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I know right XD
if only Donnie's crush was more like Aang's crush >:U cute and more subtle.
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A disturbing thought, but I wonder if Splinter's ever talked about romantic relationship stuff with them. |
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maybe he talked about his relationship with Tang shen with them?
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This thread is really quite funny and interesting. Personally I think the writers are riding the line nicely. I think a lot of it is just for humours sake. I laughed pretty hard at the chart episode. It's more about Donny's awkwardness then obsession.
Whenever someone puts themselves out there they would like a positive outcome, we all do subtle things to improve our chances in any situation. This is social intelligence; how behave socially to have positive outcomes. Donny was simply trying to improve his own chances due to a perceived deficiency in his own social abilities around his romantic interest, April. Then of course that episode has a theme around overthinking and how its best to be flexible. Donny using this approach with April, the same he uses for fighting as well. It's what makes him a talented scientist. The whole episode is a life lesson for Donny, a little less thinking/planning a little more being in the moment. As for the subtly issue I feel like its not this crazy thing but a lot of the anime inspired emotional styling of the show heightens it I feel. The crazy emotion graphics around there face. It's hard to show an internal emotional state in cartoon, thus this short cut is effective if not an exaggeration. I don't know. I haven't found anything too desperate going on, nothing that bothers me. We all watch this stuff through the lens of our own experiences I guess. I'm indifferent, saying that, I'd rather have the relationship be defined as purely friendship in the future with casey as Aprils romance. That way it would be less prevalent in the show as Casey and April aren't the feature characters. Also I feel like April having a romance with Donny could only lead one place... Devastating heartbreak. It might be a bit too intense for a 22 minute action cartoon made mostly for kids. I feel like the whole concept of that happening has way too many implications and is best avoided. Implications which make me sad just thinking about them. Being a mutant turtle would be very lonely, when I imagine the life of the turtles I feel their is a lot of longing, a lot of sadness. This is also what makes their family bond so amazing so strong, they are all they have in their world. I think for the show that the area of romance gets at this isolation and longing that must be present. I like the idea of exploring this facet of what it means to be a turtle but its too much, too dramatic, too real, too emotionally complex for this version of TMNT. They gotta keep it fun. That was a lot of rambling... lol |
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2) You do not need to SUBJECT US to your tirades to help you be a better writer; use a damned journal. And if you really aren't trying to convert us, then why the shell are you just repeating the same argument over and over to people who obviously don't agree? How about you stop "preparing" to write the fanfic with your incessant bitching, and just go write the damn thing instead? 3) I may be crossing the line here, but if you bring up doge, then you're damned as a writer anyway so far as I'm concerned. It is blatantly obvious that your argument has nothing to stand on but slippery slope logic, and you blame the media excessively for people doing what is in many of our natures to do. We psychoanalize the ones we love; get used to it. A chart may be creepy to you, but it is, in fact, a hyperbolic representation of the actual dilemmas men go through about how to approach a girl in a way that isn't scary to them. And as others have said, Don has matured since that point. I really want to know, how would you have done it "better"? Is there any way at all they could have had Donatello crush on April that doesn't offend you?
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if they gave April a little more voice in the whole love triangle thing and made Donnie not so focused on April, then I'd probably be cool with it. also let April interact with the other turtles a lot more please! XD When she's only shown with Donnie...it makes it seem like the writers only think the romance is important...not April herself.
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That is a much more respectable position than just "Obsession is bad; m'kay?"
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But to humour you, I'd set things up in a way where April is well established before any romantic feelings start showing. It's important to display what each half of a potential couple is like independently, and as friends, before any crushes enter the picture. This mistake was made in episode number one of TMNT 2012: Donatello is already lovestruck and nobody even knows what her name is. That is god awful writing. Donatello is an intellectual character. Writing him with a crush isn't difficult, but it isn't going to be incredibly obvious, either. His hints need to be subtle, and they need to be given an intellectual, not a physical, basis. Showing April being interested in mathematics or computers, or a teenage girl with an ambition to make good grades, would be a good step in the direction of having him develop a crush that makes sense. He would show admiration for mind, not body. A strong, self-assured girl that has a good wit would be a nice fit for 2k12 Donatello, but I'm also of the opinion that fellow geniuses fit him nicely as well [like 2k3 April]. This is the type of thing that would develop slowly for him, assuming that Donatello is even the first one to start feeling anything to begin with. April's feelings are equally as important, but in order to write the development well, adjustments to her character would also be necessary. She'd have to be given a lot more spotlight. This teen April would have worked wonderfully in centre-stage, main protagonist territory, imo, but it doesn't necessarily have to go that far for it to be relevant to show what April is like and what her life outside the turtles revolves around, because it sure as hell don't revolve around the turtles and it shouldn't. When April is aged down so she is the same age as the turtles, we're missing an opportunity to give her the relateable role, the "average kid that is probably watching the show right now" role. If it were me, I'd have spent season one displaying the characters independently and working as teams, showing their platonic dynamics with each other, then come season two if any crush was going to develop it'd happen then. And it would be slow and out of focus. Even as the crush grows, it would not be the main focus of either character involved, and it would not be the driving force behind every single interaction the two characters had, because at that point there would be more to them than "one is crushing on the other lmao", there would be an already-existent platonic dynamic that continues to grow.
