My love poem

Little_Ebony_Filly · 08-23-2002, 06:59 PM

Love
Love it's a 4 letter word.
Why is it so important?
I ask myself
Maybe because people need it bad.
They want it or
Because it feeds their soul
Or maybe because they can't live with out it?
So as I sit here and ask what is love?
Can you answer me?
Love is not something you can see
Touch or taste but you can feel it
So I sit here and say to my self
Why do I have to be in love with you?
Why do you have to hurt me the way you do?
Can you answer me?
Are you in"Love" with me?
Love maybe a 4 letter word
But it is very important to all of us.
So can you answer me this? when I ask you
What is love to you?
Some can and some can't
Some have felt it some have't
All I have to say is love is something awesome
But it can hurt you in many ways.
So please ask you are self this are you in love?
Is Love just a 4 letter to you?

tell me what u think be eays 1st time and came right off my head

popkornLT · 08-23-2002, 07:05 PM

That's really good! I like it.. right it for anyone special?? Only thing... *cough* um... *cough*.. don't mean to say anything negative or anything but... *cough*... *clears throat* .... love is 4 letters.. *gulp* but again.. really good!!

Little_Ebony_Filly · 08-23-2002, 07:14 PM

no ur right
i just caught that lol ty it is ok but that u very much no for anyone but i was thinking of my b/f and his name is 5 letters lol

Little_Ebony_Filly · 08-23-2002, 07:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by popkornLT

That's really good! I like it.. right it for anyone special?? Only thing... *cough* um... *cough*.. don't mean to say anything negative or anything but... *cough*... *clears throat* .... love is 4 letters.. *gulp* but again.. really good!!

u r sooooooooo right don't be scared it is ok any mistakes tell me plz

**azure turtle** · 08-24-2002, 01:05 AM

Aww... A nice poem, Lil' Filly! Just a little hint: you can edit your posts in case you find any mistakes with it.

Little_Ebony_Filly · 08-24-2002, 04:10 AM

i know that is what i did lol i had a 5 letter word but changed it

Tinselcat · 08-24-2002, 08:36 PM

pretty!! i likes poetry. oooooh, little filly, do you have any poetry you want me to host on my website? i'm looking for people's poetry to post, obviously. so far all i have is a few by myself, and a couple by published authors. that goes for everyone, ya hear? you write poetry? i post it!! (don't be shy...)

*Storm Wolf* · 08-24-2002, 09:16 PM

ohhh.....you can host my poem if you'd like just make sure to give me credit!

Little_Ebony_Filly · 08-26-2002, 09:54 AM

yeah if u give me credit u can but i want to see that u do ok b/c i did it by my self all on my onw

08-23-2002, 06:59 PM	#1
Little_Ebony_Filly Foot Soldier Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Florida Posts: 127	My love poem Love Love it's a 4 letter word. Why is it so important? I ask myself Maybe because people need it bad. They want it or Because it feeds their soul Or maybe because they can't live with out it? So as I sit here and ask what is love? Can you answer me? Love is not something you can see Touch or taste but you can feel it So I sit here and say to my self Why do I have to be in love with you? Why do you have to hurt me the way you do? Can you answer me? Are you in"Love" with me? Love maybe a 4 letter word But it is very important to all of us. So can you answer me this? when I ask you What is love to you? Some can and some can't Some have felt it some have't All I have to say is love is something awesome But it can hurt you in many ways. So please ask you are self this are you in love? Is Love just a 4 letter to you? tell me what u think be eays 1st time and came right off my head __________________ Use your head turn around don't drown.

08-23-2002, 07:05 PM	#2
popkornLT Random Punk Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 19	That's really good! I like it.. right it for anyone special?? Only thing... cough um... cough.. don't mean to say anything negative or anything but... cough... clears throat .... love is 4 letters.. gulp but again.. really good!! __________________ http://www.onenightsstory.com <- My music

08-23-2002, 07:14 PM	#3
Little_Ebony_Filly Foot Soldier Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Florida Posts: 127	no ur right i just caught that lol ty it is ok but that u very much no for anyone but i was thinking of my b/f and his name is 5 letters lol __________________ Use your head turn around don't drown.

08-24-2002, 01:05 AM	#5
azure turtle Mango Lovin' Mutant Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 9,453	Aww... A nice poem, Lil' Filly! Just a little hint: you can edit your posts in case you find any mistakes with it. __________________ "God, I love being a turtle!" Want to meet the only blue ninja turtle in existence? Come visit me at my Lair!

08-24-2002, 04:10 AM	#6
Little_Ebony_Filly Foot Soldier Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Florida Posts: 127	i know that is what i did lol i had a 5 letter word but changed it __________________ Use your head turn around don't drown.

08-24-2002, 08:36 PM	#7
Tinselcat Mad Scientist Join Date: May 2002 Location: uuuuh... off planet. Posts: 1,190	pretty!! i likes poetry. oooooh, little filly, do you have any poetry you want me to host on my website? i'm looking for people's poetry to post, obviously. so far all i have is a few by myself, and a couple by published authors. that goes for everyone, ya hear? you write poetry? i post it!! (don't be shy...) __________________

08-26-2002, 09:54 AM	#9
Little_Ebony_Filly Foot Soldier Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Florida Posts: 127	yeah if u give me credit u can but i want to see that u do ok b/c i did it by my self all on my onw __________________ Use your head turn around don't drown.