Up in the sky!

*Raven* · 10-19-2006, 05:32 PM

Right now I am working on stuff for the Ultimate Ninja Turtles and a few other projects such as this one, a liitle Superman project that is being put together on our site.

Penciled by me and colored by Tim Vogt, right now we are looking over the UTN covers and talking about how to color those.

Hope you enjoy this small preview.

Oh and before I forget we have a short film thats being put together.
Old Man Possum: The Beginining
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KwLX171Hl9s

*Mecha Cow* · 10-19-2006, 05:47 PM

You seem to have compositions down really nicely and you make good use of toning. However, your work suffers a bit from wonky proportions. I don't know if you do this already, but you should really start a picture by lightly sketching out stick figures. This will really help you get the proportions and poses right and prevent you from making mistakes in the final lines. You clearly have talent, but you need to develop your skills a little. It's hard, but practice makes perfect.

Anyway, keep it up.

*Raven* · 10-22-2006, 03:46 PM

Thanks Mecha cow, and yeah I have to agree that the proporations on the cover and parts on page one look off but I'm trying to fix that as I go.

And as far as the Ultimate ninja turtles go we will be adding tones to it now so I'll try to get a few samples up to show you how where going to do it.

*KROW* · 10-28-2006, 05:19 PM

Nice. You have exceptional attention to detail. I'm interested in the story from that cover you did, which is a good sign and is what publishers want in a comic book.

*Raven* · 11-06-2006, 02:08 AM

Thanks Krow, I tried my best to put every thing in that I could think of.

I tried to do something with the ship it self, when I was drawing it I kept thinking of how would it look if the azteks sent there kid off into space...there fore giving you the end results.

Theres still some tweaking to the coloring on these pages that need to be done (that I am just noticing now...)

*discordiatookie* · 11-10-2006, 03:30 PM

might that be your leo pic thats on the art contest pages of www.ninjaturtles.com ? (as of today - friday 10th nov)

if so, congrats!!!

Spawn Guy · 11-10-2006, 05:43 PM

Black Adam.

Kick. Ass.

*Voltron* · 11-10-2006, 06:43 PM

I really like the way you got Clark's hair, there. That's always been one of my trouble points. Really good job.

*Raven* · 11-12-2006, 01:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tookie

might that be your leo pic thats on the art contest pages of www.ninjaturtles.com ? (as of today - friday 10th nov)

if so, congrats!!!

OMG, I sent that in 3 months ago, lol I forgot all about it.

Thanks every one for the nice comments, were getting further on finishing it.

host_punktmy · 11-17-2006, 12:55 PM

Now that I have a moment's oppertunity, I'd just like to say that Superman will be up soon. This is just the first issue in what wil likely be a six issue story arc. What's Black Adam got to do with it all? We'll you will see when you read it.

10-19-2006, 05:32 PM	#1
Raven follower of Jesus Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 6,212	Up in the sky! Right now I am working on stuff for the Ultimate Ninja Turtles and a few other projects such as this one, a liitle Superman project that is being put together on our site. Penciled by me and colored by Tim Vogt, right now we are looking over the UTN covers and talking about how to color those. Hope you enjoy this small preview. Oh and before I forget we have a short film thats being put together. Old Man Possum: The Beginining http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KwLX171Hl9s __________________ TMNT Future Despair Deviant Offical Ultimate Ninja Turtles Site!

10-19-2006, 05:47 PM	#2
Mecha Cow Gorgeous and modest too Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 3,699	You seem to have compositions down really nicely and you make good use of toning. However, your work suffers a bit from wonky proportions. I don't know if you do this already, but you should really start a picture by lightly sketching out stick figures. This will really help you get the proportions and poses right and prevent you from making mistakes in the final lines. You clearly have talent, but you need to develop your skills a little. It's hard, but practice makes perfect. Anyway, keep it up. __________________

10-22-2006, 03:46 PM	#3
Raven follower of Jesus Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 6,212	Thanks Mecha cow, and yeah I have to agree that the proporations on the cover and parts on page one look off but I'm trying to fix that as I go. And as far as the Ultimate ninja turtles go we will be adding tones to it now so I'll try to get a few samples up to show you how where going to do it. __________________ TMNT Future Despair Deviant Offical Ultimate Ninja Turtles Site!

10-28-2006, 05:19 PM	#4
KROW Meat-n-Potatoes Man Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: State's Anus, NY Posts: 6,472	Nice. You have exceptional attention to detail. I'm interested in the story from that cover you did, which is a good sign and is what publishers want in a comic book. __________________ - Optimus Acid Trip - Cult of a Half-Shell - Raiden's Bitter Tongue - *I don't try to be funny; I fail at it naturally.*

11-06-2006, 02:08 AM	#5
Raven follower of Jesus Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 6,212	Thanks Krow, I tried my best to put every thing in that I could think of. I tried to do something with the ship it self, when I was drawing it I kept thinking of how would it look if the azteks sent there kid off into space...there fore giving you the end results. Theres still some tweaking to the coloring on these pages that need to be done (that I am just noticing now...) __________________ TMNT Future Despair Deviant Offical Ultimate Ninja Turtles Site!

11-10-2006, 03:30 PM	#6
discordiatookie facehugger Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Aberdeen, Scotland Posts: 2,817	might that be your leo pic thats on the art contest pages of www.ninjaturtles.com ? (as of today - friday 10th nov) if so, congrats!!! __________________ Oh Discordia! Charyou Tree! Come, Reap! Don't tell us to grow up and out of it I got my cloak and dagger in a bar room brawl You actually trying to read this tiny text? Damn, you're dedicated! This is all just for effect you know... original TMNT art collection

11-10-2006, 05:43 PM	#7
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11-10-2006, 06:43 PM	#8
Voltron Handsomest Boy in School Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: The Realm of SJW Posts: 4,642	I really like the way you got Clark's hair, there. That's always been one of my trouble points. Really good job.

11-17-2006, 12:55 PM	#10
host_punktmy Hench Mutant Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Shadow Moses Posts: 469	Now that I have a moment's oppertunity, I'd just like to say that Superman will be up soon. This is just the first issue in what wil likely be a six issue story arc. What's Black Adam got to do with it all? We'll you will see when you read it. __________________ "Eat this" www.geocities.com/kingsofpain408 This is our site