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Old 04-05-2007, 09:49 PM   #41
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This is good stuff, and most of it's pretty funny. Do you think you could use lighter colors for Don and Leo, though? The blue particularly hurts my eyes when I read it too long. Maybe Leo and Don?

Excellent stuff, though. Keep it up!
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Old 04-05-2007, 09:54 PM   #42
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Move form that spot and I will hurt you.



I'm just kidding, go watch TMNT again.
haha Thanks! and I did, loved it again and now I am back to finish reading...lol
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Old 04-07-2007, 11:08 AM   #43
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wow this is getting good
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Old 04-07-2007, 11:19 AM   #44
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You know what I think of them.

Keep up the good work, mate.
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Old 04-07-2007, 07:30 PM   #45
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I adore you. Seriously. You sound like Ava and I when we get going. Although I am the one who plays all the turtles. But seriously you are great.
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Old 04-07-2007, 09:41 PM   #46
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Poor Leo. Haunted by his consciousness and his concsiousness is Raph?
You know things are bad.


The color does play crazy with your eyes, but I just C&Ped to a doc file.
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Old 04-07-2007, 11:09 PM   #47
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I can deal with the colors personally but then again that could be because I use the same method for forum rp's where I play multiple characters. And since that is pretty much EVERY forum rp... yeah... I simply have trouble sticking to just one character and it is just easier for me when I have more then one to work with. Though it can get hard to balance too many at once. The tabletop TMNT game I play with Ava is probably the most challenging game I've done yet since I am playing nearly the entire cast of the old cartoon by myself.
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Old 04-08-2007, 08:11 AM   #48
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Poor Leo. Haunted by his consciousness and his concsiousness is Raph?
You know things are bad.


The color does play crazy with your eyes, but I just C&Ped to a doc file.
That was the original idea...
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Old 04-08-2007, 11:29 AM   #49
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That was the original idea...
What, the consciousness, or the C&P?
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Old 04-08-2007, 01:11 PM   #50
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Consciousnes.
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Old 04-08-2007, 03:00 PM   #51
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Gogo gadget intrigued face. (yeah, there are no intrigued smilies, so that's what you get)
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Old 04-08-2007, 03:03 PM   #52
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My eyes hurt.

These are awsome though, so I'll put up with the severe damage to my retinas.
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Old 04-08-2007, 03:04 PM   #53
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Consciousnes.
I figured it out! GO ME!
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Old 04-08-2007, 03:06 PM   #54
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Not quit. The origonal idea was that dream Raph was just that, part of Leo's imagination...but then I changed my mind...

Muhahahahahahahahahahaha....ha.
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madpiratebunny (19:27:02): nononono
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Old 04-08-2007, 03:09 PM   #55
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So quit responding to our messages and get us the next one already!
I wanna know who dream-Raph really is now.
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Old 04-08-2007, 03:13 PM   #56
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Well you'll get nothing out of me with that attitude.
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madpiratebunny (19:26:51): oh goodness, I've got an idea
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madpiratebunny (19:27:02): nononono
madpiratebunny (19:27:05): no telling
SpawnGuyThing (19:27:10): ...
SpawnGuyThing (19:27:27): But I'm the imaginery friend you always wanted
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Old 04-08-2007, 03:17 PM   #57
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Dude, dont make me beg. It aint pretty. Plus, the floor looks dirty and I'm wearing my fave jeans.
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Old 04-08-2007, 03:24 PM   #58
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:chains Spawn Guy to a desk: Alright, Spawny, get to work. You know we can't get enough....
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Old 04-08-2007, 03:27 PM   #59
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Old 04-08-2007, 03:27 PM   #60
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Chains? On a guy named Spawn?

What were you thinking?

Seriously though, it's in the inital stages, which pretty much means the next part will be finished whenever I have the time/when I feel like it. Like the last...six or so.
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madpiratebunny (19:26:51): oh goodness, I've got an idea
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madpiratebunny (19:27:02): nononono
madpiratebunny (19:27:05): no telling
SpawnGuyThing (19:27:10): ...
SpawnGuyThing (19:27:27): But I'm the imaginery friend you always wanted
SpawnGuyThing (19:27:36): Your supposed to tell me everything
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