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I think a lot of you are looking into this too deeply. As latmat said, the chart was more about the possibilities Don had about spending time with April and the scenarios in which it could happen. He even talked about the things he'd do if said scenario were to occur including helping her to study for a test and do her homework. Not stalking behavior to me. If he was REALLY obsessed to that point, he'd be peeking into her room at night or finding ways to get her to kiss him. None of that has happened, so I don't see it as being creepy at all.
And April isn't voicing anything because it probably doesn't bother her or she's too confused to know what to say. If it was bothering her, I'm sure she'd say something, and she kind of has in some episodes anyway. She probably finds the whole thing sweet, and she seems to be rejecting Casey more by bringing Irma along because she just doesn't like him in that way as of yet. And for the record, NK, I am a woman who likes Twilight because the story is interesting, especially the spin Meyer puts on vampires and werewolves in her world. Yeah, Edward is definitely creepy at times, but Bella calls him out on said creepiness and is even upset when she learns he's been watching her sleep. So, there you go.
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As it was mentioned Splinter and Shredder were best friends but their love for the same woman put a wedge between them. Teng Shen chose Splinter as her husband, but Oroku Saki for whatever reason could not accept it so he chose to let his jealousy consume him and he lashed out at his former friend and accused him of taking Teng Shen away from him. In their dispute over her, they lost sight of Teng Shen as a person and saw her more as a possession. It was like Teng Shen had no voice or opinion over what was going on. She was just a prize to be won. With Splinter's lesson about about teaching Donnie to like 'Falling Down' yes the main lesson was to remind Donnie he couldn't force April to accept him, and that it was her choice if she wanted to be with him. But I firmly believe underlying that lesson, Splinter was derailing Donatello from inadvertently stumbling down the same mistakes that Splinter and Shredder have made in the past. And as the triangle continues, it is likely we will see echos of Splinter's dispute with the Shredder in the ways Donnie and Casey react to each other. At this point it's easy to assume that Donnie is playing the roll of Hamato Yoshi and Casey is Shredder. And things seem to be playing out with a what if scenario of "What if Teng Shen had loved Oroku Saki more?" One fan fic I have written goes by the title of "Learn to Let her Go" In the fic, Donnie approaches Splinter and asks what he would have done if Teng Shen had chosen the Shredder as her husband? And Splinter simply answers that he would have done the honorable thing and accepted her choice. And people on FF.net have responded by telling me they hope a story in a similar vain is told in the Nick Version. There has been some moments where it has seemed Donnie knows he's more or less lost any chance of having anything beyond friendship with April. In Target: April O'Neil-When he sees April talking to Casey at the ice rink, the look on his face just screams that he knows he's lost her. In "Of Rat's and Men" April grieves for Casey when he gets dragged off into the sewers. In Wormquake: When Casey is devoured by that Krathatrogon April also clings to Donnie in grief. In both these scenario's Donnie does feel bad about what had happened to Casey. Because rival or not, he knows Casey Jones is someone important in April's life. And he would have to be a real bastard to take any pleasure in his rivals demise. Wrath of Tiger Claw, the first thing April does when she sees Casey is she runs to him in concern. Donnie doesn't say or do anything regarding this. And so it will be safe to assume that whatever the situation is with the Music Box. It was more then likely final moment where Donnie is letting April know what is in his heart regarding her, but her reaction to it he interprets as she didn't return his feelings. So his talk with her was his way of saying "I have accepted you like Casey. I'm just a mutant so I don't matter." And April kissing him was her way of saying "I haven't decided yet," with the "My Mutant" response being her way of saying "You may be a mutant, but your a mutant that matters to me." It regards to the D/A/C triangle. Both Donnie and Casey can fit in the roles of Splinter and Shredder. If Donnie is in the role of Splinter and Casey is in the role of Shredder. Then things could possibly be a what if the out come was different, what if Splinter was the jilted suitor? Or a "What is likely to happen situation" it could be the direct mirror where Casey becomes the jerk because he couldn't accept that April has chosen someone else. If Casey however is the role of Splinter, and Donnie in the role of Shredder, then it could be a this is what could have happened scenario. Which would be a where Donnie obsessiveness over April makes him the jerk but when things come to a head we realizes the person he's really hurting is April and it's only then he backs off. And then there is the "what should have happened?" Where April does voice where she stands on the situation and that she is not a prize to be won. At this time both Donnie and Casey matter to her and if one of them is gone it's like part of her dies with them. I know I could make a reference to Twilight and Bella's choice between Edward and Jacob. After all with Edward she would have immortality, but she would be essentially for all intents dead. While with Jacob it is mentioned that she would live longer then a normal mortal person and she would be able to