TMNT - Comic

IcyKali · 02-18-2013, 05:02 PM

I'm a cartoonist myself (well, kinda... I'm not paid to do it or anything), and I have to say, your art is beautiful. I wish I could see one of these pages inked and/or colored. The comments are right, your Baxter is probably the best part. I love his wings!

There's only one problem that I can see; your lettering is really difficult to read, and I think Baxter's dialogue had too many ellipses (meaning the "..." character, not the sentence structure). Otherwise, great job.

02-18-2013, 05:02 PM	#6
IcyKali Thug Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 73	I'm a cartoonist myself (well, kinda... I'm not paid to do it or anything), and I have to say, your art is beautiful. I wish I could see one of these pages inked and/or colored. The comments are right, your Baxter is probably the best part. I love his wings! There's only one problem that I can see; your lettering is really difficult to read, and I think Baxter's dialogue had too many ellipses (meaning the "..." character, not the sentence structure). Otherwise, great job.