: Hehe good choice! Well what about you orignal version?


Orignal Leo: Uh...well....no thanks. I forfit
Orignal MIkey: Leonardo! Come on.take his ass


Sexier Leo: HEhhehe good move!


Sexier Leo: Look's like I'm #1! And even if you where to fight me my fangirls would be kicking your ass ....



(RS)Mikey:HMph half of those girls where ours first,player


Sexier MIkey:Look it's clear that Sexy Leo won. Sexy Raph won, and Sexy Mikey won.So lets call it a truce and see what our Don versons are up to.


Orignal Mikey: Uh what do you guys say?
Orignal Raph: I say we call a truce.These guys are actually willing to kill
Orignal Leo: I hope master Splinter isn't going to be mad...


Sexy Raph: Hahahha....you dumbass


:::So now with Sexy Leo, Raph, and Mikey as the winners,the question remains what are the Don's up to?::
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Old 01-23-2006, 01:57 PM   #118
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(RS)Leo: Oww my head...that sexy version of me really did a number on me


Orignal Raph: you got defeated in a few mintues...your a sorry leader


Sexy MIkey: *Chomp chomp*heheeh.


:::So Red Sky & SExier version head to Don's lab to say what's up.:::

Orignal Don: Well there here, ready to show them what we're working on....hey what is it anyways?


(RS)Don:Ya Sexier version what is it we been helping you with?


Sexier Don: Hehehe We will all see together!


(RS)Don: Hey guys glad you all made it.


Sexier Leo: Hey there Don.You still made about ealier?
Sexier Don: Uh get away from me! You don't see me getting "Happy Endings from your fan girls!So stay away from mine
Sexier Raph: Ah lighten up Don. If you knew what these fans girls do behind our backs...


Orignal Don: HEy there guys! Are you all done ..fighting with each other.You know we heard everything.
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Orignal Mikey: Look it wasn't OUR fault
Orignal Raph: Yah that basterd called Sexy Mikey started it with a game of Hide N Seek
Orignal Leo: And then the pizzas came really late


(RS)Don: Who gives a ****.



Sexier Mikey: Everyone loves a good game of Hide N Seek



Sexy Don: Hey lets get the machine started ok. Red Sky version stand over there.Orignal stand over there


Orignal Don: Ah this thing looks great Sexier version.I can't wait to see what it does
Orignal Mikey: You know dude.I havea bad feeling about this


Sexy Don: Neither can we hehehe
Sexy Raph:So what does this thing do
Sexy Mikey: I have an idea


(RS)Don: You know I wonder...
(RS) Leo: Wonder what?


(RS)Don: What that machie really does....


Sexy Don: Don't worry about it!


WHAT IS THE SECERT?......find out soon
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::: So Red Sky Don hits thr button, to get the Sexier version of Don's machine going:::

(RS)Don: Ok I activated the machine


Sexier Mikey: So what does it do?
Sexier Raph: Yah clue us in Don
Sexier Don: I got a better notion for you guys. RUN


(RS)Don:Hey where is everyone going?
(RS)Mikey: Maybe they went to get some pizza


(RS)Don: Hey wait.....according to this


(RS)Don: Oh dang.those little punks


(RS)Don: It was a trick...
(RS) Splinter: What did you guys do to piss off those turtles


(RS) Don: Nothing that I know of! Guys...what did ya do?


(RS)Leo: Well I sorta started a fight with the sexier version of myself


(RS)Mikey: Like I sorta kicked sexier Mikey'sshell in the wrong place and broke orignal MIkey's nunchucks
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