have a relatively normal life and have children and such. With April however, her thoughts are not on what she could gain in the relationship with either boy, but rather who has her trust the most. Which makes Casey and Donnie be more comparable to Gale and Peeta from Hunger Games. I mean with Katniss, Gale represents the world she knows. She and Gale were the children of coal minors, they lost their fathers in mining accidents and Gale would become a coal minor when they grew up. So aside from having a desire to risk their freedom by seeing if they could truly escape and learn to escape the tyranny of the Capital. They feel they have a duty to help provide for their families and the people of their district which is why they never leave. Then she encounters Peeta. Peeta is a boy she sort of knows, but not well as he comes from a different life style then she does. She has no reason to trust him because they would be forced to kill each other in the arena if the other Tributes don't do that already. And when Peeta tells the Capital and the rest of the districts that he is love with her, she assumes that is just so they could get more sympathy. It's only later that she learns that his feelings are genuine and he upset that she assumed he made that up. However he later apologizes and says he was wrong to expect that she would know his feelings were real. Casey is comparable to Gale because even though April doesn't know him as well as she knows Donnie. He is a representation of everything she knows to be normal in her life. And in previous incarnations it is pretty much a given that April and Casey would end up together. Donnie however is like Peeta because is from a life style that April isn't quite as familiar with. But the more she does get to know him and his brothers, the more she is able to trust and understand them as people. Last edited by victory_angel; 06-21-2014 at 05:07 PM. |
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Two of which are Disney movies and the other this show seems to be following closely in terms of essence of story, and all are wonderful written stories that followed that notice of falling in love with someone before even knowing who they were. I really wish people would do their homework before they hit "post". |
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that's cool...but if they could just tone down that subplot a notch or three that'd be nice.
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I think April might not know what to say because if she hurts Donnie too badly, she might lose her friendship with all the turtles and Splinter. Not too mention allies that can help her. And she seems to enjoy Donnie's company, she just might not be into it that way and it would be a bigger obstacle than what some girls would face because it's basically saying, "yeah, I don't like you that way because you're a turtle." And April probably doesn't want to say that. And who knows, maybe by the end she'll be into it but she seems to be digging Casey. I'm glad it wasn't Raph and I'm also glad April wasn't the character the story centered on. And for what's it worth I'm not much of a Twilight fan (more True Blood books here) but I can see why some like it. Edward is creepy as all get out sometimes-- he is a vampire-- but Bella usually does say something when she thinks it's too far. More tolerant than me, but I'm just one girl and other girls dig guys being that into them. |
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This wouldn't even be an issue if not for Tumblr & fedora culture.
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It'd be nice to know how April feels about Don and Casey, but that's obviously asking too much.
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Just let them do what they want. It's already scripted and drawn out and whatever we say won't make them scrap everything and rewrite. Let's just watch and see what they have in store.
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that's really the main thing I want at this point.
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Thank you! I could name probably half a dozen other novels in that vein as well, and I wouldn't consider any of them "crappy writing." There's nothing wrong with a "love at first sight" scenario- it's one of the oldest romantic ideas in the world. What makes it a good or bad story is how it's written, and how the characters behave and grow through the course of the story. Donnie has grown beyond the "first sight" stage, and is now very possibly fully in love. (Personally, I'd consider it still borderline infatuation, but he has shown some signs of it being deeper than that.) Quote:
Agreed. Technically, Cinderella and Aladdin were fairy tales long before they were Disney movies, but the idea is the same. Heck, I'd go so far as to include pretty much ANY fairy tale or legend in with these. They almost always have two people fall in love without even knowing each other. As for Phantom, this version of TMNT has some very striking similarities to that situation, with Donnie in the place of Erik, of course. Which I suppose would make Casey Raoul. Except in this case, the "Phantom" isn't a homicidal recluse who is bent on killing anyone who pisses him off or torturing innocent victims by whatever bizarre means he can come up with. (Seriously- read the actual book sometime. The play's got NOTHING on the original story!! And my fave version of the story movie-wise is the Robert Englund film. It was dark and disturbing, much like the book itself.) Donnie as "Phantom" is simply a lonely, awkward boy who has feelings for the first girl he ever encounters, but is afraid to open up due to his insecurity regarding the fact that he is a mutant.
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